realism

sURPRISE!!!!1!

guess what i actually finished a realistic portrait drawing for the first time ever!!!!!1!!!!!!!111!!! also she isn't supposed to look like anybody in particular don't be upset if she does

there's a few smudges on it btw but w/e just don't critique on that
& i was to lazy to color below the collarbone idrc fight me

open for critique!!!!:

also i used oil pastels to color the hair if u were wondering

dan g that is adorable i really like it

THAT IS AMAZING I CANNOT EVEN.
I love the hair

Woah. everything is so cool! I just think you should make the eyes lower, but this is really jaw dropping.

Wow that is really good. I like it.

Squirtle wrote:

Woah. everything is so cool! I just think you should make the eyes lower, but this is really jaw dropping.

personally i have to disagree with your critique. perhaps the eyes could be a little higher, but if i were to move the eyes lower it would look off...

and thank you, everyone!!!

Actually, I agree, the eyes should look lower.

This looks really realistic 9.6/10

It might just be because they're small? They look fine where they are because I lowered them on mspaint and it doesn't really look as natural??

Len wrote:

It might just be because they're small? They look fine where they are because I lowered them on mspaint and it doesn't really look as natural??

yeah they do seem small compared to the nose. haha i was trying to make her look asian??? so the nose looks flatter and i suppose that's why u guys think the eyes are too high??

but lol they're not lol

@snow, thank you very much!!!

well she doesnt look asian, sorry to tell you umu her nose is very white, same with her mouth??the eyes dont look very asian either. if it doesn't look right, though it might not be right, it does make it look odd!! if they saw that, it means it looks weird for a rreason and you have to find out why
good though 8/10

Oliver wrote:

well she doesnt look asian, sorry to tell you umu her nose is very white, same with her mouth??the eyes dont look very asian either. if it doesn't look right, though it might not be right, it does make it look odd!! if they saw that, it means it looks weird for a rreason and you have to find out why
good though 8/10

yeah i didn't rlly color the nose that much?? i think the reason it looks odd is because i shaded the nose in the wrong area???

but t hank u.

hop wrote:

Oliver wrote:

well she doesnt look asian, sorry to tell you umu her nose is very white, same with her mouth??the eyes dont look very asian either. if it doesn't look right, though it might not be right, it does make it look odd!! if they saw that, it means it looks weird for a rreason and you have to find out why
good though 8/10

yeah i didn't rlly color the nose that much?? i think the reason it looks odd is because i shaded the nose in the wrong area???

but t hank u.

i meant white as in the race hee,, she looks a little mixed to tell you the truth!! cutie. but i think the shape is a little whitey too uu definitely look at more refs and study the race ur drawin!! not in a racist way ofc just look at typical features andn mix em around as to ow u awnt yours to look stuf like that

Yeah I have to agree with Oliver, she doesn't look asian.
But its really nice. I wanna draw like that one day.

And hey i just realized she looks a little like you. No wonder why she's so pretty.

Thats really good, i love the coloring, the eyes, the everything. I agree with clockworknightmare and oliver, she dosent look asian.

Last Dark Wish wrote:

Yeah I have to agree with Oliver, she doesn't look asian.
But its really nice. I wanna draw like that one day.

And hey i just realized she looks a little like you. No wonder why she's so pretty.

than k....

and yeah sighs im pretty beginner @ this stuffs,,,

This is just. Just. just. WOW. ok ok i cannot. who could. ahh ok
This is really great
You should post this on dA if u havent already i bet yu would get Lots of faves!

thank u all very much i appreciate it a lot!! and thx for the critique swimmer!

actualyl i have a 3000% asian friends and most of them have small, but very wide noses uu

I like it but I think the shoulders looks a little large. When I draw shoulders I always think of a clothes hanger how to sides go down. They resemble shoulders to me. But other than that I like it! 8/10