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PostSubject: So did I improve?   Fri Oct 05, 2012 8:47 pm

Well I decided to make a remake of my Miku Hatsune recolor because It had 100 flaws. Blah blah the hair too soft shaded its lame blah blah

Heres the original


And now the new one


Well I'm actually nnot satisfied. I feel kinda empty for some reason. I'm thining the original was better too.

ALSO IN YOUR COMMENTS
1. I don't WANT to see "its perfect 100/10" I want real feed back and critiuqe
2. I'm ignoring any requests. I have 5 million to do so blah. Also saying you should make blah blah isn't going to work
3. Critique and rate please!

I'mma do a remake of Rin
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Fri Oct 05, 2012 8:48 pm

That looks Amazing!!! I swear I really wanna be you :] It didn't have a single flaw , don't think so unpositive you are capable to many things!
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Fri Oct 05, 2012 8:49 pm

Wrong section. Moved and infraction given. Really cracking down on this. ;A;

I think you made the hair too bright. It kinda hurts my eyes to look at it. The tie kinda just stays there, unlike in the first on it blends in and looks like is has more of a purpose, rather than to be an accesorie. The shading on the arm sleeves is amazing, though. Nice work!

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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Fri Oct 05, 2012 8:51 pm

♪Madoka_Kaname♪ wrote:
That looks Amazing!!! I swear I really wanna be you :] It didn't have a single flaw , don't think so unpositive you are capable to many things!
Thank you! I liked y old one better, the hair color looked better.
Mine now looks so fake ;w;

Len wrote:
Wrong section. Moved and infraction given. Really cracking down on this. ;A;

I think you made the hair too bright. It kinda hurts my eyes to look at it. The tie kinda just stays there, unlike in the first on it blends in and looks like is has more of a purpose, rather than to be an accesorie. The shading on the arm sleeves is amazing, though. Nice work!
Thanks for the critique. I know what to do now
Fudge I knew something was wrong, what is wrong with me. I'm such a dummy
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Fri Oct 05, 2012 8:54 pm

You did imporve!!! I can never make a fantagian have hatsune miku clothes!
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Fri Oct 05, 2012 8:55 pm

Yes yes yes yes yes!!!

Improvement indeed, lighter and the skirt is better. I think the tie is stiff or just in the wrong place. I think you did the shoes better last time too, but it's okay. I give it an 8/10. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Fri Oct 05, 2012 8:56 pm

Clockworker's Doll wrote:
♪Madoka_Kaname♪ wrote:
That looks Amazing!!! I swear I really wanna be you :] It didn't have a single flaw , don't think so unpositive you are capable to many things!
Thank you! I liked y old one better, the hair color looked better.
Mine now looks so fake ;w;

Len wrote:
Wrong section. Moved and infraction given. Really cracking down on this. ;A;

I think you made the hair too bright. It kinda hurts my eyes to look at it. The tie kinda just stays there, unlike in the first on it blends in and looks like is has more of a purpose, rather than to be an accesorie. The shading on the arm sleeves is amazing, though. Nice work!
Thanks for the critique. I know what to do now
Fudge I knew something was wrong, what is wrong with me. I'm such a dummy

I wish I can remove your infraction so -removes infraction x3-.
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:15 am

I actually like the original better. It's like the yellow skirt in fantage. o-o
Oh, boy, just noticed the hair. My eyes kind of screamed a little glancing at it. >< (sorry!)
It's too bright. D;
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Sat Oct 06, 2012 2:05 am

I actually like the details of the shirt on the older one more, it's more detailed. But the new hair accessory and sleeves I like c:
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Sat Oct 06, 2012 6:48 am

i like how the new one has brighter hair, but i think that the original one has more detail. but it is still good
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PostSubject: Re: So did I improve?   Sat Oct 06, 2012 7:27 am

well yeah i agree with jinxcat.. Very Happy and yeah to be honest i more like the original.. Very Happy
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