Trying to draw anime for the first time.. EEK.

Any tips?
I KNOW I MESSED UP THE FACE SHAPE.. but unfortunetly I was using pen.

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First of all please put this in a spoiler.

Second its good for a first anime drawing 7/10

I guess its good for first, but try to do the face shape a little more round.

The eyes should be lower set. Try drawing guidelines for the face. The eye brows are kinda thick too for a girl.
The arms and limbs look like rubber tubes or something's. Give them elbows and shape.

-I really like the eyes, but the eyebrows would be a bit better if they weren't as thick. Obviously you were using pen, so you couldn't help that, but it's something to keep in mind.
-Try making her neck a bit shorter, and she doesn't really have shoulders.

You can draw fingers and hands much better than me. Mine are usually big blobs with thumbs. Nice work

My eyebrows are about that thick, but then again I'm not a girl and I don't clip them. Try making the neck shorter and the head a little smaller in comparison with the body. But other than that, you did a good job.

thanks guys :/ I did a second drawing... what do you think..?

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I think this one is better 7.4/10

I love them actually. Just make her have elbows and ears. 8/10

these look good for a first/second try i like them

thats really good for the first anime! good job 7.5/10

The first drawing, her eyes are really high, you should lower them, also the eyebrows are pretty thick. Yet you really improved on your second drawing! 6.5/10 for the first one and 7.6/10 for the other one. c:

Remember they have bones. In the second picture, the legs are completely curved, which they shouldn't be. Arms too, remember elbows and knees (all bones and the body structure.) When focusing on extremities (legs and arms for example.) remember the lines are never curvy, since they have bones, its not free-moving like jelly, its stiff like chocolate. Then, you should try to make the chin, but not as pointy. Shading. Hair.Eyes.Bones.Skin.Guidelines. Five words. Good for first/second try. 1st: 4.6 out of ten. 2nd: 6.3 out of ten. Just follow my suggestions and see how much you'll improve. I'll be waiting.