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PostSubject: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:35 pm

Chapter 1

''MADDIE!!",Mom yelled. ''WAKE UP!!'' I squirmed in my bed. It was a Saturday morning and i was not in the mood getting up. ''WHAT MOM!?'', I yelled back. I was not in the mood for getting up at 8 in the morning. I slept in at LEAST 'till 10. ''I got a phone call from Sarah's parents.'', she said quietly. ''About..?'', I replied. ''They found Sarah's body in the river this morning around 4 in the morning...dead.''

I hope you enjoyed Chapter 1 of ''Dirty Little Lies''
Chapter 2 will be here shortly.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:54 pm

Chapter 2

My heart stopped. I stopped breathing. Sarah had been my best friend since kindergarden. Who would want to murder her.. unless.. she commited suicide? No this had to be a joke. ''MOMMMMMM!'', I yelled. ''Yes Honey?'' Mom had been by my side hugging me and comforting me. ''How did Sarah...die?'' I winced at the word. It gave me the chills just thinking about it. ''The police think... it was a suicide.'' I gasped. As soon as I heard the word suicide I started sobbing and my stomach started to hurt. ''WHY THE HELL WOULD SHE DO THIS? WHY!?'', I screamed. ''SHE WAS MY ONLY FRIEND! AND NOW SHE'S GONE!'' ''Honey I -'' I stopped her mid sentence. ''GO AWAY!! JUST LEAVE ME THE HELL ALONE'' I, screamed once more. My mom walked out of the room,her eyes filled with tears. I felt bad,but i was in such pain that I didn't even care at the moment. I sat there the rest of the day, curled up in a little ball on my bed, under the covers, crying my eyes out. Sarah was dead. Truly dead. And there was nothing I could do about it.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:47 pm

Chapter 3

Sunday went by fast. I sat crying in my room the whole day. I didn't even walk out of my room to get something to eat. I usually chew gum when im sad or depressed and it helps but not today. Nothing could help me get by this awful time. I prayed for Sarah every night, hoping she was safe and happy in heaven. I wasn't going to get through the rest of 8th grade without Sarah. Which was suckish and crappy 'cuz she was my only friend who defended me and helped me through school. I finally thought of something. For the first time since yesterday I walked out of my room. I walked into the kitchen and took the sharpest knife. Then, I grasped the knife and sunk its sharpness into my arm. There was a lot of blood and pain, but it felt good. I sat there for nearly an hour, cutting my arm over and over. There was so much blood. I didn't want to stop. I had to though. My mom would find out. Then, a second later Mom walks in. I became frantic, searching for something to cover my arms so she wouldnt see the cuts and blood. I saw my jacket on the table and put it on within seconds. ''I'm home!'', Mom said, a little depressed though from yesterday. ''Hey Mom!'',I smiled a little, trying not to show my sadness. All of the sudden, Mom opened her mouth very wide and gasped in horror, looking at my WHITE jacket sleeves..
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:52 pm

Wow, intense.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:04 pm

Chapter 4

''WHAT THE HELL!?'' ''MOM I CAN EXPLAIN!'' I was scared. It wasn't supposed to turn out this way. What was i supposed to say, ''I love cutting myself 'till I bleed to death?'' ''We need to get you to the hospital, NOW.'' I wasn't going to let this happen. I'm not going to ruin my life. EVERYONE will find out about this if I went to the hospital. Mom ran to the phone. This was a now or never situation. I grabbed the knife I used to cut myself with and ran towards my Mom with it. I knew I was going to hell for this. I ran towards my Mom, tears coming down my face. She turned around. ''WHAT THE!'' Too late. I plunged the knife through her heart. My Mom was now dead... Just like Sarah was too.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:09 pm

Wow...thats kinda exaggerated.
She going to end up in an asylum. (:
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:14 pm

Holy cow! ;O This is super epic!
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:22 pm

Chapter Five

I fell to the floor. Crap. What had I done? ''Mmmaddie'', A quiet voice said.''Helppp meee.'' I Had a chance. I could save my Mom. What was I going to say to the police though? ''I tried to kill my Mom. Please don't take me to jail?'' Not happening. ''MOM!'' I ran to her side I'm soo sorry! I hugged her and ran to the phone. I dialed 911. ''911 what's your emergency?'' ''My my my Mom was making dinner and she fell with the knife facing her chest and she stabber herself in the heart but she's still breathing!'' A total lie. ''And what's your address?'' ''2341 Starvue Drive'', I replied. ''Okay help is on your way'' ''Okay'' I hung up. ''Mom please forgive me'', I cried. ''Please don't tell them'' She held up her pinky as a signal that she promised. She could barely talk. Moment later, the ambulance arrived..
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:23 pm

Haha,yeah(:
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:28 pm

OMG Thats sad!! why?
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:37 pm

Chapter Six

We arrived at the hospital. This was bad. The Doctor walked in. ''Is she okay? Is she okay?'', I kept repeating over and over. ''She is going to be okay'',he replied. ''She almost didn't make it though.'' Phew. She is going to be okay. 'When will she be able to come home?'' ''Today'' ''Wow that soon?'', I said surprisingly. ''Yes she's doing very well. Oh and one more thing... She's not going to remember anything that has gone on for the last couple of days.'' YES!! She will never know. I will always regret this and will never forgive myself for this though.

An hour later...

The nurse brought my Mom out in a wheelchair. She gave me all of the medicine she was going to need. My Mom got divorced and never got remarried, so my grandma had to take us home and pretty much take care of me and my Mom. I havent talked to my Dad for at least 8 years. I felt pretty bad about it. He was the world's worst Dad. The important thing is though, everything was going to be OKAY.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:38 pm

Why what? She attempted to kill her mom or why Sarah committed suicide?
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:46 pm

About her mother woah!
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:47 pm

Okay this is going to probably sound pretty awful but, Dang i love this story! It's so epic! ;D Is it awful that i like sad things? o.o Anyways yeah.. it's really interesting! ;3
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:50 pm

thanks you guys. apparently sharp thinks his is better than mine aand stuff all what his is about is fantage..
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:59 pm

Well, sharp's story is more for boys who are interested in bakugan/naruto or something like that.
Your story is going well, keep on!
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 5:04 pm

thanks!(: that make mme feel a LOT better,seriousley
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 5:12 pm

OMG I NEEDA MORE NOWWW!! D: plz write more thats amazing
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 5:55 pm

loll. mkayy(:
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:03 pm

chapter 7

We were home. Finally. I went to my room. It was around 11 at night so I decided to lay in my bed. I looked at my cuts. I knew they were gonna scar,which isn't so good. Oh gosh, school is tomorrow. I need to get to bed. I closed my eyes and fell asleep...

(Maddie's dream) ''Maddie what the crap look at her arms haha!'', Lorie said. ''Oh meh gawd she's emo!'', yelled Madison. ''You're scarred for life Maddie,haha!'', they both said.'' Lorie pushed me into the locker. Madison locked it. ''LET ME OUT OF HERE!!'', I screamed. They both laughed and snickered and they both walked away. I sat there crying, thinking I was a failure. Why me?
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:17 pm

OMG! this is like epic... and maddie is stupid... SHE ALMOST KILLED HER MOTHER!!! IS SHE MENTAL OR SOMETHING.. no offense to your character.. but i think shes crazy -_- .... This story is kinda freaking me out.. i cant see my self being that depressed to
a) Kill my self
b) cut my self
c) try to even kill my own mother!!!

Loco person
But its good.. but scary... at the end of each story.. you should put "Now dont ever try this at home kids" XD

OoOoO~Vatt~OoOoO
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:19 pm

chapter 8

I woke up from the terrible nightmare. Worst one I ever had. I hated Lorie and Madison. They were bitches. I got ready for school. I wanted to make a new friend so badly. I don't know why but I felt so freaking lonely. I was gonna be late for the bus. ''C YA MOM!'', I yelled. ''LOVE YOU SWEETIE!,Mom replied. I got on the bus. Sarah USED to sit next to me..not anymore. I sighed and tried not to think about it. ''HEYY MADDIE WHAT'S IN HERE?'',Lorie yelled. ''YEAH!'',Madison laughed. They took my backpack and dumped everything out. ''WHAT THE CRAP STOP!'',I yelled. ''Fine!'',they both yelled. Then then kicked all of my stuff. ''Hey leave her alone! What did she ever do to you?'',A small voice said. I looked up. I had never seen her before. She must've been new. Lorie and Madison rolled their eyes and walked away. The girl who defended me sat next to me. ''Hi, I'm Maddy'' She smiled and I smiled back. For once since Sarah died, I was actually happy and had a friend.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:21 pm

hahah vatt ik. she's depressed. she killed her mother cuz she didn't want the hospital to point her in the mental hospital and everyone wouldve found out so she thought she had to do it
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:23 pm

I never said that Soccer....

And this is a good story, but slow it down with the chapters. Try to post like 2-3 a day Smile.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:26 pm

ik people want more andmore tho:P plus the chaptersr sorta short
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