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Rufistar Veteran Fantagian
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| Subject: Marcia's Adventure Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:42 pm | |
| This is a story created in a posting game. I'm posting it here so you can enjoy the story without scrolling through the game thread. - Long:
One day Marcia Overstrand went on a walk to the castle, because she wanted to throw up on the king and queen. She did that because she was sick of Zelda's cabbage sandwiches. The queen was not pleased. She told the princess to mess up Marcia Overstrand's new hairstyle. Marcia got so upset at the princess that she dumped a bucket of water on the princess's head. The princess wanted revenge so she decided to kick Marcia in the face really hard. Marcia had to be rushed to the hospital since the princess broke Marcia's ear.
When she got to the hospital the doctor fell in love with Marcia before he even began operating on her ear. So he kissed her and Marcia was surprised. The doctor then blushed and said "sorry." Marcia's ear was fixed. She was about to leave the hospital when the doctor forgot to say "I LOVE YOU!" Marcia didn't know the feelings of the doctor so she left the hospital, but not before she retrieved her cloak. Then she walked to the king and queen's castle. She handed the king and queen the medical bill for her ear. The queen got mad and kicked her out of town.
Marcia was sad. She then noticed her cloak was staring to glow and sparkle. Marcia thought, "What a strange thing for a cloak to do" Then the cloak started making weird noises because it was evaporating. Marcia was shocked. Then she turned around, and to her horror she was too busy thinking about her cloak that when she backed away, she fell onto a lake. She was the ExtraOrdinary wizard, so she did a Watershield spell. She was able to breathe underwater. Then she swam out of the lake.
But as she was getting back up, a guy carrying a massive chainsaw ran at her and started running after her, roaring and shouting threats to saw her head off if she didn't give him her purple pointy python boots. So Marcia Kicked the chainsaw guy and ran like hell for the nearest building. The chainsaw guy was very fast, so by the time Marcia got in the elevator the chainsaw-guy already ripped her dress with the chainsaw. Marcia quickly stepped into the elevator and closed the doors just in time. She cowered against the wall while her cloak began sprouting magical leaves.
Suddenly, the elevator started moving down. Marcia was confused because she was on the lowest floor. Then the elevator stopped at an unknown basement. The doors whooshed open. Marcia didn't know whether to go inside or press a button on the elevator to go back up. Then Marcia remembered the chainsaw guy. So she decided to explore the creepy basement. As soon as she stepped out, the elevator door closed and disappeared. The first thing Marcia saw was a wooden desk. The desk had a note saying "GET OUT" in blood. Then she heard the chainsaw guy coming and she quickly hid in a cardboard box in the back of the basement. Marcia saw the chainsaw-guy walking into the back of the basement. Marcia was so worried that the chainsaw-guy might catch her. But he didn't. The chainsaw guy walked out after searching a while. Marcia thought she was safe, until suddenly, skeletons leaped out from the walls!
"Now I know what the note was about", Marcia thought as she struggled to climb out the box and dash to the elevator before the skeletons came. Suddenly, the heart-struck doctor came in! He carried her out and killed the chainsaw guy with poison medicine, but then SUDDENLY the most amazing thing happened! Marcia's cloak changed to the color black. It began shooting fire at the skeletons as Marcia and the doctor began leaving the building. When they were outside they ran like heck away from the creepy building. When they got far enough, Marcia turned to the doctor, only to find out that he wasn't there. There was a note on the ground saying "Sorry, but I have decided to move to the forest because I know you don't love me." Marcia realized what she had done to the doctor and she began to cry. Not because she missed the doctor, but because she couldn't help knowing that the doctor would never be with who he really loved. She asked someone for directions to the forest. Then Marcia decided to search for the doctor.
She didn't know where to go, so she decided to go back to the hospital that he worked for. As soon as she reached the street where the hospital used to be, all she saw was tiny bits. The hospital had been demolished by the chainsaw guy, in an attempt to kill Marcia's lover. Marcia hurried back home. "Oh, wait!" She thought. The king and queen had kicked Marcia out of town. Marcia didn't know where to go until she saw a sign saying "ALL HOMELESS PEOPLE WELCOME" Marcia walked towards the sign. There was an arrow pointing to a building that looked like a hotel. "What if it's a trap?" She asked to herself. She decided to take her chances. She went inside the hotel looking building and asked for a room. Unfortunately, all the rooms were full so she walked away.
Then, she built a shelter out of HUGE boxes, and lived there. She lived on pieces of bread and fresh water. But suddenly, a rich man came over and said "Who are you?" And Marcia said "I'm just a homeless peep. Can you help me please? You look kinda rich..." The man laughed. "Sure, I'll give you some money. But first I have a favor for you. Can you teach me how to make tacos?" the man asked. Marcia said "Uh, sure. Let's go over to your place so I can show you." On the way Marcia asked "Are you sure you have the necessary ingredients? You need a corn tortilla, cheese, tomatoes, lettuce, mayo, and many more ingredients." The man looked at Marcia and said "Well yeah. So let's start." "First you get a tortilla. You lay it out and then you get some cheese and stuff like that" Marcia explained. After Marcia finished teaching the man how to make a taco, the man gave her about $10. "I never said how much money I'd give you! Thanks for teaching me!" the man said as he run away.
Marcia sighed and walked back to her box house. She decided to use the money on some food. Then she found out that the food was magical! "It can grant any wish? OMG! Okay then. I wish I was rich so I could live in a wonderful mansion and yummy food and everything." Marcia said. She went back to her home and saw a HUGE house that was all hers. She decided to make a camp fire and eat marshmallows happily. All of a sudden a wizard came up and "You are in great danger." Then the wizard disappeared. That night, she was able to sleep comfortably in her bed. A few days later, she hears a BANG! It was a TORNADO! Marcia quickly got out of bed and ran to her basement. "I don't have a basement!" she realized. So she panicked, and then she saw a gun on the floor. As the fog cleared, she could feel that someone was touching her. "Who's there?!" she yelled. She looked around and saw blood. The gun had disappeared. She saw a shadow. She took a deep breath and turned around. She found out the tornado was just strong wind. She ran as far as she could but the wind was against her. All of a sudden when she was running a wild Pikachu used thunder bolt on her. She fell to the ground, saying "W-what happened?" then she passed out (not dead just unconscious).
When she woke up she sobbed. She wasn't able to get up so she tried to crawl away. She cried and screamed but none could hear her. Finally, she remembered taking some magic food in her pocket. She took it out and made another wish. "I wish not to die in here" She closed her eyes and she had enough strength to get up. The walls from every house were crashing down and the floor was falling. There was magma bellow it. The world was shaking. It was 2 AM and she felt tired. "I mustn't give up!" She found some more magic food crumbs on the floor and wished for the magma to stop flowing. Then she felt safe enough to fall asleep again. When she was asleep she started dreaming about toddler shows.
When she woke up, she thought about the doctor: "What if he's dead?" Then she said "Never mind…" then she ran into a wall and lost her memory.
The doctor decided sulking in the forest was doing him no good. So he went out to look for Marcia. He saw her hit a wall and he ran as fast as he could to help her. When he helped her he asked "Are you ok?" Then Marcia asked "What happened?" ''It looks like you ran into a wall and lost your memory!" "Who am I? And I really ran into a wall?" "Yes, you did run into a wall. Umm....your name is Clownshoes, you live in a pineapple, and you work at Pizza Hut." "Really? That sounds like an AWESOME life! But I was wondering, who are you?" "I am your doctor." "Where did you come from?" "I was just walking in the woods." "Why where you walking in the woods? Are you really a doctor or a hobo?" "I was just looking at the trees. Now I'm going to go back to my car..." and the doctor ran away. "WAIT!" Marcia shouted after him "You're the only person I know! HELP ME!" The doctor looks back and says "Ok, here is your house." pointing to a huge home. "Ok, thanks." she said then dashes off to her "home"
Marcia looked at her home. "But it's made out of candy! Do expect me to go there when there is a witch living there to eat me?" She looks back to the doctor but he vanished. "Where did he go?" Marcia thought. "Maybe I will just take a walk." she thought. Marcia went for a walk and got her memory back! "OH NO!" she thought "That was the doctor!" She was still confused. "Was he my lover? Or was he my admirer?" Marcia decided to think about it later. Without hesitation, she walked into the candy house. The door was closed so she had to eat her way through. "Ugh, I'm SO full..." Marcia grumbled as she finally entered the house. She checked out the whole place except for the basement.
All of a sudden, a little puppy appeared, whining. Marcia was so overwhelmed by the cuteness that she didn't even notice that the puppy was red. She was about to pet the animal when the puppy said "Help me!" Marcia walked away from the puppy. "I've been poisoned!" The puppy said. Then Marcia stopped walking to help the puppy. Once Marcia approached the puppy, the dog started floating. It turned black and a ghost came out of the puppy. The puppy/ghost said, "MARCIA! IT IS I, THE CHAINSAW GUY! YOU FELL FOR MY LITTLE TRAP, BWAHAHAHAHA!" Marcia said "Uhhh, what trap is that? Getting me to die of cuteness overload?" Then the ghost reached behind his back and out appeared the doctor. Marcia gasped, "DOCTOR! Are you alright?" But all the doctor did was stare at Marcia with blank, dark eyes. The ghost said "What do you think now?" Then he killed the doctor. Marcia started to cry although she didn't know why. Did she actually have feelings for the doctor? After wiping her eyes, Marcia faced the ghost. "How could you?!" She yelled.
Then Marcia woke up. "It was all a dream?" she thought to herself. She looked around. She was still in her little box house. "I'm glad it was a dream. I almost lost th-" Marcia gasped. Where was the doctor? She didn't know why, but she knew she had to find him. She looked in the woods and did not find him. She looked everywhere else and did not find him! "Doctor! Doctor!" Marcia called out but all she recieved was silence. She had checked everywhere. Everywhere except the kingdom. Marcia wanted to search the kingdom, but she couldn't possibly go back; she was banned! "Where could he be? This world isn't that big," Marcia sighed. So then she decided to dis-obey the orders of the queen. She ventured out of the woods and made her way to the kingdom's wall. There, in front of a large gate, stood a guard. "NONE SHALL PASS!" The guard stated. "None? Explain this!" Marcia demanded. The guard still would not let her in. So Marcia decided to fall down and cry. The guard felt bad so he let her in.
Once she was in the kingdom she said "I am sorry for what I have done. Could you possibly forgive me?" The queen thought for a moment. Then she said "Yes I will forgive you if you do something for me." Marcia rolled her eyes. Wow, Marcia thought, lazy queen. The queen continued. "I need you to wash your face." Marcia did what she was told. "Now can I enter the kingdom and search for Doctor?" The queen froze. "Doctor?" she asked. "You're looking for a Doctor? I'm sorry but I banished all doctors years ago!" Marcia put down the cloth and went back to the queen. "So, you banished all doctors. Why?" The queen replied "Because they are ugly." Marcia shook her head at the queen. "You shouldn't judge by the outside. It's what's on the inside that counts." The queen turned her head sharply and glared at Marcia. "I am queen you will not tell me what to do! And for commanding me, I will get rid of you as well, but I will give you 24 hours to run! Run as far away as possible or get punished!"
So Marcia started running. In fact, she took a bike out and she said to herself "I'm a cookie so I must run, run to the bun!" When she was biking an odd girl came up and asked "What are you doing?" She replied, "Oh, you know. The usual. Biking down dangerous paths." She stared at the stranger for a while. Then the stranger said "Okay, well could I use that bike?" Marcia paused for a moment. Then she said "Sure! If you show me the way home." "Sure" the stranger said. She grabbed Marcia's hand and teleported home. Marcia was shocked. "Wow. Are you a ghost or something?" she asked. "Nope, but I am a MONSTER!!!" the stranger said. Marcia screamed and grabbed her bike. She ran from the monster-girl and she ran from the kingdom. She stopped suddenly when she saw her little box house. She hid under the box. The monster got confused and ran forward.
Then, a pokemon came up and wanted to battle the monster. But the monster said "I HAVE NO TIME FOR BATTLING!" And then the monster kicked the pokemon out of the way. The pokemon was Mew! It transformed into Pikachu and used thunder bolt on the monster. The monster died, but its spirit made its way to Marcia's little box house. Marcia heard the thuds and poked her head out to check it out, but what she got back was a facepalm from the monster. She became extremely confused. She had lost her memory for a second, but then she got it back. She walked outside, to still see raining lemons. And also she realized a black spirit looming over her. Marcia gasped. "You're that monster/stranger/girl!"
The spirit went inside her body and took over control. She had no control over her body anymore. She tried her hardest to overcome the spirit, but her hands whipped around and slapping her. She kicked and screamed. But slowly... her beautiful blue eyes turned blood red... and the spirit took over her MIND! She exploded out of the box house and started to take over. But the doctor guy was standing at TJ's pizza. The doctor didn't recognize her, so he said "I WILL NOT LET YOU TAKE OVER TJ'S!" But Marcia didn't listen to the doctor and shouted "GET OUT OF THE WAY!" She started to enter the pizza store, while breaking the glass door. "GIVE ME ALL YOU GOT!" The man said "Your total is 892.32. Will that be cash or credit?" She was so mad, she started to grow as big as the world! Then, the Mew just came over and put some awesome flashback music. It showed the doctor and her. Then, she grew smaller, her blood red eyes turned beautiful blue again, and she fainted. When Marcia came to, she wondered, what happened? But the world was white. Completely white. She was so confused. That she almost fainted again, but she saw something that made her stop fainting. It was a krabby patty! It was HUGE. Marcia was so upset about everything that had happen she had decided to not take any chance with the krabby patty. "Well, I am hungry..." Marcia mumbled. "So I guess I will eat it." So Marcia ate it. But then she dropped the krabby patty when she saw a yellow... spongey... and giggly... Spongebob! She rushed for an autograph but she discovered that Spongebob could not write. So then…
Hope you enjoyed it. This will get updated as people make up the story. If you want to continue making the story go to the story game in posting games. The story game is still going strong. Also, I am sorry if I didn't put your name in credits, it is becoming harder to search for new people. Just reply if I missed you.
Last edited by Rufistar on Sun Jul 29, 2012 3:12 pm; edited 15 times in total (Reason for editing : New story parts or new people to put in credits :P) | |
| | | Harry Ultimate Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:47 pm | |
| Ah, I remember this. It's actually pretty good. | |
| | | SammiiGoesRawrr Junior Fantagian
Posts : 55 Join date : 2012-03-16 Age : 25 Location : Somewhere.
| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:48 pm | |
| Oh my. This is just. This is really. AMAZING. ◕w◕ | |
| | | Cherry Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3690 Join date : 2012-07-26 Age : 23 Location : Shmwhere
| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:50 pm | |
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| | | mich Hero Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:57 pm | |
| What a masterpiece this has turned out to be! | |
| | | Lenka Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3929 Join date : 2012-06-17 Location : clap aloNG IF YOU FeeL THA t hapPINESS IS THE //TRUTH//
| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:58 pm | |
| Cool! I wish I had contributed! Are you going to make another one? | |
| | | Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 21 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:59 pm | |
| awesome! i wish that i could copy and past this to a real piece of paper for my own story.. | |
| | | taehyung Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089 Join date : 2011-07-15 Age : 23 Location : somewhere
| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Sat Jul 28, 2012 5:13 pm | |
| THIS IS EPIC!
PS : You forgot me ;p | |
| | | Rufistar Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3155 Join date : 2012-06-14
| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:17 pm | |
| Oh sorry, LOL, I'll put you on now - ❤luna❤ wrote:
- Cool! I wish I had contributed! Are you going to make another one?
This is still going, just visit the story game. | |
| | | cynthia Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1064 Join date : 2011-07-15 Age : 24 Location : Spudsville; 1234 Potato Lane.
| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:21 pm | |
| This is really really cool Thanks for putting your time into this, I can't believe how long the story is Also could you please add me to the list of people who created it http://www.fantageforum.com/t10492p150-the-story-game-really-funny-sometimes | |
| | | emiko Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3968 Join date : 2012-06-17 Age : 109 Location : london is in jupiter... right? QwQ
| Subject: Re: Marcia's Adventure Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:24 pm | |
| Wah you didnt put me on either.... I WANT CREDIT :l | |
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