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PostSubject: Nicki's Words!!!   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:08 am

Here it is!!
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Words!!!   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:54 am

Argh... Can I show the rewritten work in my words?
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You have a lot of spelling mistakes, a lot of puncuation, and how you use the words. Try to work on it more. I corrected some for you. Or at least all I can find
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Words!!!   Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:39 am

Thanks Pokie!!,
I think I'm not going to write anymore story's in till I become a better speller and better at punctuation. I all ways have to use spell check xD! Well thanks again!!
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Words!!!   Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:50 am

Nice story so far! But @ the first chapter when you mention your brother, that starts another sentence.
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Words!!!   Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:03 pm

Thanks Ary!!! LOL I know I'm not the best story writer lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Words!!!   Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:06 pm

nicki445 wrote:
Thanks Pokie!!,
I think I'm not going to write anymore story's in till I become a better speller and better at punctuation. I all ways have to use spell check xD! Well thanks again!!
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Lol! Yeah... But it's always. Not all ways in your sentence above. Start spell check
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Words!!!   Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:14 pm

Yes Mam! * slingshots to spell check*
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PostSubject: Re: Nicki's Words!!!   Thu Jun 17, 2010 2:18 pm

Nice! Can't wait for more! :3

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