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PostSubject: Have i improved?   Have i improved? Icon_minitimeSun Dec 09, 2012 9:52 am

i drew this fantage avater. You can critique as long as its not about the legs! Enjoy!
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PostSubject: Re: Have i improved?   Have i improved? Icon_minitimeSun Dec 09, 2012 9:54 am

OuO I think you have improved! On the right side of the waist though, it seems to be stretching down and getting thicker.
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PostSubject: Re: Have i improved?   Have i improved? Icon_minitimeSun Dec 09, 2012 9:58 am

YES OMFG YES YOU DID.
THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE THE HAIR.
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PostSubject: Re: Have i improved?   Have i improved? Icon_minitimeSun Dec 09, 2012 10:22 am

This is amazing, the shading really improved, 9/10.
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PostSubject: Re: Have i improved?   Have i improved? Icon_minitimeSun Dec 09, 2012 10:38 am

Something bothers me with the eye....

BUT I LOVE IT SO FRICKIN MUCH

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PostSubject: Re: Have i improved?   Have i improved? Icon_minitimeSun Dec 09, 2012 11:00 am

You've improved a lot since I last saw your art! Good work! ^_^

However, the shading on the hair is really random, and you pillow shaded the shirt. Pillow shading = a big no-no. The colouring is pretty messy, so if you go over the lines, just erase it (or if you do little strokes at a time push ctrl + z and it'll undo the last action you did. push ctrl + y if you want it to redo what you just undid).
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