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PostSubject: rose lalonde   Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:44 pm


um, yeah. i just got my tablet working again!
feel free to rate and critique. although, no critiques on the hand and shoulders as i know there are issues with them.
and i didn't take much effort into coloring, but ghjslkdghjsd i did the style i was looking for
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:53 pm

This is amazing
Just gouges.
Actually I think.tje shoulders and hands look fine. Better than anything I could di.
I think the nose is a little of and the line in the stomach looks funny
I know what it is for, just looks mildly odd.
9/10
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:01 am

Ene wrote:
This is amazing
Just gouges.
Actually I think.tje shoulders and hands look fine. Better than anything I could di.
I think the nose is a little of and the line in the stomach looks funny
I know what it is for, just looks mildly odd.
9/10
O H,,,,,,
i just realized how stUPID the stomach looked because of how i put folds into the shirt and how i shaded them uh,,,
anYWAY thank you a lot!
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:35 am

wow she looks cool i like her hair
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:01 am

That is really good what kind of tablet did you use? o.o
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:08 am

Rose lalonde more like what an actual babe

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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:32 am

Her body looks really long, and she's missing one of her eyes?
Maybe you should try sketching first in order to get the proportions down.

I do like the shading style, though! Even if it's sort of shaded in the wrong places.
And I also like that eye you did draw. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:03 am

That is super good!
My only two critiques would be the indent on her stomach? Surprised
And also her winking eye,
But over all 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:22 am

Rose, you seem to have misplaced your eye.
Rose.
Rose you find your missing globular organ right this instant
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:35 pm

wow this is nice and the shading is good! by the way, is she winking or where is the other eye?
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:52 pm

needs more swag
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:35 pm

swag wrote:
needs more swag

Thats rude.

I think its awesome, but u shaded a little in the wrong places.

And where is the othereye?

Other the that.....


AWESOME.
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:26 pm

This is really good! 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:39 pm

Nice! I like her hair! Very Happy
9/10 I can't tell if she's winking or if you left her other eye on purpose, and the stomach area looks a bit odd.
Other than that, its awesommme.
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:39 pm

mmm she looks way too long?? i have this problem too, but her torso's too big. also her legs. she's missing an eye, which was intentional, but in this case, doesn't look good. the folds are odd, i know the nose is your style but honestly it doesn't look good.
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PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Sun Nov 04, 2012 10:05 am

omg sorry about the eye i forgot to add it,,,
also i use a bamboo capture
and thanks for the critiques!!! uwu
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