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+7Mila Cefie Dog Weekays Pieee Roc Hijohshiki Melissa H. 11 posters |
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Melissa H.
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| Subject: Ember Fahrenheit  Sun Jul 22, 2012 11:43 pm | |
|  PLEASE RATE AND CRITIQUE my anatomy is worse than usual on this one | |
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Roc Hijohshiki
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 1:00 am | |
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Pieee
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:44 am | |
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Weekays
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Age : 21
Location : rlly
| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:57 am | |
| 9.9/10 would you mind if i did a red line? | |
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Dog
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Age : 24
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 5:17 am | |
| I love it! The shading is great. I love how the ends are blue. The fire concept is very original. The eyes are so glossy and realistic.
Critique:
Maybe draw a crease on her elbow, because it looks quite flat and two dimensional. I think that she needs wider hips, because in contrast to her you know whats, it doesn't quite look to scale. | |
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Cefie
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:18 am | |
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Mila
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:28 am | |
| 8/10 you have improved so much on your art! (: | |
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Melissa H.
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Age : 22
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:26 pm | |
| - Weekays wrote:
- 9.9/10 would you mind if i did a red line?
whats a redline? and thanks evryone!! | |
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Squirtle
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:28 pm | |
| 9/10. it is amazing but i see no fingers | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:38 pm | |
| cuz the fire is blocking them ^^; | |
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Weekays
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:42 pm | |
| when i red line the parts that should be fixed.. its like proofreading righting but i show you its a ttype of critque | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:54 pm | |
| ohh!
yes please
my anatomy is worse than usual on this
STUPID ART BLOCK | |
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Primrose
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:57 pm | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:10 pm | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:34 pm | |
| 6/10
There's a lot of anatomy problems. If you want, I can redline it when I fix my tablet. c: | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:11 pm | |
| yeaaaa i know its WAY worse than usual
can you? PLEASE!? | |
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no
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:36 pm | |
| Critique
Her eyes seem tad too far apart and her nose is off-center. The hair is fine except the top of her head is too high.
The shoulders are too too wide for a female. Her torso seems too wide and a bit too long.
I'd make the hips a bit wider. Her legs are fine, good job on those, but her arms are too long.
Also, breasts don't work that way, my dear.
Overall 5/10
Good job. | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Ember Fahrenheit Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:47 pm | |
| thanks loke
and now that i look
jesus. | |
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