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Dog
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PostSubject: My New Story (Sneak Peak)   Mon Jul 23, 2012 5:53 am

Hi guys!

This is the introduction/preview of my new story. The quoted paragraph is a paragraph from the actual book. I hope you guys like it!



It's about a tween angel who wishes to live in the real world, but she doesn't say Earth specifically. So she gets transported to a different world. I'm not going to go into details.

Please rate and critique!


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PostSubject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak)   Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:16 am

This is a lovely beginning. I'm curious to see how you would continue it...
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PostSubject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak)   Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:11 am

It looks interesting !I would be the first one who will reply and read!
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PostSubject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak)   Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:15 am

awesome. i would want to read it
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PostSubject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak)   Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:22 pm

Thanks guys! Your support means a lot to me. I'm glad to know that people are interested.

LOL A spoiler in a spoiler!

Spoiler:
 

If you didn't open the spoiler, let me tell you one thing. This is not another story about a beautiful mythical creature coming to earth, trying to fit in at her new high school without exposing her secret, and who eventually goes out with the popular girl's boyfriend.

I will create another topic for the first chapter, and edit it when I write more.

Thanks again guys!


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PostSubject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak)   Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:28 am

This sounds like a cool story. i can't wait to read it.
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PostSubject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak)   Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:35 am

cool story i cant wait to read the rest!
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