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PostSubject: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSat Jun 19, 2010 5:02 pm

Spoiler:

Coming soon...


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PostSubject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSat Jun 19, 2010 5:09 pm

I like it, just not hte fact that you called her "emo"
That makes her sound like a emo wannabe.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSat Jun 19, 2010 5:22 pm

Chapter 1
Spoiler:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSat Jun 19, 2010 5:55 pm

Thats a great story, but can you put the words bigger? xD Its kinda hard to read.


And I agree with Sunny with the emo part.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSat Jun 19, 2010 10:12 pm

Awesome.
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But isnt river water fresh water?
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PostSubject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSat Jun 19, 2010 11:13 pm

Um, sea water is salt water, river water is fresh water.
Other than that, the story doesn't have shape so far, but with more chapters we'll catch up.

By the way...do you even know what emo means? It could be the way you dress, or the way you feel, or a type of music, and you don't specify that.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSun Jun 20, 2010 10:15 am

Anaira wrote:
Um, sea water is salt water, river water is fresh water.
Other than that, the story doesn't have shape so far, but with more chapters we'll catch up.

By the way...do you even know what emo means? It could be the way you dress, or the way you feel, or a type of music, and you don't specify that.

Actually Anaira, if your talking about the way you dress, its probably goth.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSun Jun 20, 2010 11:55 am

true dat
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PostSubject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT*   ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Icon_minitimeSun Jun 20, 2010 1:59 pm

Kawaii Maker wrote:
Anaira wrote:
Um, sea water is salt water, river water is fresh water.
Other than that, the story doesn't have shape so far, but with more chapters we'll catch up.

By the way...do you even know what emo means? It could be the way you dress, or the way you feel, or a type of music, and you don't specify that.

Actually Anaira, if your talking about the way you dress, its probably goth.

Not really. Go look in wikipedia.
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