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PostSubject: ~Listen to my Heartbeat~ Another Love Story   Sat May 22, 2010 10:18 pm

Chapter 1 ~
"Miyeon! Wake up! You'll be late for school!" My mother shouted from the other side of the door while banging on it.

"Ughh... 5 more minutes!" I groaned while putting the pillow on my face.

"No! Wake up right now young lady!" she shouted back.

"Fine! Jeez!" I said finally getting up out of bed.

I picked out my outfit: a black skull t-shirt, skinny jeans, and black converse.

I like to wear some tom boy-ish stuff, and not girly girl outfits.

I brought a towel from my closet and went into the bathroom.

After I was done taking a shower, I put on all of my clothes and got out.

"Hurry up dear! Breakfast is ready!" my mom called out from downstairs.

"Just a second! Almost ready!" I shouted back to her while walking into my room and closing my door.

I've decided to put on make-up before I left.

"Done..." I said to myself, got up, and picked up my black Jansport backpack.

I ran downstairs into the kitchen and ate my breakfast: Eggs and bacon with some Sunny Delight.

"Bye mom! See you after school!" I shouted as I ran out of the door and ran to school.

Chapter 2 ~
I stopped by my best friend Kristen Baker's house.

*Ding dong!*

The door opened, and a woman with a blue checkered apron answered the door.

"Oh, hello Miyeon!" Kristen's mom, Mrs. Baker, exclaimed.

"Hi Mrs. Baker! Is Kristen ready to go?" I asked her.

"Yes. Let me call her... KRISTEN! MIYEON IS HERE! TIME TO GO TO SCHOOL!" she yelled as I smiled.

She came running downstairs, her black mini skirt swaying from the breeze.

"Bye mom! See you!" she shouted as she ran out of the house. I ran after her.

"Slow down Kristen! What's up?" I called out to her.

"Nothing! I just don't wanna be late!" She shouted back while running faster.

I ran after her.

We finally made it to our high school: Cesar Chavez.

"Gosh, why is it always crowded here?" I mumbled to myself while running and dodging all of the students.

We finally made it inside of the school.

"Miyeon! Kristen! Where were you?" my friend Courtney asked us.

"Well... we were-"

"Nevermind! Did you hear the news? JACOB IS DATING DIANA!!!" she shouted in our faces.

Oh boy...

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PostSubject: Re: ~Listen to my Heartbeat~ Another Love Story   Sun May 23, 2010 4:08 am

post moree soon!!
cant wait for next chaps! ;D
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PostSubject: Re: ~Listen to my Heartbeat~ Another Love Story   Sun May 23, 2010 2:54 pm

Thanks Bluey! :]

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PostSubject: Re: ~Listen to my Heartbeat~ Another Love Story   Sun May 23, 2010 5:20 pm

Awesome story! I wanna hear more!!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Listen to my Heartbeat~ Another Love Story   Sun May 23, 2010 5:32 pm

ITS AMAZING! i cant wait for more
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PostSubject: Re: ~Listen to my Heartbeat~ Another Love Story   Sun May 23, 2010 6:06 pm

I'm gonna stop writing this now.

It seems like I'm copying too much.

I'm gonna write different stories now.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Listen to my Heartbeat~ Another Love Story   Sun May 23, 2010 6:27 pm

miyeon wrote:
I'm gonna stop writing this now.

It seems like I'm copying too much.

I'm gonna write different stories now.
NO. you are not.
Just because its a romance dosnt mean its copying the other romances.
Your story is different from all the other romances. So keep writing.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Listen to my Heartbeat~ Another Love Story   Sun May 23, 2010 6:48 pm

Kawaii Maker wrote:
miyeon wrote:
I'm gonna stop writing this now.

It seems like I'm copying too much.

I'm gonna write different stories now.
NO. you are not.
Just because its a romance dosnt mean its copying the other romances.
Your story is different from all the other romances. So keep writing.

Thanks Shine. :]

I might write more.

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