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What's gonna happen to Fantage? [Multiple Choice]
Fantage will be destroyed by Pain.
29%
 29% [ 6 ]
Fantage will stop Pain.
38%
 38% [ 8 ]
Sharp hears wrustles during training.
5%
 5% [ 1 ]
Training gets canceled.
14%
 14% [ 3 ]
Mt. Toad will get destroyed.
14%
 14% [ 3 ]
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:27 pm

Its adventurous and action....

Anyway, time to start writing!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:50 pm

GASP!

It's back, yay! xD

I wantz moar!

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:20 pm

Chapters 16 through 24 are OUT!!! Sage Sharpsul, has to help before it's too late!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 2:32 pm

pokeranger wrote:
Kawaii Maker wrote:
pokeranger wrote:
Bluerivers wrote:
Why do yew always have pain in your stories?
I think because something connects to life or he just likes pain.... But nice story so far

Pain is a character from Naruto.
o.o
Great job, anyways,
Ohhh... I dont even know Naruto... xDD

Oh yeah, I remember Pain now. XDDDDDD

And:
MOARMOARMOAR.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:57 pm

Chapter 25 is posted! The return of Sage Sharpsul!

*evil opera music*
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:00 pm

Sharpsul99 wrote:
Chapter 25 is posted! The return of Sage Sharpsul!

*evil opera music*

lolol.

evil opera music.

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ANYWAYS

MOARMOARMOARMOAR.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:09 pm

Almost every chapter has ''blood'' in it...
But, it's still exciting~
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:22 pm

Vallie wrote:
Almost every chapter has ''blood'' in it...
But, it's still exciting~

Loolllll

And thank you. Smile

I wonder when I should post Chapter 26.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:28 pm

Kewl I remember this!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Jun 19, 2010 10:21 am

The whole story is finished! Chapters 26-50 were added! Catch Chapter 1 of Sharp the Fantagian #2 today!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:21 am

Aha, nice ending.
But I know 1 person that dosnt admire chu.
ME! XDDD
and..
YOKO!
woo.
Will she ever appear? (I care not)
Anyways, it was a good story. I exept great things from the sequel. :3

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:37 pm

Good jjob, good job, like it very much, but it needs more detail. Not fight detail, characterization! It reads like a shounen manga, which means that feelings aren't that important, but I want my characterization! Like, look at Chuyo or whatever the frog's name was. He was a welll rounded character, with good motivation and even a distinct speech pattern! You need more characters like that, mai boi. Sharp needs some sort of motivation other than "I need to save the world! OMG ANGSTANAGSTANGST!", maybe greed? That'll bring some internal conflict. Same for Pain.

On the other hand, I like the suspence and the story was well-thought out and well-paced. The conflict was a new spin on a cliché idea, and I didn't feel bored ever. Kudos, my friend.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Jun 19, 2010 3:53 pm

Woot! I can't wait for next story! :3

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Jun 19, 2010 4:45 pm

Wtf, there were 26 chapters yesterday, now 50? Nice job and fast writing, although all your chapters are unbelievably short. :p I don't get the fighting, all you were saying was, "All creation blast" me, "I totally know what that is!"Razz In the next story instead of having one line I wouldn't mind being a warrior chick, who fights with twin sabers. :]
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:39 pm

Sharpsul99 wrote:
Chapter 14 and 15 are out!

POLL: What's gonna happen to Fantage?
Wow great story!
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