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PostSubject: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 3:38 pm

-I removed this because I don't want my reading teacher to search it up and see I'm here. xD-



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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:05 pm

8/10 I think it is great. But if you intended for it to rhyme i just wanted to tell you that some of the lines don't rhyme. I am bad at poems, but i think it would be better if you added figurative language in it. You did a great job, though.
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:08 pm

Way too good for my liking. It's surprisingly amazing. Better than a 16 year old (me). What has this world come to? Making intelligent people like you, bravo!
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:27 pm

Thanks both of you. Surprised (Yeah, I agree with you Akina, the poem was kind of hard to make though, like finding the right phrases for it)
I didn't even think it would be that good anyway. xD
I basically searched up "What word rhymes with _____." and found some neat words.

Any other suggestions?
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:33 pm

Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven/10
I like it a lot Very Happy @Akina IT'S FREE VERSE.
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:42 pm

Ohh, thank you. :*
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:42 pm

7 out of 10
Hope this rating didn't disappoint you.
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 6:46 pm

Nah it's okay~
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 7:16 pm

It is really creative. I could never think of that!
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 7:39 pm

Its not bad! This is your first poem for your reading class and I think you showed your responsibility on it and its very creative. Good job!
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Thu Dec 06, 2012 9:13 pm

Just wondering.. What's "reading class"?
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PostSubject: Re: My first poem for reading class   Fri Dec 07, 2012 6:39 am

Ғaith wrote:
Just wondering.. What's "reading class"?
Well, reading class is just where you have to read books or read anything.
Not sure how to explain.
Like, instead of reading book in English Art's (or language arts), we read books/poems/paragraphs/etc in reading class. (While in English class, we just work on our grammar and write a lot of essays.)

My school can be complex sometimes, hehehehe.
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