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Primrose
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PostSubject: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:43 pm

Its just a sketch. The first one is really bad so im not showing it to you.
Please rate:
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Donutangel♥
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:45 pm

10/10 please finish it
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:45 pm

9/10: Good start and great base! Wink
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:49 pm

What's a chibi?
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:54 pm

the eyes are a bit too high, and shes a bit too skinny
but gresat!
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 8:10 pm

Rufistar wrote:
What's a chibi?

A chibi is a cute version of something. For example:

(My avatar is the original)

Chibi Version:
 

In my world, chibi is something that has a big head and small body... Razz
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Harry
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 8:46 pm

It's a good start, just make the eyes a bit smaller and you'll have a beautiful chibi. :3
8/10

I'm a senior fantagian, yay!


Last edited by Tikaani on Wed Jul 25, 2012 8:47 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : I looked under my post.)
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 8:55 pm

Great job! I actually think the eyes are the right size; just make the head more of an oval. Like a fantagian's head. Also make the eyes lower down. Other then that: 8/10!
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Wed Jul 25, 2012 10:09 pm

oh and random chibi fact that'll help you in the future
a chibi's body should be the sixe of TW2 OR LESS chibi heads
i didnt mean to yell if thats what you think the caps are for
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Thu Jul 26, 2012 7:59 am

Critiques:

The legs are in awkward position Try making them straight.
Her head like a ball make it Oval.
She has no body curves.
Her neck and head are going to the left(By left i mean left hand).

Its good.

7/10.
Hopefully someone will give you a better critiques Smile and I know you will improve!
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:32 am

Thank you guys.
I don't know how to finish it so i won't :/
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:43 pm

I'd give it a 7/10
Maybe make the eyes and head a bit smaller.
You could also color it in and finish it off
Erase the line in the middle of the face.
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:56 pm

when making the body shape make soft strokes so its easy to erase them when you want to ad the outfit
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi   Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:25 pm

Oooooooh! This is really cute. uvu
I give it a 9/10. Since it is your 2nd chibi, it's not the best. But it's still awfully good for a second try!
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