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PostSubject: I made my own vocaloid.   Thu Nov 01, 2012 7:14 pm

today I made my own vocaloid. Well not really, but I drew one that I thought of. I have not added shading yet and I need a name. can you rate and crituque? Also can you give her a good name?

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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Thu Nov 01, 2012 7:21 pm

8/10 The eyes look smushed to the face making it look weird but its really adorable.
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Thu Nov 01, 2012 7:45 pm

I kinda hate to say this but her design is way to cluttered and I don't like the color choices. Too bright.
But it's a good design.

Maybe Marissa?
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Thu Nov 01, 2012 8:24 pm

I'm not a big fan of the outfit, and her eye is really big but, this is a cute vocaloid though.
I don't have any suggestions for the name.
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Thu Nov 01, 2012 8:28 pm

The drawing is a little sloppy. I'd give it a 6 out of 10. Name suggestion: Maybe call her Kioari
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:35 am

Thanks. Soon I will get a tablet and draw better. Will it make my lines less wiggly? If it does then it would be a dream con true.



another undone version:
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:11 am

Gonna have to agree with the others. Evmen in the newer version, the colours and design is too messy. The colours clash(ex. Her shorts and belt), and her nose is facing the wrong way. When you're drawing someone from the front, the nosess should appear flat, not pointed. 5/1p

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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:21 am

I still don't like the colors. You have to he careful when you want something bright. Try muting some colors down. What I mean by that is paling and graying some colors. I don't like the wrap thingy on the shirt
Most popular vocaloids have very simple designs. They usually have one bright color, some different colors for some contrast, then monochrome.
EDIT: A tablet will not make your art better instantly. It takes time to get used to them. You have to practice. Hard. It will get less wiggly later.
Also may I make some more suggestions to you?
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:33 am

Ene wrote:
I still don't like the colors. You have to he careful when you want something bright. Try muting some colors down. What I mean by that is paling and graying some colors. I don't like the wrap thingy on the shirt
Most popular vocaloids have very simple designs. They usually have one bright color, some different colors for some contrast, then monochrome.
EDIT: A tablet will not make your art better instantly. It takes time to get used to them. You have to practice. Hard. It will get less wiggly later.
Also may I make some more suggestions to you?

Sure! On another topic I will make a join me and make the designs more simple.


EDIT: Here it is so far without lots of shading:

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what else should I take off of her? (But im not taking off her feather because she is based on a power puff girl character I made)


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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:36 am

squirtle's Halloween wrote:
Ene wrote:
I still don't like the colors. You have to he careful when you want something bright. Try muting some colors down. What I mean by that is paling and graying some colors. I don't like the wrap thingy on the shirt
Most popular vocaloids have very simple designs. They usually have one bright color, some different colors for some contrast, then monochrome.
EDIT: A tablet will not make your art better instantly. It takes time to get used to them. You have to practice. Hard. It will get less wiggly later.
Also may I make some more suggestions to you?

Sure! On another topic I will make a join me and make the designs more simple.
Eh I can't come now. I gtg to school.
But I would like to! And PM you some tips later ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:42 am

Ene wrote:
squirtle's Halloween wrote:
Ene wrote:
I still don't like the colors. You have to he careful when you want something bright. Try muting some colors down. What I mean by that is paling and graying some colors. I don't like the wrap thingy on the shirt
Most popular vocaloids have very simple designs. They usually have one bright color, some different colors for some contrast, then monochrome.
EDIT: A tablet will not make your art better instantly. It takes time to get used to them. You have to practice. Hard. It will get less wiggly later.
Also may I make some more suggestions to you?

Sure! On another topic I will make a join me and make the designs more simple.
Eh I can't come now. I gtg to school.
But I would like to! And PM you some tips later ^.^

okie thats fine. I have no school today so I will be on for a while. when you go on the computer, i hope you see my other post because I edited it
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:43 am

squirtle's Halloween wrote:
Ene wrote:
I still don't like the colors. You have to he careful when you want something bright. Try muting some colors down. What I mean by that is paling and graying some colors. I don't like the wrap thingy on the shirt
Most popular vocaloids have very simple designs. They usually have one bright color, some different colors for some contrast, then monochrome.
EDIT: A tablet will not make your art better instantly. It takes time to get used to them. You have to practice. Hard. It will get less wiggly later.
Also may I make some more suggestions to you?

Sure! On another topic I will make a join me and make the designs more simple.


EDIT: Here it is so far without lots of shading:

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what else should I take off of her? (But im not taking off her feather because she is based on a power puff girl character I made)

Try to fix the eyes, and the hair. It doesn't look like its flowing.
Make a joinMe right now. I don't have school today either.
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:57 am

I don't get why people are saying it needs improvements.
I think it's really cute :3
I really like this one you made.
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 9:32 am

Thanks kat♥Smile

Well im done improving for today
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 10:25 am

I like it Smile Maybe Tari? Or Kat?
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PostSubject: Re: I made my own vocaloid.   Fri Nov 02, 2012 10:51 am

squirtle's Halloween wrote:
Thanks kat♥Smile

Well im done improving for today

Your welcome, and for a name I would do Izzy Wink
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