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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:34 pm

ooooooooo i cant wait for more!! so epicc!
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:37 pm

Fein wrote:
I never said that Soccer....

And this is a good story, but slow it down with the chapters. Try to post like 2-3 a day Smile.

Well, why should she post less? When you sell a book, you dont sell it by chapters...
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:38 pm

Anaira wrote:
Fein wrote:
I never said that Soccer....

And this is a good story, but slow it down with the chapters. Try to post like 2-3 a day Smile.

Well, why should she post less? When you sell a book, you dont sell it by chapters...

its just hard to keep up with all these chapters.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:40 pm

Fein wrote:
Anaira wrote:
Fein wrote:
I never said that Soccer....

And this is a good story, but slow it down with the chapters. Try to post like 2-3 a day Smile.

Well, why should she post less? When you sell a book, you dont sell it by chapters...

its just hard to keep up with all these chapters.

I read all of the chapters in 5 minutes just now.. O.o
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:43 pm

chapter 9

We finally got to school. ''Soo what's up'',Maddy asked. ''Nothing really'',I replied. We ended up having classes together so Maddy sat behind me. While Mrs. Nicki
was teaching who knows what, Maddy passed me a note. ''Meet me after school by the courtyard(:'' Smiling, I replied back. ''Okay! Can't wait!'' I couldn't wait 'till 3:30. I wonder what Maddy needed to tell me? Was is a friendship bracelet? A secret? A hug? Who knows. I knew one thing for for sure though, I couldn't wait.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:12 pm

ahh amazinggg! can't wait for more
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:20 pm

teehee u shall see tomo the rest of the story(:
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:24 pm

Rawr.

I read all of the chapters.

I want moar.

And... I was thinking about myself stabbing my arm... will it hurt? XDDD

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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:28 pm

I love it! Soo great! I want Moar... Right now! Gimmeh Moar! This is so great! ;D
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:29 pm

haha more will be tomorrow(: promise. and, yuss... it will hurt loll. so don't do eet
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:30 pm

Yay! ;D Can't wait till tomorrow! This is like.. So awesome! When i read the chapter about her cutting herself my arms started hurting even though i wasn't cutting myself.. I was like 'Goodness! That must really hurt!' xD
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:42 pm

lol ik seriousley(:
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:52 pm

chapter 10

It was 3:34. Maddy still wasn't here. Something must've happened. She would never have ditched me. Then out of nowhere, something hits my face. It was gooey and it sort've hurt. I felt my forehead and looked at my hand. It was.. an egg? ''What the?'' Soon, at least 7 more hit me. Then another 4. I just stood there,trying to dodge the eggs. It had to be Lorie and Madison. I heard laughing. It sounded like them. It came from the bushes. Out of no where Maddy pops up from the bushes,snickering and laughing. I stood there. Unable to take this all in. This was all a setup. Maddy used me. She never liked me. Maddy was friends with Lorie and Madison. Unbelievable.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:54 pm

Oh my! Great chapter! It's like so epic! Her life is so sad... :\ I NEED MOAR! xD
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:00 pm

chapter 11

''So Maddie,did you like are little egg charade? I sure did!'',Maddy said while laughing. ''How could you?'', I said quietly. ''You're a bitch,Maddie. Get that through you're fat,little head. I hope you go to hell and you're the ugliest thing i've EVER seen.'' ''So away emo you faggot.'' She saw my cuts. I know she did. She must've told Lorie and Madison too. This was it. I knew what I HAD to do. It was my ONLY option. I started crying and ran to the river where Sarah had killed herself.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:02 pm

Oh goodness! Epic! ;D Noo! I don't want her to kill herself to! QQ -Crosses fingers- Let her live!
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:17 pm

I ran through the woods to the river. I suddenly got a text though. It was from Kyle. My all time crush since 4th grade.

Kyle: I see you.

Me: What? How?

Kyle: Look across the river(:

I looked there he was. It was all the more important to jump into the river. He would find out that I had cut my arms. That's it. ''I Love You Kyle.'',I said loud enough so he could hear me. ''MADDIE N-'' I jumped. The river was flowing rapidly. I let my eyes close and layed there,letting the water take my life.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:31 pm

OH MY GOODNESS! Dude.. ... I feel sorry for her :\Anyways.. I want moar!
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:40 pm

Wow. Lets see what happens next.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:46 pm

NOEZNOEZNOEZ!

COME BACK!

I want MOARZZZZ.

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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:59 pm

''Maddie!Maddie!'' I suddenly wake up. I see Kyle's face. ''Maddie,I love you. How could you try to commit suicide?'' ''i i i'', was my response. I was so cold. I knew things were going to be okay though. Kyle suddenly kissed me. His lips were so lovely. I held his warm hand. It gave me the goosebumps. I knew I could tell him my secrets and he could accept me for who I am. I love him and he loved me back. No more dirty little secrets.

The End!(:
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:01 pm

lol i'm not like that D: but i'm loving this story. <3
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:06 pm

It kinda didn't make sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:14 pm

The ending was... Kinda good but it leaves so many things in the air! Like whats going to happen when she goes back to school? Like is she still going to get bullied? Is Kyle going to protect her from the bullies? The ending made me sad cause like it left so much stuff in the air.. But ah well.. Pretty good ending though it was a little confusing..
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:14 pm

End? Already?

Wellz, nice story! :3

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