| | ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* | |
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Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:02 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
Intro:
Malaya was a girl. An emo girl. Although she was emo, she loved to sing. She would sing in the woods alone, unwanted, orphaned. Her voice was beautiful, but she wouldn't sing anywhere else than the woods. Her dark hair flowed in the wind as she was singing to the creatures of the night, singing about her life. Her terrible, fearless life. But one day, when she woke up to run and unite with the forest after a long desperate illness that separated her from the forest for weeks, she found that it was going to be cut down, to die, and all of her forest creatures would die too. Malaya's only happiness in life was going to evaporate into thin air. She would not sing again if this was going to happen...
----- Coming soon...
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| | | Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:09 pm | |
| I like it, just not hte fact that you called her "emo" That makes her sound like a emo wannabe. | |
| | | Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:22 pm | |
| Chapter 1- Spoiler:
Chapter 1:The Run Away
As I ran toward my car, I hear police sirens nearing me. "Crap." I said to myself. They would have captured me earlier if I hadn't slammed the door in one of their faces. I got into the car and I speeded toward the bay. There I was running barefoot with my dark hair flowing behind me, waiting impatiently for the spray of the icy salt water to splash into it. Splash! I dived into the river and swam my way to the forest... My forest, I thought. My dark eyeliner was dripping and mascara was making me look like a racoon. Here I am! I'm at the tip of my forest... "Sssssssahhmalayaaa" I hissed to the nearest snake. "Sssssssssweeeeehhhlcummmmm haoooooommeeeeee" it hissed back. I nodded in approval as it slithered into it's home. Where were the other creatures, I wondered silently. But atleast I was home... I was back home.
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| | | McKenna Former Staff
Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27
| Subject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:55 pm | |
| Thats a great story, but can you put the words bigger? xD Its kinda hard to read.
And I agree with Sunny with the emo part. | |
| | | Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sat Jun 19, 2010 10:12 pm | |
| Awesome. :3 But isnt river water fresh water? | |
| | | Trash Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1685 Join date : 2010-01-31 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:13 pm | |
| Um, sea water is salt water, river water is fresh water. Other than that, the story doesn't have shape so far, but with more chapters we'll catch up. By the way...do you even know what emo means? It could be the way you dress, or the way you feel, or a type of music, and you don't specify that. | |
| | | Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:15 am | |
| - Anaira wrote:
- Um, sea water is salt water, river water is fresh water.
Other than that, the story doesn't have shape so far, but with more chapters we'll catch up.
By the way...do you even know what emo means? It could be the way you dress, or the way you feel, or a type of music, and you don't specify that. Actually Anaira, if your talking about the way you dress, its probably goth. | |
| | | soccer4lifeyo Regular Fantagian
Posts : 237 Join date : 2010-01-30 Age : 25 Location : Over there
| Subject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:55 am | |
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| | | Trash Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1685 Join date : 2010-01-31 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: ~Dying Woods~ A Sad/Scary story *CHAPTER 1 OUT* Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:59 pm | |
| - Kawaii Maker wrote:
- Anaira wrote:
- Um, sea water is salt water, river water is fresh water.
Other than that, the story doesn't have shape so far, but with more chapters we'll catch up.
By the way...do you even know what emo means? It could be the way you dress, or the way you feel, or a type of music, and you don't specify that. Actually Anaira, if your talking about the way you dress, its probably goth. Not really. Go look in wikipedia. | |
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