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PostSubject: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:26 am


I really like how this one turned out, except i'm not sure what to do with the background. :c
Uh I know lots of things are wrong, but, can I only have critique on anything besides the shirt and how the legs/butt turned out? Also I need help with feet blargh. Also I would like rates! o:
Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:13 pm

Sorry for double post but I'm kind of upset on how no one replied to this. Hm also I changed my mine about critiques. I can kind of see everything wrong with it. So rates? o:
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:16 pm

Wait! YOU made that! Its rly good!
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:17 pm

Haha, I did! Thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:22 pm

Its good.
I don't like the shading that much.
7/10
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:23 pm

Hah, yeah I'm not good with shading techniques. But thank you anyway!
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:25 pm

Oh I LUV the shading xD It addds texture like its on wood or somthin
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:31 pm

Thank you a lot! uvu.
I don't really like using textures, but that may be a problem with my shading? I'm not quite sure. But again, thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:49 pm

8.5/10
It's awesome. And I really love the writing<3
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:55 pm

7.5/10
Two words: Its EPIC.
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:35 pm

Thank you a lot! C:
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:51 pm

Aah I just love how you drew the hair!

Clearly, what you need the most work on is anatomy and shading. Personally, I recommend getting a mannequin/manikin/however you spell it. I have one, and it's amazing for only ten dollars. It helps me with shading because I can just copy the shading on my mannequin, and I can make sure the pose isn't "awkward". I bet that would really help you out with full body drawings and such!

And I rate this 7-8/10
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:20 pm

oh yea! vriska? or nepeta?
im bad with this
i ratteee NINE OUTTA TEN
>D< oh jeez<--
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:49 pm

@Hop
I would buy one, but I don't really like help like that. It just makes me feel kind of bad. xD I don't know why. I just like getting critique along the way and a tutorial here and there.
Thanks though!

@Melissa
PFFT.
Yeah I'm not quite sure. I just took a Homestuck test and put random answers to get different titles, and when I got this, it looked pretty coo' and I wanted to draw it.
Thanks!
Also it's a human so.
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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:18 pm

This is amazing I love you

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PostSubject: Re: Art yay   Sat Jul 28, 2012 11:48 pm

Aw, thank. <3
I love you too.
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