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Skai
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:48 pm

It was very jumpy.. I think you should have introduced Maddie and Kyle in the beginging since it was kinda random.. Otherwise it was great!
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:40 pm

GREAT story Maddie! Loved it! You should be an author you have a great imagination write more stories please! (: <3 (P.s if you write a book,i'd be the 1st to buy it!Smile )
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:57 am

whoa... epic ending... that is like really really cute!!!!! Epic... E-P-I-C just like whoa... im glad Kyle saved her, and that she is now alive and well and not psyco or anything... i dont think i would become psyco if all my friends died.... But i guess everyone is different XD

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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:31 am

I wonder what this is based off of Rolling Eyes also, you swore, that's a infraction.
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:03 am

i know sorry. and it's based off of nothing :/ alot people hve cussed in their stories lately.. ill try to cut down the cussing next time Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:06 am

@mango,ik it sorta did get jumpy,sorry D: @maddy,loll ik ur SERIOUSLEY not like that(: @ana,sorry if it didn't make sense to you,it did to me but my story will be better next time. @mela,tysm! that means a lot to mexD i will be making more stories, so don't worry about that Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:10 am

lol sorry guys i'll answer that for ya. When she goes back to school Kyle WILL protect Maddie from Lorie and Madison. Also, Maddie is doing better since Sarah died. And her mom is doing OK from the stabbing incident. @miyeon,sorry lol. im gonna make a longer story next time(: itll be more epic:D
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PostSubject: Re: Dirty Little Lies   Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:11 am

@vatt, lol thanks!<33(:
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