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PostSubject: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:07 am

umm i drew a long-haired non-blind terezi for my friend sarah! (no, not mod sarah but another friend of mine named sarah)
the hair coloring is pretty crappy, but other than that i'm pretty proud of it! feel free to rate 1-10 and critique. uwu

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EDIT: also yeah it's messy too, but i've finished something!


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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:08 am

That is pretty good. The folds on the shirt look kind of odd though. 9/10, nice!
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:10 am

thanks! yeah, i need to work on my folds a bit. althought at the moment i'm focusing more on poses. after that, though, i promise i'll work on folds a bit!
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:11 am

Really cool. I'm not into Homestuck but its really nice and cool.
I just love your art. Its amazing~
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:11 am

Wow, I really love it! I agree with Christmas Tree though, the sleeves look a bit weird.
But overall, fantastic!
9.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:12 am

thank you a lot!!
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:13 am

fuko this is really cute!!!! uwu
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:14 am

you still need to work on making your bodies a lot shorter, the torso especially.
your faces are improving a bunch though
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:17 am

What Oliver said ^
But it is really cool 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:18 am

thanks, ani and frost!

and thanks for the critique oliver!
i'm having some anatomy issues, so i'm trying to work on different poses to see if that will eventually help out. i'm also using references! uwu
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSat Dec 15, 2012 11:21 am

ALSO i forgot to mention that the background isn't mine! it's from here
http://incessantdoodling.deviantart.com/art/Hero-of-Mind-Wallpaper-285886107
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSun Dec 16, 2012 2:32 pm

whoa nice shading eee

also i think you are smart to work on your art one step at a time cause it will really help in the long run!
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PostSubject: Re: terezi   terezi Icon_minitimeSun Dec 16, 2012 5:46 pm

The face is cute, you've improved at faces since I last saw your art. But I think you should continue to work on anatomy (especially proportions, use guidelines if you don't already), that in my opinion, is one of the biggest flaws of your art. It's a good idea to take it one step at a time!
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