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What's gonna happen to Fantage? [Multiple Choice]
Fantage will be destroyed by Pain.
29%
 29% [ 6 ]
Fantage will stop Pain.
38%
 38% [ 8 ]
Sharp hears wrustles during training.
5%
 5% [ 1 ]
Training gets canceled.
14%
 14% [ 3 ]
Mt. Toad will get destroyed.
14%
 14% [ 3 ]
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Sharpsul99
Passionate Fantagian


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Join date : 2010-06-10
Location : Dark Village

PostSubject: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:00 pm

THE STORY RETURNS!

Hey guys! Sharp the Fantagian has returned! I will be writing more chapters of Sharp the Fantagian now! Keep enjoying my story!

NEW CHAPTERS:

Chapter 49- The Peaceful Evening
Chapter 50- Sharpsul's Ending

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Chapter 1~ The Beginning
Sharp
was a fellow Fantagian. He was wise, kind, and honest. Then one day,
something changed him. Then, he felt like a failure. But one day, he
rescued millions of Fantagians, and saved their lives for the living.
What happened to the Fantagians? What changed him? Read this story (NOT
TRUE) of the saga of this Fantagian, Sharpsul99.

I (Sharp) ran
to the lighthouse, and stopped by the lighthouse door. I took out my
rocket board, yet my favorite board, and hopped onto it.

I took out my adventurous penguin, Chilly, and put him on my board.

"I'm hungry." he said, so I fed him his favorite fish.

"OK Chilly, activate the Flying Power, so I can get to that tree over there." I said, pointing at the tree.



"Flying
Powers, Activate!" Chilly shouted. He clapped his hands together, and
put them on the board. My rocket board went into flame, and I blasted
to that tree!

"Woooooooohooooo!" I shouted, and I flew into the tree.

"Thanks Chilly!" I said, and then I lounged back on the tree.

"No problem, just make sure not to fall off the tree, or your the creature's lunch." and Chilly poofed away.



I
took out my bag of rocks I got from the beach, and I took out a small
yellow stone rock. I threw it into the sea, and my special watch said I
threw it 10 feet.

I took out a small rare red rock, but before I could throw it, I noticed.. someone was watching me.



I saw her name tag, it said "Beauty26" on her shirt.

"Why are you spying on me?" I asked Beauty. Her angry face stared at me, and I can tell I did something wrong.

"It
took you 2 minutes to realize me. But anyway, you throwing rocks will
hurt the sea animals, and when you get eaten one day, don't go crying
for help." Beauty said, she had a very angry face, I just threw ONE
rock.

What she doesn't realize is that there are millions of rocks in the ocean.

"Do
you know how many rocks are in the ocean? There are millions. These
small rocks won't hurt the animals." I said, and I threw my red rock.

"It can knock out a fish, and they can die!" she shouted, and then it was ON.

"Don't tell me what to do!" I shouted, but I accidently threw a huge yellow stone at her, and she dropped to the ground.

"Oops," I said. I stood up on the tree, and almost fell.

"I- I'm reporting you!!!" she shouted, she put my name, "Sharpsul99" on her IDFone, and reported me.

"Hey, how do you know my na-"

But she got up, and jumped into the ocean, and swam away.... she was a suspicious one...
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Chapter 2~ Continuing Progress

The next day, I woke up at 9:00 AM. I saw my window, and I saw spray paint all over my wall!
It said;

"Sharpo is a back-stabbing animal hurter"

"Are you kidding me, Beauty?" I said, picking up my towel and wiping up the spray paint.

Later,
I went downtown in my pajamas, and went into the Star Cafe for
breakfast and coffee. Your not gonna believe it, but the cafe was on
FIRE.

"AAAAH, SHARP, HELP! MY HANDS ARE ON FIRE." screamed the
cashier, and it was true. His hands were bleeding, bleeding like
leaking water.

I had no choice but to summon Chilly.

"Oh no, Summoning: Chilly!" I shouted, he popped up, and his eyes were full of scare.

"What in tarnation happened?!!" Chilly shouted, he was scared as I was.
"Listen ChilLy, I need to fly over the fire to get the towel!" I shouted, and he automatically obeyed.

"Flying
Powers, Activate!" he shouted, he clapped his hands, and put his hands
on the rocket board, I blast over the fire and got the towel.

"Switching, Surf Board!" I said, and my surf board appeared, and my rocket board vanished.

It made a very big wave, and it was so big, the Star Cafe people blew outside, but the cashier.

"The fire is gone, but my hands are black." said the cashier, and he was hurting a little bit.

"AAAAAH" shouted Lori9931,
"EEEEEEEEK" said Sj224 flying out the window
"HOLY
FISHSTICKS" said Ghost and he blasted 44 miles out of the door and
dragged until He reached the end of the creature world.



And there it was, empty all but the cashier left.

"Thank you Sharp!" he said, and he hugged me and almost suffocated.

I dragged out of that nightmare shop, and forgot my breakfast. I helped SJ224 and Lorena, and I helped them up.

"Be careful girls," I said, and they got up and walked to the beach.

"Thanks Sharp!" they said, and vanished into the beach.

Later that day, I walked to Mt Fantage, finding an interesting Fantage
creature called the Yeti. But I couldn't believe who I ran into when I
popped up there:



It was Beauty, I couldn't believe it.



She started to ask me questions, and I WAS the one who deserved to ask the questions.

"Hey, you spray painted my wall!" I shouted at Beauty.

"Did not!" she said, I could not believe she was denying it.

"Really? I see spray paint in your pocket!" and it was spilled.

"Fine, you caught me, bu-"

"And you probably set the Star Cafe on fire!!!" I said, but she gave me a very scared eye.

"Bea-beauty?"

But, she disappeared, and all of a sudden, a ghost came by. It punched me so hard, I went flying across Mt Fantage.

.
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Chapter 3~ The Breakdown


I
stopped near the Comet & Co. My arm was all bloody from the
draggings. I looked up, with my eyes in hate. But, before I can yell
out something, I couldn't believe my eyes.



It was a GHOST. Talking to me.

"What the?!!" I shouted, and then all of a sudden, there was a huge wall behind me.

"AAAAH" I shouted, and the wall collapsed, and I ran for my life.

"You will find me again." The ghost said, and it gave me a final blow I flew 500 miles around Fantage

"WA-WA-WAAAA!!!" I shouted, while I went flying.

"Holy smokes!" Canada said, running for his life.

"Look out!" Sameer said.

"A tornado!" Andrew shouted.

It wasn't even a tornado? It was a Human Being!

When I flied through the beach, the ghost caught up to me. It was faster then wind!

"I repeat, you will see me again." it said.

"UGH!" YOU'LL PAY!" I shouted.

Then, the ghost uppercutted me into the sky. And I was stunned.

Once I reached the sky, I coughed blood.

"*hack*"

I had to summon my dragon, Ranger. Ranger helped with injuries, and serious damages.

"Summoning: Ranger!"

Ranger popped up in the sky, and fell with me.

"What the fishsticks?! Sharp what happened?!" Ranger said, putting his hands in the air during the fall.

"Th-this GHOST it blasted me into the sky! Help!"

He automatically obeyed, and used his special rope power.

"Fire Laser!"
The
fire laser did not give damage to partners. I grabbed onto it, and held
on for my sake life. And then when the ground came, I let go, and I
jumped onto Ranger's back.

Then, we landed.

"Thanks Ranger, you saved me." I said, and fed him his fire crackers.

"Be safe." he said, and he poofed.

It wasn't my fault, was it?"

Later, I went home. I had to change out of these clothes. I was in them since yesterday.



I
put on my shirt that was unbuttoned. And my folded up jeans. I liked my
hair like that all the time, and with my special crown on. I put on my
preppy pencil board. Then, I went to clean up the blood that was on my
chin, from earlier.

I went to the mirror, and made sure I cleaned up the blood. Then, I had to see if my hair was perfect. I liked to look stylish.

But, all of a sudden, something freaky happened.

"DESIRE YOUR SHADOW!!!" and it popped out of the window. It was slimy and green.

"What the heck?!" I said, and it grabbed my neck. And pulled me in.
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Chapter 4~ Mysteries
I went through the mirror, with blood all over my chin.

I rushed through Fantage, in that weird person's arm. I looked up while the wind was blowing, and it was a different ghost!

"Who-who are you..?!" I shouted, trying to jump off.

"You'll see.." it said.

We finally came across this mountain. We totally were not in Fantage anymore. The mountain was called "Two Shadows".

"Two Shad-"

I got interrupted. The ghost spoke when we reached the cave entrance.

"You are going to know the real truth.." he said.

"Huh?!-"

And all of a sudden, I saw a huge fire dragon. And it iverted.

"Wha--, Whoa, whoa, whoa!! Stop! It burns!! AAAAAHHH-"

I shouted in pain, and all of a sudden, I landed in a black room.



Then, the REAL ghost came into the room. And suddenly, I was still.

"Wha-wha, I can barely breathe. What's going on?!! Tell me!!!!!" I shouted, and then. The room got darker.

"I have to talk to you. Sharpsul Lacario;", the ghost said.

The ghost clapped his hands together, and a wind rushed the room.



"Ah you again!" I shouted, cuz I knew it was invisable, and even in the dark, he was invisable.

Parts of his body were showing. And then all of a sudden. I choked.

"Are you ready? Fate. Truth." the ghost said.

"Hu-huh?!!" I said, but it was too late.



The Art Of Ivert Pain. I dropped to the ground. And he was ready.
______

Chapter 5~ Truth & Fate


I coughed blood, and the ghost put his hands up and spoke.



I screamed blody murder and shouted at him so loud, he flew back a little bit.

"You have to stop!!!" I shouted.

Then, he put a misty feeling through me.

"Hmph" he said. Then, he laughed.

"HAHAHA" he shouted.



I screamed, then suddenly, I saw blood floating in the middle of the room.

I couldn't even read it. All I noticed was that the first letter was a "T".

He started to speak.

"You noticed you received the cold shoulder lately. A lot of people hate you. You just don't notice it."

I was stunned. What was he talking about?

"Hu-huh?" I said.

"I didn't jump at a random topic, Sharpsul. I received word from certain people. Even BEAUTY said so."

"But.. how?!" I shouted. I jumped up and tried to punch the words out of him. But he pushed me back.

"DR-ATS!" I shouted. I had blood leaking from my chin.

"Anyways, Beauty pretended she didn't know you. The only reason she did pretend was to play along" he said.

Thats when my eyes were full of fate.

Fate.

Just fate.

I put my hands slowly up to my face. Covered in fate.

"Your full of lies." I said.

"If I'm lying, you would be dead by a crowd." he said.

"STOP LYING!!!" I shouted. I lost it. Completly. I coughed more blood, and had blood leaking from my chin.

"If I'm lying, YOU WOULDN'T BE ALIVE!!!" he shouted. Then I jumped with fear.

"Ugh," I said. And I started to calm.

"Everyone
hates you because you betrayed them. You always backstabbed them, and
the whole world of Fantage wanted revenge on you."

I just stood there, the fate never fled.

I was on my knees. Blood leaking from my chin. Big fate eyes.

Truth & Fate.



I just said "Yes.", then I was stunned.

Then the ghost left, leaving me behind. I was frozen.

Frozen.

Stunned.

Full of FATE.

At the forest, a princess and the daughter was looking for a orb.



Then something major happened.



The daughter screamed. The princess screamed as well. Then, they got sucked in.

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Chapter 6~ Dark Shadows

The girls vanished because their were spies coming near the forest, but how did they suddenly vanish?

Then something so shocking happened. The shadows... were....
REVEALED.



They laughed and gave each other high-fives.

"Hahaha" said the first shadow.

"This was fun," said the second shadow.

I was still in the cave, and it wasn't black anymore.

I was frozen. I didn't budge a bit.



"I can't believe it..." I said. I dropped to the floor.

Crying.

Pulling my hair. Experiencing that Pain...

"Life is a matter of hate..." I said, with my head on the floor. A tear splashed onto the rug.

Just then, I heard noises... I picked my head up, and wiped my tears.

BOOM.

It grew louder.. then....

EXPLOSION.

Two girls popped into the room... wait...

Princess Strawberry and the daughter, Pinkys?!!



Then, we all screamed for God's sake.



"I,
I, DON'T UNDERSTAND!!!" I said, then, I felt a blur. I heard
bloody-murder screaming, and I heard a big pumping echo, and my head
dropped to the rug.



"SHARP?!" shouted Straw.

"WHAT THE?!" Pinkys shouted.

Then.. we all felt a shock in our stomachs.. and an ivert popped up. For bloody murder, we screamed.

I screamed until blood coughed up. I was living a deathly nightmare.



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Chapter 7~ Confrence

I finally stopped screaming. I took a deep breath, and got up.

"You all Fantagians hate me." I said, I was charging at the princess and the daughter.

"Huh?!" Pinkys said, and she grabbed Straw and they both jumped back.

"You heard me." I said.

"A
ghost spoke to me, and he said that he was holding a secret in Fantage
that everyone hated me, because I made betrayal." I said.

OF COURSE, they acted like it wasn't true, but I saw a smirk on the princess's face.

"Nah," the princess said, but then I noticed Pinkys covered her mouth.

That's when I went crazy.

"STOP LYING!!!" I shouted, and leftover blood came out of my mouth.

Then, they vanished.....

Vanished...?

Just... left?

"You little.." I said.. then I just let it go.

I walked out of the cave, and out of the Two Shadows mountain.

I wobbled back to Fantage, and to my house.

I got changed, since I was in these clothes for 3 days.



I hopped onto my bed, I looked at the ceiling.

I had tears rolling down my face.

Tears of hate.

It makes my body heat up.

Then, I felt something squeeze my neck... hard.

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Chapter 8~ Experiencing Pain

I woke up the NEXT MORNING. When I woke up I was covered in WATER!



I could not believe it. I had to get on a new outfit, and I was so angry.

I walked around Fantage with my head down the whole time. In just one week, my whole life was ruined.

I just found out everyone hates me.

"I wonder what's going on." I said dusting off my shirt.

I walked to the Lighthouse, and of course, I saw BEAUTY there.



And so was the princess...



"Oh Hey Straw," I said, completely ignoring Beauty.

"No hi to me?!" Beauty shouted, shoving me.

"Hey, don't push!" I said, pushing her back.

Then, we started fighting, until Straw came in to break it up.

"Stop it you two!" she shouted. Then, she grabbed Beauty.

"Moron," I said to Beauty.

"Jerkaholic!" she said louder.

"Lol, no such word." I said, flicking a pebble at her.

"Ow! Gah!".

She marched away and put her back against the lighthouse.

"So anyway, why you here?" Straw asked, and she took out a Hershey bar.

"I just wanna relax, and not stress." I said, sitting on the sand.

"So about that ghost yesterday-"

Then, my eyes grew wide. Again, full of fate.

Then, I had a flashback.

""

Then, I felt tears run down my eyes.



I had a heat up in my body, hatred feeling.



I notice Beauty left not even a minute ago.



"Cym..?" I said, but then I just ignored both of them.. and took off.

I ran to Mt. Fantage, and I noticed Beauty was there. Cymidei followed me to the mountains.
Straw didn't keep up however.



Then, I heard screams.



"I must.." I said..

"Don't go." said Cymi.

"Yeah!" said Beauty.

Wait, Beauty is caring??

I just dashed into the air, and vanished.

.

________

Chapter 9~ A New Mission

I had my adventure pack on my back, and I had my little creature scroll in it. I had no clue where I was going.

"I wonder what Cymidei and Beauty is up to." I said with a long sigh.


I walked miles, and then I ended up in the woods.

"No sight of Fantage," I said. I sat there in the woods, and got some big logs from near the trees.

I got a match, and I lit up the wood.

"Sunset," I said.

Just like Fantage..


It was 8:00 PM (EST), and it was getting dark.

"I can't stay here all night." I said, and I packed everything up, and walked for the enxt 10 miles.


At 10:00 PM, I found a house.

I dropped to the floor, in relief.

"I'm freeeeee-ee." I said, with my head on the ground.

I got up, and it was a wood house. But it was like the grotto on Fantage, I could tell.



"What the heck," I said. I went in.

But, it looked JUST LIKE the Two Shadows cave!



I was scared. I saw those weird things come up again. Of course, I could only read the first letter, "T".


"What's going on?!" I shouted in fear. Then, something was strange.

Was it an earthquake?

NO. I WAS HANGING LIKE A BAT.



"Art of Ivert Pain?!!" I screamed, because it looked and FELT like it!!!

I could actually read the letters. It said:

"True Blood."

"TRUE BLOOD?!" I screamed in horror. I fell to the ground.

It was pitch black.

I was shaking in fear. It was dark.

"Maybe I can play dead." I whispered.

Yeah, that's a good idea.

I closed my eyes...

Then... I dozed off.


It was midnight when I woke up. I wasn't in the weird cabin.

I was in..... SPACE.

But when I was in space, I saw a women..

What was going on?



"Is it an alien?" I said... in complete horror.

Silence....
_________

Chapter 10~ Adventurous Tours

"Wha-what's going on?" I said, in complete fright.

"I am a space exploror, my name is Kim." she said.

"Oh, hello there." I said.

"Do you wanna know a secret?" she said smiling.

I wonder what secret she was talking about.

"Sure," I said, smiling back at her.

She gave me a paper, that said, "Adventurous Tours."

"Follow me." she said.

I followed, but I still felt fear...


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Chapter 11~ Training Zone

It was quiet... TOO QUIET...

I followed Kim and I looked at this "Adventurous Tours" thing.

It said something about powers.. vampires..

Wait, what the heck?

We made it to a desert called "Wind Brothers". It was a very sandy desert for an area like this.

"So was this named after two brothers that had the last name, Wind?" I asked Kim, following her to the end of the desert.

"Yup." she said, but..

Why was she bleeding? Blood leaked from her chin.. very strange.

"You okay?" I asked her.

"Uh-yes. Yes, I'm OK." she said, but blood leaked from everywhere now.

"WHOA, YOUR NOT OK!" I shouted, backing up.

She tried to punch me, but then she missed.

"I shall train you to fight Pain!" she said, then, she covered her mouth.

That's what questioned me. Was the shadows...

Pain....?

"Who's Pain?!" I said, throwing bullets at her.

"OUCH!" she screamed, then she dropped.

"Pain is a god who is aiming to kill you." she said.

I went crazy again.

I suddenly disappeared, and came back.

Quiet... and Kim was gone.

And.. I was CONTROLLED. My clothes changed!



Then, I started coughing blood. I dropped my paper, and put my head to the ground.



I suddenly went to an empty room... and I lost it completely.



All of a sudden, POOF. Gone again..

I was in a bush.

A BUSH.



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Chapter 12~ Pain In The Dark



I ran away from this bush. I was covered in dorns and all that.

"This isn't how it used to be.." I said, trying to get the fright out of my brain.

It went dark again. Thats when I lost it.


"Why me?!!" I screamed in terror.

Then, something touched my arm. No..

SOMEONE.

That person was breathing hard. I had drool coming down my neck. I punched them.

I heard a loud, "AARGHH!".

I turned around, and it wasn't dark anymore.

In my horror....

IT WAS THE SHADOW.

"You little!!!" I screamed, and through him onto the ground.

"GRRRARRRAH!!!"

I felt a strong power within me.... it was starting to go all over me. My teeth turned sharp, and I felt a cold chill of blood.

I punched the shadow until he coughed globs of blood.

Right in the stomach, fast movement, hard punches.

"GRAAAH!"

"GAAAH!"

"GRAAH!"


10 minutes later, I got tired, there was blood on me, and the shadow, he had blood on his chin, clothes, and his hands.

He wasn't invisable this time. He was caught right in the act of visibility.



"I'm Pain.." he said, with blood all over him.

"WHAT?!!" I screamed, punching him in the arm.

"*GAK*. I shall kill you. Then hunt down your secret powers." he said, and he took out this sword, that looked like a najato.

BUT, it WAS a najato!

It got me in the arm, I gaked blood, but it didn't hurt as much.

"*GAKK*, I popped up the wrong time." he said, and he kicked me all the way to the creature arena.

I was in FANTAGE.



"Until the next." he said, and he vanished.

I was alone in the twilight.

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Chapter 13~ Twilight



I was in the lonely twilight. I had nothing to do but sit there.

I wanted to cry.

All of a sudden, I heard a name call me.

"Come here!" it said.

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Chapter 14- Chuko the Great Sage

"Come here lad, come here lad!" the same voice said again.

I started to worry, wondering what that whisper was.

"Can't you see me?" the same voice said again.

Finally, I saw a little frog hop near me.

"Don't cry, lad! What's your name?" the frog said being friendly.

"Sh-Sharpsul, but my friends call me Sharp.." I said, wiping my tears.

"Aaah, wonderful name!" the frog said. "My name is Chuko, I believe you know about Pain?", Chuko asked.

"Yeah... what do you know about Pain?" I asked, letting Chuko hop into my hands.

"He's a man who is a master behind 6 shadows. There are clones of him all around the world, looking for you." Chuko said, looking down a my hand.

I stood up, with my eyes getting big, getting scared.

"Why do they want me?!!" I screamed, getting so angry, my whole face turned red.

"It's because of your power. The Chigago Wolf." Chuko said.

"How'd you know about my power?" I asked Chuko, trying to be calm.

"Never mind that, Sharpie-Boy. I want to train you so you can prepare to fight Pain."

I had a long pause, then I finally spoke.



"Yes. The Pain has caused lots of destruction for you." he said.


Destruction...

I had mad eyes, then my teeth got sharp, then my whole face was mad.

"Go change... Sharpie-Boy." Chuko said.



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Chapter 15- Fighting the Pain Master

Back at Fantage

The air was stiff, everything was calm.

Way too calm.

"Sheina, we're heading out to Fantage." said a voice..

An unexpected voice, a voice that wasn't expected to come to Fantage.

"Be careful Pain. Fantage has one heck of an army." Sheina said, giving Pain the thumbs up.

"Nothing can stop the Pain." Pain said, gathering his entire Pain crew.

What's going to happen?

Back at the Creature Arena.



I was ready to start training. Chuko hopped over to me. He handed me a chain. It didn't look like a chain you'd see in shops.

"This is the Toad Mountain chain. Once you wear it on your neck, you will access to where we are going to train, Toad Mountain, also known as Mt. Toad." Chuko said, smiling at me.

I put on the chain, then strong wing immediately came.

"Sage Art: Mt Toad Transporation!"

Cloud Village

Pain dashed through the air, letting their robes blow through the air. They all stayed in a row group.

It was 70 minutes later when they landed near the Fantage forest.

"Traps, eh?" the main Pain said.
"What do we do?" said Shinna Pain, looking at Pain.

"OK. Shinna and Nurado Pain are gonna bomb the traps. Me and Rinda Pain are gonna blow the top trap. Then, Sasadi and Raonu Pain will cover the village with smoke bombs." said Pain.

Everybody got in position.

Toad Mountain



"I recognize this place..." I said, looking around.

"We'll start by you sitting in the middle. The sun energy will blend into body nature energy. Once your very focused, you'll feel wind rush through your body. After that, I will explain the next directions." Chuko said, telling me all in instructions.

I sat in the sand, the middle. I started to get a sun burn, and I focused. I closed my eyes, focusing power. I felt cold wind rush through me, but my eyes got lumpy, my feet got lumpy, my body was transforming!

"AAAAAH!!" I screamed, totally losing focus.

Chuko whacked me. I transformed into a human again.

"You will have to get use to that. Once you focus, your body changes to get all it's energy." Chuko said.

I sat down. I focused, closed my eyes. I took a deep breath, and the energy of the sun warmed up my body. Cold wind rushed through. I transformed, but I tried hard to focus... focus.. focus...

"Sharpie-Boy's hair is moving in the wind, and his body is receiving the energy! His bones will get stronger!" Chuko said, while I was focusing.

"But remember... this isn't easy training. There are 2 more steps to this training, and you'll be strong in no time." Chuko said.
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Chapter 16- Fantage Invasion

Back at Fantage

As the cold blooded minds took over Fantage, also known as, Pain, successfully destroyed the traps.

It was time..... the hunt for Sharpsul Lacario.

Pain flowed through the sky, and then....

they landed on the ground...

the ground that didn't have the right feet.

The entire Pain group had spread out around Fantage, as the plan.

Main Pain was Downtown.

It was busy.




Pain grabbed someone random, and pulled them into his face.

"Where is Sharpsul Lacario?" asked Pain.

"Whaaa..?" said the girl in Pain's hands.

"Where is he, if you do not talk, it is the end for you." Pain said.

"I'm not telling!"

Pain slaughtered the girl with his najato, and she collapsed.

All around Fantage, people got slauthered for not telling where Sharp is. Nurado and Main Pain did most of the killing. Many people lost their brains and died.

Back at Mt. Toad

I was still focusing. Then, Chuko finally said "stand up lad".

For an old frog, he knows what he's doing!

I suddenly felt this weird energy flow through me, my mind woke up. I suddenly had orange lines all over my arm.

"Perfect! Now you're in Sage Mode!"

"Sage Mode?" I asked.

"Yes, it's the power that will help you defeat Pain!" he said.

I actually felt happy!

"Now, you only have 10 minutes with Sage Mode! It's time for the next step....."

"Step Two, Reverse Power!"
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Chapter 17- Step Two, Reverse Power

Mt. Toad

"Reverse Power... it really does sound hard." I said, getting a breath.

"But it will get easy, once your body isn't moving." Chuko said, excitingly.

"That's impossible! Everybody moves! You even move in your sleep." I said, really upset now.

"If you're in Sage Mode, it's possible! But there's a catch. You can't breathe for a whole minute."

I gulped.

"OK... I guess." I said nervously.

I sat down in the middle. I focused, closed my eyes, and I tried to not breathe for a whole entire minute.

"Not yet, let me get the timer!" Chuko said, hopping who knows where."

I guess training takes 'time'.


Fantage Carnival Meeting

"We killed about 500 people. If nobody tells us where Sharpsul Lacario is, we will destroy this world." Main pain furiously said.

All the Pain's nodded a yes.

"We'll use Tantyke Push, right?" Nurado Pain asked.

"Yeah. It can destroy large areas." Main Pain said.

Mt. Toad

"OK, start..... NOW!!" Chuko shouted.

I closed my eyes.

5 seconds...

11 seconds...

At 20 seconds, I really needed air.

"You can hold it, Sharpie-Boy!" Chuko shouted.

All of a sudden, I heard a poof noise.

"Mun, what are you doing here?! I'm training Sharpie-Boy!" Chuko screamed.

"Well, I'm SOOO sorry! I didn't know!" Mun said.

Mun sounded like a girl toad.

Well, she was.

"Step Two? It looks like it." Mun said.

"Yeah. 10 more seconds Sharp! Hold!" Chuko said.

The last thing I needed was an old frog cheering me on.




"Now for the second part of this step." Chuko said.

"I'm Mun, but call me Ma." Mun said to me.

"I'm Sharpsul, my friends call me Sharp. Chuko calls me Sharpie-Boy." I said, smiling.

Chuko hopped over with a scroll.

"It's time to reverse the power!" Chuko said.

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Chapter 18- Hunt, Sharpsul Lacario

Fantage Community Center

"We have invaders killing Fantagians." said a staff member.

"What?!" Mentholx said, getting up nervously.

"They happen to travel around with robes and they have swords called najatos."

"Najatos?!!" Mentholx shouted.

"That's impossible, doesn't Sharp have a najato?" M said, with the angriest face ever.

"Yes, sir..." the staff member said.

"I wonder where Sharpsul is..." M said, taking out his personal transporter.

"Locate: Sharpsul99"

"Toad Mountain, Offland Fantage."

"What is he doing at Mt. Toad?" M said.

All of a sudden.......

KA-BAM!!!!

Main Pain blasted into the window, putting his hand on Mentholx's head. Steam came out of his head.

"The intruders?!!!" The staff member screamed.

"Don't make a move, or this man dies."

Mentholx's eyes were completely huge.

"It's time for the hunt...." Main Pain said.

Main Pain flew out the window, and went into the sky.

He put his arms to the side.

The Fantage Community Center team came rushing out, trying to talk to Pain.

"Pain, what are you doing?!!" said the staff member.

"I won't forget his feelings...." Main Pain said.

"Tantyke, Almighty Push!!"

Pain had his eyes closed....

Fantage then EXPLODED into pieces.

(Credit to Canada)

The history counts on Sharpsul Lacario.

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Chapter 19- Hurry, Sharp, Hurry!

"I hate Sharpsul Lacario!"

"He should die!"

"Stupid! Why is he a monster in the first place!"

Mt. Toad

"Sit right on this circle of the scroll." Chuko said to me.

I sat on the scroll.

"Now, close your eyes. You have to focus and keep your eyes tightly closed. You will start to get strong thorughly!" Chuko said.

Ma was just watching.

I tightly closed my eyes and focused. I suddenly went empty.

It was an hour later I had my eyes open.

"Sharpie-Boy! You're a Sage!"

I took a good look at myself. I had the scroll on my back. I had Sage powers. I was set!



"Step Three... Practicing with Energy." Chuko said.

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Chapter 20- Standing In

The messenger frog, Toader, was on a brick on the only building left in Fantage.

"Unbelievable..." Toader said..

"I have to notify Ma!" Toader said, clapping his hands together.

But he didn't transport.

"Huh.."

"TRANSPORT ALREADY." Toader shouted.

"Oh no, Chuko and Ma is in training!" Toader shouted.

"I gotta stand in!" Toader said.

Mt. Toad

"OK. All you have to do is to try and fight with your new power for 10 minutes! You can fight me." Chuko said with a thumbs up.

"Thank goodness it isn't me." Ma said.



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Chapter 21- Emergency 101

Chuko and I had fought over 10 minutes, I mean, this power feels smoothing! Why wouldn't I practice any less?

"Let's take a break.... I'm losing air." Chuko said, panting with a laugh.

"This is amazing. Pain should be easy!" I said, jumping.



Chuko frowned.

"Pain is a very strong person. Don't act like a toughy." Chuko said.

I took him seriously. Changing the subject, I started a different conversation.

"I wonder what's going on in Fantage. What if Pain is there and wants to capture me."

"Don't think negative lad. If there was trouble, the messenger frog would notify us." Chuko said.

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Chapter 22- The Travel to Mt. Toad

"We're 30 minutes away from Mt. Toad...." Main Pain said.

Nurado Pain smiled.

"Hunting down a 'monster', things will be interesting." Shinna Pain said.

Pain had a still look.



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Chapter 23- Toader's Leading

After tries of Toader trying to get to Mt. Toad, he finally poofed to the mountain. Training was over.

"Guys! Guys! I have bad news!" Toader screamed, hopping over to me and Chuko.

"What is it Toader?" Chuko asked.

"Fantage is destroyed! Pain came and turned Fantage into pieces!"

I paused.....

Chuko paused.....



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Chapter 24- Paused

"Pain destroyed Fantage?!!" Chuko screamed. Toader, Chuko and me looked at each other with scared faces.

"Yes! There is no time left. You guys must go to Fantage right away! Everyone counts on you, Sharpsul!"

I smiled...

"I'll summon you guys back to Fantage!" Ma said. She clapped her hands together.

Fantage

"Ow..."

"Ugh... my legs"

"Ugh!" said Beauty, struggling to get out of the rocks.

"Sharpsul....." Beauty said...

More rocks fell from the sky. Beauty saw the dead bodies everywhere around Fantage...

"HURRY Sharp!!!" Beauty screamed.

Summoned.




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Chapter 25- Sage Sharpsul



"Where's the enemy?" I asked. I wanted to fight Pain so badly my teeth chattered.

"Oh my goodness, Sharpie-Boy, look around."

I didn't notice what Fantage looked like.

"They destroyed all the buildings, destroyed homes, killed people, all that to get Sharpsul..." Ma said.

My teeth chattered.

My eyebrow got sharp.

My face was furious!

Travel to Mt. Toad

Pain suddenly poofed away, and landed in Uptown, Fantage.

The Battle

I stared down Pain, Pain stared at me.

"You saved us trouble for looking for you.." Pain said. I could tell he was the Main Pain.

My eyes turned red, my teeth got sharp.

Chuko and Ma stared down Pain.

"Shall we take this to the Beach?" he asked, smiling.

I felt my cloak coming..

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Chapter 26~ Sharpsul vs. Pain






Me and Pain were at the beach.

We stared at each other.

Pain attacked me.

"SHARPIE-BOY!!!" Chuko said, jumping at me.

Pain had a najato....

Impossible!

"Chuko!"

"SAGE ART: TOAD SONG!!" Mun shouted.

Ma became a big sage toad and blasted wind at Pain.

"Nurado Pain!" Main Pain shouted.

Nurado Pain tried to punch me with his arm, but in Sage Mode, he got rejected and blasted to the mountain.

"Chuko!!!" Mun shouted.

"ALL BEND CREATION!" I screamed at Main Pain, trying to blast a ball of power into his stomach, but I got another Pain.

"Shinna Pain..." Main Pain said.

Nurado Pain pulled in Chuko and stabbed him through the heart.

"NO!!!" Me and Ma screamed.



"Feel Pain..." Main Pain said.

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Chapter 27- Chuko Slaughtered






"I hate you! Why are you doing this?!!" I screamed at Main Pain.

Main Pain laughed

Ma cried..

"Chuko..." Mun said.

"There's a history to Pain, kid." Main Pain said.

All of a sudden, Nurado Pain came up to me and attacked me.

I jumped back, using kicks and fists to attack him.

"ALL BEND CREAT-"

Main Pain blasted me to the otherside of the beach.

Then I remembered... what this was.



Main Pain pushed me to the end of the mountain that day!

I got up. I charged at Pain with full fists and destiny.

"This is my line!!!" I screamed.

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Chapter 28- The Task Called!

I ran in front of Main Pain. I attacked him, trying to dodge his fists. I seemed to blow him to the lifeguard area, but no harm was caused.

I panted, panted, and panted.

"Do you think Sage Mode is all it takes to stop Pain?" Nurado Pain smirked.

"WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO CAPTURE ME?!!" I said, exploding with anger.

"Pain has a long story to that, but I doubt it will change anything.." Main Pain said.

Ma came from the sky, and blasted Nurado Pain all the way into the water.

"Ma, way to go!" I said.

But Main Pain flipped me, and through me against the ground. He stabbed my hands through the ground.

"GAAAH!!!!!!!" I said, screaming in complete pain.

Them, it turned dark and green eyes flashed. I got hypnotized and my eyes got huge. I zoned out and still had scared eyes.



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Chapter 29- The Survivors

Back at the mountains, many people got crushed and died from serious damage. Beauty survived, Strawberry survived, Bluerivers survived, 2008sarah survived, and many known people.

"What is this?!" Sarah screamed.

"Some person named Pain destroyed Fantage.." Blue said, getting up from the rocks.

"Gaah.. I think there's someone fighting Pain!" said Leonel, using a strong telescope to look over at the beach.



"No way... it's Sharp!!" Leonel screamed.

Everyone ran and looked into the telescope.

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Chapter 30- Pain

"People like us are out there looking for the one Chigago Wolf. Once we can capture it, it will make the world have peace.." Main Pain said.

Peace....

"PEACE?!!!!" I screamed at Pain.

"You hurt my friends, you hurt Chuko, you destroyed my hometown, how dare you use the word peace!!!" I screamed at Pain.

"Not that kind of peace. Peace that will make up for the war from 1,000 years ago..." Pain said, bending on his knees.

"That was 1,000 years ago! Shut up!! You weren't involved in war!!!" I screamed.

"But you see, I am a corpse." Pain said.

My eyes got huge.

I coughed blood.

"There's a mastermind behind you!!!" I screamed, struggling to get up.

Pain picked me up and through me into the sky.


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Chapter 31- Furious Payback

I ran to Pan after being thrown in the air.

"The problem is.." Pain said, while he was fighting me, "the real mastermind doesn't exist anymore. He died in the war 1,000 years ago.." he said.

"Shut up!!!" I said.

I poofed behind him and blown an All Bend Creation.

Miserably failing, I hit 2 other Pain's.



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Chapter 32- Remaining

There was only two Pain's left. Our target was the main one.

Main pain suddenly pulled in MA!!!

"Ma!!!" I said, jumping to get her.

But it was too late. My hand got blotched and Ma got stabbed.

I fell back. Main Pain through me all the way to the lighthouse.


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Chapter 33- Farewell, Chuko and Ma

"NO NO NO!!!!" I screamed, crying into the ground.

My trainers died.

They got stabbed by the stupid Pain!

I'm losing Sage Mode!

"It's payback time...." I said, turning into the Chigago Wolf.

The lighthouse exploded. Pain came and immediately through me into the water.


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Chapter 34- Future of the Death

"No life..." I said..

"Feeling Pain...." I said.

My cloak was getting worse.

"LOSING MY FRIENDS..... BEING KILLED, I CAN'T TAKE THIS..." I said.

The water exploded.

I froze when I floated out of the water.

Everything went upside down, and I blasted all the way to Downtown.


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Chapter 35- Blood vs. Corpse

When the other Pain came, I blasted him with Wind Style: Creation Blast

He flew all the way to the Carnival, losing by my mighty Sage Mode!

Main Pain came to Downtown.. panting!

"You little..." Main Pain said.

"Don't mess with me...." I said.

"For the Chigago Wolf man, you became strong..." he said, dropping to the ground, but not dying.


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Chapter 36- Bonds






I went up into the air.. my eyes became red, but I smiled. A bunch of clones popped up, and we figured out his power.

He can throw, but he can't throw again for 5 seconds..

5.....

4...

3.....

2....

1...

Blasted.



I smiled...

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Chapter 37- Hatred

We failed the attempt, but this time, we became fast.

5..............

4...............

3..................

2...............

1................

BLASTED TO DEATH.



_______________________

Chapter 38- Mission Accomplished

"GRAAH!!!!!!!!!!" Pain shouted, blasting all the way to the hair salon.

I took a breath.

My clones disappeared, and I slowly calmed down from the cloak power.



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Chapter 39- Sage Honor

It was unbelievable to me, that I defeated Pain.

I defeated a corpse....

A corpse who murders people....

But something strange was going on...

Main Pain got up like a zombie.

"GACK"

"GACK"

"You... haven't defeated Pain.... fully, yet...", he said.



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Chapter 40- The Corpse Re-Alive

I did my best to try and attack Pain.

All he did was throwing me back into buildings and stomping me all over the place.

But... I had a plan.



_____________________

Chapter 41- The Sage's Turn!

I made a bunch of clones.

We surrounded Pain.

The plan was to make him use the 5 second blow.

"All Bend Creation!!!" we all shouted, blowing at Pain.

He threw us at the building.

Perfect!!!

Now, 5 more seconds, he's too slow now!

"ALL BEND CREATION!!!"

5....

closer...

4... even closer...

3... almost there.
2...... hit

KA-BAM!!!!!!!!



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Chapter 42- Pain's Final Words

Pain had his eyes closed, he was bleeding from his mouth, and his body was injured.

I looked down at him with my eyes half closed.

"You.. you are a strong Sage, Sharpsul Lacario...." Pain said...

He closed is eyes....

he died from that moment.

The wind became rough.

I opened my eyes. I had a half smile...



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Chapter 43- Drifting Off

I collapsed to the ground..

I wasn't dying or anything...

I just did it.

I had a dream that Pain was killing me. I wasn't a Sage, and no one was there to help me.

I was being sliced up with his najato...

Then I woke up.

I guess someone saw me on the ground, and told everyone to come. There was a crowd, next thing you know...

I hear cheers..



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Chapter 44- The Hero

Everyone was cheering for me. I almost collapsed to the ground, until Mentholx came and held me so I wouldn't fall.

"Thank you Sharpsul!"

"You're our hero!"

"You defeated Pain!!!"

"Hurray!!!

"They admire you..." said Mentholx, smiling.

It was amazing...

I was speechless.



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Chapter 45- Healing

Before I could even say thank you, or do anything, everyone ran after me and threw me up in the air.

"Was the enemy strong?!"

"Did he injure you?!!"

"Are you OK?!!!"

"Hey guys, don't push!" I shouted, but I decided to go with the flow.

Later On....

It seemed after Pain died, everyone was revived and healed. To celebrate, everybody went to the beach.



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Chapter 46- Building

All the workers have been re-building things on Fantage. In about 24 hours, every building, home, and piece of Fantage was back together!

I went to the dock of the beach. It was sunset time.

I looked at the sky. The peaceful, wonderful, Fantage sky.

I looked down with my eyes closed. Then I opened my eyes and looked at the sky.



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Chapter 47- Sunset

I was at the beach dock for an hour. My tan was getting darker, and I felt so relieved.

I lay down on the dock, closing my eyes and smiling.

Then, I saw someone coming.

It was Beauty..

I looked away.



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Chapter 48- Sworn Enemies

"What do you want? Why are you acting so nice?" I asked.

She didn't respond.

"You're our hero now, and it's just that... I can't be that way..." Beauty said.

I looked away.



"Nothing..." I said.

Beauty hugged me.

I was shocked, I looked at her.

"Don't feel that way. You're a hero.." she said.

I smiled...

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Chapter 49- The Peaceful Evening

The rest of my day went smoothing.

I went into my home. I missed my home so much.

I hopped into bed. I was going to read a book, but I heard a knock.

I got up from bed. I opened my door, and saw princess Straw.

"What are you doing here this late at night?" I asked.

"I wanted to give you a present.." she said, smiling.

She gave me a box.

She walked out...

I opened the box.

It was the greatest present I could ever get!



It said "From Chuko and Ma".

I almost cried.

"We're still alive." they wrote.

I put my scroll on my shelf.

I hopped into bed, closing my eyes.

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Chapter 50- Sharpsul's Ending

I had my eyes closed. I fell asleep for the rest of the night.

The Morning

I woke up, and I went downstairs. I remembered that princess Straw came by last night and gave me that scroll.

I ran upstairs, I picked up my scroll.

I was glad Chuko and Ma were OK.

I hugged my scroll.



I ran downstairs, holding my scroll.

I ran into Downtown, running freely and happily!

The End



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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:04 pm

Great, Great. Nice. (: I remember this~
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:05 pm

Thanks Ana! Time to start writing!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:13 pm

AHH i remember this too!! Smile i cant wait for moreee
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:42 pm

Chapter 14 and 15 are out!

POLL: What's gonna happen to Fantage?
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:45 pm

I think it's gonna be saved like usual!! xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:48 pm

You need work on chur pwot skills. x3
You got all the names from Nwaruto yone? xDD


And, its preddictable.
Sharps gonna save us all.
woot.
So unexpected.


BUT. The writing style is sweet.
x3
The way you explain stuff rocks too. ;3
And most of the characters are enjoyable.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:53 pm

Lol I wasn't really sure what would happen so I voted for them all.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:04 pm

I chose the first two. Just in case. xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:13 pm

NEXT CHAPTERS AND EXCLUSIVE CHAPTERS:

Chapter 16- Fantage Invasion
Chapter 17- Step Two, Reverse Power
Chapter 18- Hunt- Sharpsul Lacario
Chapter 19- Hurry, Sharp, Hurry!
Chapter 20- Standing In

NEXT EXCLUSIVE CHAPTERS:

Chapter 25- Sage Sharpsul
Chapter 26- Sharpsul vs. Pain
Chapter 27- Chuko, Slaughtered
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:14 pm

How many chapters does this story have?
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:15 pm

Anaira wrote:
How many chapters does this story have?

50 chapters. But the story gets more interesting and faster as the battle arc of Sharpsul vs. Pain
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:23 pm

Heyy, I remember that story! xDD

Whoa, I see a girl just like me in there! xDD (lol jk)

Am I gonna continue being in the story? (Just wonderin... xDD)

It was nice to read over it again for the second time! It somehow seemed more interesting xDD

Can't wait for more ;]
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:31 pm

Strawberry2424 wrote:
Heyy, I remember that story! xDD

Whoa, I see a girl just like me in there! xDD (lol jk)

Am I gonna continue being in the story? (Just wonderin... xDD)

It was nice to read over it again for the second time! It somehow seemed more interesting xDD

Can't wait for more ;]

Thanks Straw! Yes you will be in the story probably on Chapter 49 Smile.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:32 pm

Fein wrote:
Strawberry2424 wrote:
Heyy, I remember that story! xDD

Whoa, I see a girl just like me in there! xDD (lol jk)

Am I gonna continue being in the story? (Just wonderin... xDD)

It was nice to read over it again for the second time! It somehow seemed more interesting xDD

Can't wait for more ;]

Thanks Straw! Yes you will be in the story probably on Chapter 49 Smile.

No prob!

And, thanks. (Chapter 49 is a long way away xDD)
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:18 am

Why do yew always have pain in your stories?
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:37 am

Sharpie,
Awesome Story!!! I Love it!!! xDDDD!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:07 am

Bluerivers wrote:
Why do yew always have pain in your stories?
I think because something connects to life or he just likes pain.... But nice story so far
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:14 am

pokeranger wrote:
Bluerivers wrote:
Why do yew always have pain in your stories?
I think because something connects to life or he just likes pain.... But nice story so far

Pain is a character from Naruto.
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Great job, anyways,

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:38 am

Kawaii Maker wrote:
pokeranger wrote:
Bluerivers wrote:
Why do yew always have pain in your stories?
I think because something connects to life or he just likes pain.... But nice story so far

Pain is a character from Naruto.
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Great job, anyways,
Ohhh... I dont even know Naruto... xDD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:47 pm

Pain is a character from Naruto, but made differently in my way.

I'm gonna try to write chapters 16-21 today!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:06 pm

Bluerivers wrote:
Why do yew always have pain in your stories?

I was thinking the same thing;

I would love to see sharp write a love story though, or something non related to "Pain"
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:13 pm

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Bluerivers wrote:
Why do yew always have pain in your stories?

I was thinking the same thing;

I would love to see sharp write a love story though, or something non related to "Pain"

A adventure story maybe...

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:15 pm

Kawaii Maker wrote:
Beauty26 wrote:
Bluerivers wrote:
Why do yew always have pain in your stories?

I was thinking the same thing;

I would love to see sharp write a love story though, or something non related to "Pain"

A adventure story maybe...

This is an adventure story...


its action and adventurous,..
But not all my Sharp the Fantagian series stories aren't about him and Pain. Sharp the Fantagian 2 (that should be coming in July) is about when Sharp explores with his friends to the Pain's village to find out the true power's and to defeat the 7 Legends.


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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:24 pm

Fein wrote:
Kawaii Maker wrote:
Beauty26 wrote:
Bluerivers wrote:
Why do yew always have pain in your stories?

I was thinking the same thing;

I would love to see sharp write a love story though, or something non related to "Pain"

A adventure story maybe...

This is an adventure story...

But not all my Sharp the Fantagian series stories aren't about him and Pain. Sharp the Fantagian 2 (that should be coming in July) is about when Sharp explores with his friends to the Pain's village to find out the true power's and to defeat the 7 Legends.

This is action.
Learn chur genres.

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