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PostSubject: LoveStruck ♥   Thu May 27, 2010 10:08 pm

Chapter 1 ♥️
*Beep! Beep!*
My alarm clock woke me up.

"Ugh..." I groaned as I rubbed my eyes and got up to the closet.

I picked out my outfit: A blue blouse, skinny jeans, and converse.

I reached into my drawer and found a lavender towel.

As I opened my bathroom door, I smelled the sweet scent of honey buns, eggs, and bacon.

"Better hurry if I wanna eat." I said closing the door and locking it.

I stepped into the shower, turned it on, and rinsed my hair.

"Shampoo, shampoo... aha! Perfect!" I said to myself as I got my Pantene shampoo bottle.

After taking a shower, I got dressed and walked back to my room.

*Marry me Juliet
You nev-* I heard my blackberry phone sing.

I quickly picked it up and read the text:

Frm: Kristen
Hey! When r u coming 2 skewl?

I texted back to Kristen:
To: Kristen
Soon, just wait.

I quickly put on my make-up, got my black Jansport backpack, and ran downstairs.

The yummy scent of breakfast filled the air.


I ran to the table finding eggs, bacon, honey buns, and orange juice waiting for me.

I ate, got my shoes on, and ran out.

"Bye Mom! See you later!" I shouted as I slammed the door and ran to school.

Chapter 2 ♥️
I ran into the school entrance finding Courtney and Kristen waiting for me.

"Finally!" Courtney said as she grabbed me by the arm and Kristen grabbed the other.

"W-w-what are you guys doing?!" I asked them squriming.

"You'll see." Kristen said now running to a table outside.

I saw Jacob, Tyler, and Johnny sitting down.

They ran towards them and shoved me onto the seat.

Kristen and Courtney pulled Johnny and Tyler away leaving Jacob and me alone.

Chapter 3 ♥️
"Umm, hi." I said to Jacob.

"H-h-hi..." he said back to me.

I could see him blushing a bit.

"So, do you wa-"

*Rrrrrring!* the school bell rang.

"Oh, well gotta go to first period." I said getting up.

I waved goodbye and left.

"Ugh..." he said as he got up and walked to first period behind me.

Soon, Tyler and Johnny ran to him.

"Did you ask?" Tyler asked.

"Yeah did you?!" Johnny also asked.

Jacob shook his head.

"Aww dude c'mon!" Tyler said pulling him to class so we won't be late.

Then Courtney and Kristen caught up with me.

"So, what'd he say?" Kristen said hanging her arm on my shoulder.

"Nothing really... he just said hi then the bell rang." I responded taking her elbow off of me.

"Really? Oh, come on! Was he that slow?" Courtney exclaimed as we walked into class.

"Uhm, yeah I guess?" I answered Courtney.

We sat near eachother as always, and Jacob, Tyler, and Johnny sat right next to us.

Chapter 4 ♥️
"Ok class!" the teacher said outloud. "Today blah blah blah."

Kristen tapped on my shoulder.

I turned towards her.


"Come to the bathroom with me."

"O-o-ok..." I said as Kristen raised her hand.

"Yes Kristen?" the teacher asked her.

"May I use the bathroom?"

The teacher nodded her head.

Kristen smiled and grabbed my hand and ran to the bathroom.

When we got to the bathroom, we waited outside instead of Kristen using the bathroom.

"Well? Are you using the bathroom or what?" I asked her trying to push her inside.

"No, just wait." she responded as we saw Jacob and Tyler coming.

Chapter 5 ♥️
"What in the world is going on?! Just tell me!" I shouted as they tried to calm me down.

Kristen winked at Tyler and pulled him back to class.

Ugh, now what?! I said in my mind.

How am I gonna say this? Jacob thought, and gulped.

"Miyeon, can I ask you something?" Jacob asked me as he took my hand and held it.

"Will you co-"

"You two! Go to class! First period is almost over!" a teacher shouted from the distance.

Jacob sighed and put my hand down.

"Well, we better get back to class." I said as I walked back.

Jacob ran after me with Tyler and Kristen behind.

We quietly walked back to class and sat down.

*Rrrrrrrring!* the bell rang and got up out of their seats and walked out of class.

I walked out of class before Kristen and Courtney, and touched my hand.

The hottest guy in school... I thought to myself until Kristen and Courtney interrupted.

"So! What'd he say this time?" Courtney asked me.

"He was gonna ask me something alright..." I said as I quickly walked to second period.

Chapter 6 ♥️
When we got to the class, the door was closed and nobody was in there.

We started knocking and tried to force open the door, but it wouldn't budge.

"Great! Now what are we gonna do?!" Kristen shouted as she punched the door.

I shrugged, then saw a teacher coming by.

I guess he saw us, so he came to us.

"What is the problem?" he asked.

"Nobody is in." somebody responded.

"Oh, really? I guess you guys have to go to lunch." he said, walking away.

Ugh... At least we don't have class today. I thought while walking with Courtney, Kritsen, Tyler, Johnny, and Jacob.

As we got to the cafeteria we just sat down quietly at a table without any food.

"Johnny, tell Tyler and Courtney to sit at a different table to leave these two alone." Kristen whispered to Johnny. He nodded and whispered the exact thing Kristen said.

They all got up and went to the table next to them.

Once again, me and Jacob were alone.

Chapter 7 ♥️
Not again...

"Miyeon, let me make this quick, ok?" he asked me.

I nodded my head and look straight at him in the eyes.

"Will yo-" again he was interrupted.

"MIYEON! COME OVER HERE FOR A LITTLE!" Sabrina called out from the other table.

"UGH!!!" I said angrily and marched over there.


"Ummm.... nevermind!" she said as she stepped back a little.

I walked back over to Jacob and said, "So, what was it you were gonna ask?"

Jacob looked kinda pale.

Wow... I wouldn't wanna mess with her.


"Um, will you co-"

*Rrrrrrrrring! Rrrrrrrrring!*

"Sorry... tell me after third period." I said walking away.

Jacob sighed, and walked to third period.

When we got there, I sat in the back of the room and Jacob sat right next to me.

"Ok, let me take attendance." he said and called out each name.





When he was all done, he said, "Jacob, will you take this to the office? I don't feel like using the computer."

Everyone giggled when he said that.

Jacob signalled me to come with him to the office.

I got up and walked with him.

He's gonna ask me again...

Chapter 8 ♥️
He walked very close to me, his hand touching mine.

Finally some peace... Jacob thought.

"Miyeon, I've always been wanting to tell you this."

"Go on..."

"Miyeon, will you... come to the dance this Friday night with me?"

That's what he's been trying to ask...

"Yes..." I said quietly.


We put the folder in the office and ran back to the class together.


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PostSubject: Re: LoveStruck ♥   Thu May 27, 2010 10:34 pm

awesome Very Happy i canttt wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: LoveStruck ♥   Thu May 27, 2010 11:14 pm

Nice! But the chapters seem short. xD
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PostSubject: Re: LoveStruck ♥   Fri May 28, 2010 6:32 am

I agree with Poke.

The chapters are short, and in every one of them, its that Jacob tries to ask you, but you get interrupted, and I felt that was gonna be the whole story until Chapter 8.

But its good ;]
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PostSubject: Re: LoveStruck ♥   Fri May 28, 2010 2:27 pm

its great, aha the chapters are short tho
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PostSubject: Re: LoveStruck ♥   Fri May 28, 2010 3:59 pm

hahaa i like itt!! keep writingg!!
and make thee chappters a bit longerr (:
its awesomee
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