Fantage Forum
Welcome to the Fantage Forum.


Fantage Cheats, Secrets, Glitches, Info & Help.
 
HomeFAQSearchMemberlistRegisterLog inUsergroups


Share | 
 

 rose lalonde

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
eden
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4612
Join date : 2011-07-20
Age : 15
Location : the trash

PostSubject: rose lalonde   Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:44 pm


um, yeah. i just got my tablet working again!
feel free to rate and critique. although, no critiques on the hand and shoulders as i know there are issues with them.
and i didn't take much effort into coloring, but ghjslkdghjsd i did the style i was looking for
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Guest
Guest



PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:53 pm

This is amazing
Just gouges.
Actually I think.tje shoulders and hands look fine. Better than anything I could di.
I think the nose is a little of and the line in the stomach looks funny
I know what it is for, just looks mildly odd.
9/10
Back to top Go down
eden
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4612
Join date : 2011-07-20
Age : 15
Location : the trash

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:01 am

Ene wrote:
This is amazing
Just gouges.
Actually I think.tje shoulders and hands look fine. Better than anything I could di.
I think the nose is a little of and the line in the stomach looks funny
I know what it is for, just looks mildly odd.
9/10
O H,,,,,,
i just realized how stUPID the stomach looked because of how i put folds into the shirt and how i shaded them uh,,,
anYWAY thank you a lot!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Pieee
Senior Fantagian


Posts : 313
Join date : 2011-12-10
Location : drowning

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:35 am

wow she looks cool i like her hair
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Silver
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4139
Join date : 2012-07-17
Age : 15
Location : In my bedroom contemplating my life choices.

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:01 am

That is really good what kind of tablet did you use? o.o
Back to top Go down
View user profile
alex
Administrator
Administrator


Posts : 23506
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 18
Location : google maps

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:08 am

Rose lalonde more like what an actual babe

_________________


tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Magdaleena
Expert Fantagian


Posts : 2261
Join date : 2010-04-26
Age : 20
Location : Somewhere in northern Europe. Probably hours ahead of you.

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:32 am

Her body looks really long, and she's missing one of her eyes?
Maybe you should try sketching first in order to get the proportions down.

I do like the shading style, though! Even if it's sort of shaded in the wrong places.
And I also like that eye you did draw. Smile
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://magdaleen-96.deviantart.com
Cherry
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 3690
Join date : 2012-07-26
Age : 16
Location : Shmwhere

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:03 am

That is super good!
My only two critiques would be the indent on her stomach? Surprised
And also her winking eye,
But over all 10/10
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://Fantage.com
oKiwiwolfo
Junior Fantagian


Posts : 60
Join date : 2012-10-12
Location : U.K

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:22 am

Rose, you seem to have misplaced your eye.
Rose.
Rose you find your missing globular organ right this instant
Back to top Go down
View user profile
FruitCake
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4126
Join date : 2011-05-24
Age : 14
Location :

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:35 pm

wow this is nice and the shading is good! by the way, is she winking or where is the other eye?
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.musicjams.forumotion.com
swag
Regular Fantagian


Posts : 196
Join date : 2010-02-28
Location : swag

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:52 pm

needs more swag
Back to top Go down
View user profile
emiko
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 3968
Join date : 2012-06-17
Age : 102
Location : london is in jupiter... right? QwQ

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:35 pm

swag wrote:
needs more swag

Thats rude.

I think its awesome, but u shaded a little in the wrong places.

And where is the othereye?

Other the that.....


AWESOME.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Misty
Legendary Fantagian


Posts : 11482
Join date : 2012-08-21
Age : 14
Location : Amestris

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:26 pm

This is really good! 9/10
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Rebel Kouha
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 3262
Join date : 2011-10-15
Age : 14
Location : home

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:39 pm

Nice! I like her hair! Very Happy
9/10 I can't tell if she's winking or if you left her other eye on purpose, and the stomach area looks a bit odd.
Other than that, its awesommme.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://leafeonon.flavors.me
Oliver
Moderator
Moderator


Posts : 4587
Join date : 2010-03-03
Age : 16
Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:39 pm

mmm she looks way too long?? i have this problem too, but her torso's too big. also her legs. she's missing an eye, which was intentional, but in this case, doesn't look good. the folds are odd, i know the nose is your style but honestly it doesn't look good.
6/10

_________________

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://sugar-icecream.deviantart.com
eden
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4612
Join date : 2011-07-20
Age : 15
Location : the trash

PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Sun Nov 04, 2012 10:05 am

omg sorry about the eye i forgot to add it,,,
also i use a bamboo capture
and thanks for the critiques!!! uwu
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: rose lalonde   Today at 6:32 am

Back to top Go down
 
rose lalonde
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» the rose game
» Kabal of the Bloodied Rose
» What colors should I buy for an Obsidian Rose army?
» My take on the Obsidian rose
» Kabal of the Obsidian Rose

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Fantage Forum :: Creations :: Artwork-
Jump to: