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Squirtle
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PostSubject: my first fantage drawing   my first fantage drawing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 06, 2012 7:09 pm

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well here it is. it is my first fantage drawing, and the fingers were so hard to draw. i did not really add any shading other than the bathing suit because it was too hard. rate and critique please
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PostSubject: Re: my first fantage drawing   my first fantage drawing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 06, 2012 7:10 pm

This looks so cute!!!!!! 9/10!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: my first fantage drawing   my first fantage drawing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 06, 2012 7:15 pm

I have to say 7/10 try shading her hair some more it might look better ortherwise super cute!
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PostSubject: Re: my first fantage drawing   my first fantage drawing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 06, 2012 7:17 pm

This is really pretty.
8/10
Its a little sloppy, the lines are a bit too shaky, you should only pick one tool, combining pencil and pen tool looks too random
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PostSubject: Re: my first fantage drawing   my first fantage drawing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 06, 2012 7:18 pm

It's a bit messy, but it's actually really cute. You have lots of potential. c:
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PostSubject: Re: my first fantage drawing   my first fantage drawing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 06, 2012 7:19 pm

Your first Fantage drawing? You did they awesomely! All I can say is:

The shoe at the bad is a bit too high.
The cheek is big on one side.

I would have suggested shading but since you already mentioned you didn't then I guess it's okay not to mention it.

I give it an 8.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: my first fantage drawing   my first fantage drawing Icon_minitimeSat Oct 06, 2012 7:26 pm

ty everyone.


on the outline of the design on the bathing suit i messed up. it just looks wrong
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