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PostSubject: I know it's too early to post this but...   Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:59 pm

I figured you guys will want to read it right away. The reason it doesn't have a title is because titles are sometimes spoilers so we'll go into titles when I finish. This is the first part of the dragon story I was talking about.


Mist trudged on through the streets looking for something, anything, to eat. He certainly did not want to raid the trash like the other strays did. Being a dog is hard Mist thought especially right after y- oh please no. No, no, no. The cheerful lady that had just suddenly appeared was already fussing over him. He heard her say some words, but he couldn't understand them since he was a dog. She looked at his neck, and then found a piece of rope lying on the sidewalk. Mist followed the movement of her hands with his eyes as she tied a rope around his neck. Then she made a leash out of rope as well. Mist wanted to resist and struggle out more than anything in the world. But he couldn't, it was part of the law. And the law is what brought me here in the first place, Mist thought. He sighed and followed the woman after an insisting tug at his new leash. He followed the lady, unsure of what lay in store for him.

Mrs. Carroll was a plump, blond haired, woman with two daughters. She was walking back home after a hard day of work. She turned a corner and saw a brown filthy dog walking on the sidewalk. He looked hungry and seemed to need a good home, or at least a place to rest for the night. "Oh my, what's a dog like you doing out here?" Mrs. Carroll inquired. She checked his neck for a collar, but there was none. She remembered that her 5-year old daughters were begging for a puppy, and her husband had wanted a dog, too. She decided to take this dog home and then she would think about what to do with him. Even if he was filthy, she could tell behind the dirt and mud that he was a beautiful dog, almost a wolf. Of course she didn't have a leash with her, so she found a piece of rope and tied it around his neck.

Later in the night, Mrs. Carroll opens the door to her house and calls out "I'm home!" Syrah and Carmen glanced up from where they were sitting on the couch. "Hi mom! What are w- hey you have a doggy!" said Syrah excitedly. Carmen and Mr. Carroll notice the wolf-like dog Mrs. Carroll brought with her. "Now where did you get that fella?" asked Mr. Carroll. "I found him out in the streets. He looked hungry and he has no collar on his neck. That's why I had to tie a rope on him." replied Mrs. Carroll, pointing to the dog's neck. "Does this mean we get to keep him? Oh please, please, can we keep him?" begged Carmen. "Now honey," replied Mr. Carroll, "maybe he has an owner and was lost. We have to post signs saying that we found him before we're sure we can keep him. Meanwhile, we should take care of him before his owner returns. Your mother is very tired so we'll put up signs first thing in the morning, okay? Now run along and help with the dinner, will you please?" So the girls hurried off to help Mr. Carroll in the kitchen, and Mrs. Carroll went upstairs to change. Mist was just glad he could rest and know he would get food soon.


I will update as soon as I have part of the story done. Like I'm not gonna update it with every sentence, more like every chapter or something. Soo.. more details or anything?



Last edited by Rufistar on Sun Jul 22, 2012 11:38 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Spelling errors or new parts of story)
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PostSubject: Re: I know it's too early to post this but...   Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:05 pm

It's really good
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PostSubject: Re: I know it's too early to post this but...   Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:54 pm

its its its its very awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: I know it's too early to post this but...   Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:55 pm

It's cool. I wonder which names you picked for the dragons...
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PostSubject: Re: I know it's too early to post this but...   Tue Jul 24, 2012 1:33 pm

Rue wrote:
It's cool. I wonder which names you picked for the dragons...
I know she picked one of the names I suggested, which was Viserys.
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PostSubject: Re: I know it's too early to post this but...   Tue Jul 24, 2012 2:18 pm

Dog name: Mist
Girl names: Sarah and Carmen
Storm dragon: Stormborn
Sandy/Golden dragon: Viserys
Silver/water dragon: Neptune

...and this is Neptune" replied Viserys. "Wow are you really that Neptune god?" asked Carmen. Neptune snorted. "Of course not, do I look human? The greeks must have noticed me controlling part of the sea, and they developed that myth".

I choose Daenerys's names because I just liked them. And Mist and Sarah were someone else's idea (who was that?)
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PostSubject: Re: I know it's too early to post this but...   Tue Jul 24, 2012 3:58 pm

Cool story! It's quite original. By the way, Captain Howdy, is that girl in your signature Pazuzu from the exorcist?
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PostSubject: Re: I know it's too early to post this but...   Tue Jul 24, 2012 4:01 pm

~Julia wrote:
Cool story! It's quite original. By the way, Captain Howdy, is that girl in your signature Pazuzu from the exorcist?


I think it's quite obvious that the girl isn't Pazuzu, as Pazuzu's a demon....
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PostSubject: Re: I know it's too early to post this but...   Tue Jul 24, 2012 4:12 pm

Oh she is? Sorry I'm not smart in this category. Oops xP
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