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Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 3:38 pm | |
| -I removed this because I don't want my reading teacher to search it up and see I'm here. xD-
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Gabriella Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1181 Join date : 2010-04-10 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:05 pm | |
| 8/10 I think it is great. But if you intended for it to rhyme i just wanted to tell you that some of the lines don't rhyme. I am bad at poems, but i think it would be better if you added figurative language in it. You did a great job, though. | |
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Lord Voldemort Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4705 Join date : 2012-08-28 Age : 24 Location : The dark kingdom and it's shadows.
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:08 pm | |
| Way too good for my liking. It's surprisingly amazing. Better than a 16 year old (me). What has this world come to? Making intelligent people like you, bravo! | |
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Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:27 pm | |
| Thanks both of you. (Yeah, I agree with you Akina, the poem was kind of hard to make though, like finding the right phrases for it) I didn't even think it would be that good anyway. xD I basically searched up "What word rhymes with _____." and found some neat words. Any other suggestions? | |
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Lenka Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3929 Join date : 2012-06-17 Location : clap aloNG IF YOU FeeL THA t hapPINESS IS THE //TRUTH//
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:33 pm | |
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Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:42 pm | |
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Violet Junior Fantagian
Posts : 99 Join date : 2012-09-09 Age : 25 Location : United States
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:42 pm | |
| 7 out of 10 Hope this rating didn't disappoint you. | |
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Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:46 pm | |
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Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 21 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 7:16 pm | |
| It is really creative. I could never think of that! | |
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Surpris3đ Senior Fantagian
Posts : 272 Join date : 2010-12-15 Age : 24 Location : N/A
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 7:39 pm | |
| Its not bad! This is your first poem for your reading class and I think you showed your responsibility on it and its very creative. Good job! | |
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Lord Voldemort Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4705 Join date : 2012-08-28 Age : 24 Location : The dark kingdom and it's shadows.
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:13 pm | |
| Just wondering.. What's "reading class"? | |
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Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: My first poem for reading class Fri Dec 07, 2012 6:39 am | |
| - Ғaith wrote:
- Just wondering.. What's "reading class"?
Well, reading class is just where you have to read books or read anything. Not sure how to explain. Like, instead of reading book in English Art's (or language arts), we read books/poems/paragraphs/etc in reading class. (While in English class, we just work on our grammar and write a lot of essays.) My school can be complex sometimes, hehehehe. Thank you Christmas Tree and Surpris3d Did I forget you names already? o-o~ | |
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