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Melissa H.
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PostSubject: Ember Fahrenheit   Sun Jul 22, 2012 11:43 pm


PLEASE RATE AND CRITIQUE
my anatomy is worse than usual on this one
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 1:00 am

10/10 for epicness!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:44 am

Cute 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:57 am

9.9/10 would you mind if i did a red line?
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 5:17 am

I love it! The shading is great. I love how the ends are blue. The fire concept is very original. The eyes are so glossy and realistic.

Critique:

Maybe draw a crease on her elbow, because it looks quite flat and two dimensional. I think that she needs wider hips, because in contrast to her you know whats, it doesn't quite look to scale.
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:18 am

Er. 8.
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:28 am

8/10 you have improved so much on your art! (:
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:26 pm

Weekays wrote:
9.9/10 would you mind if i did a red line?
whats a redline?

and thanks evryone!!
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:28 pm

9/10. it is amazing but i see no fingers
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:38 pm

cuz the fire is blocking them ^^;
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:42 pm

when i red line the parts that should be fixed.. its like proofreading righting but i show you its a ttype of critque
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:54 pm

ohh!
yes please
my anatomy is worse than usual on this
STUPID ART BLOCK
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:57 pm

10/10

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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:10 pm

thanks flii!
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:34 pm

6/10

There's a lot of anatomy problems. If you want, I can redline it when I fix my tablet. c:

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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:11 pm

yeaaaa i know its WAY worse than usual
can you? PLEASE!?
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:36 pm

Critique
Her eyes seem tad too far apart and her nose is off-center. The hair is fine except the top of her head is too high.
The shoulders are too too wide for a female. Her torso seems too wide and a bit too long.
I'd make the hips a bit wider. Her legs are fine, good job on those, but her arms are too long.
Also, breasts don't work that way, my dear.
Overall 5/10
Good job.
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PostSubject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit   Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:47 pm

thanks loke
and now that i look
jesus.
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