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Pancakette
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PostSubject: OMG...   Fri Dec 21, 2012 11:50 pm

DID YOU GUYS THINK I DID GOOD ON THIS?!?! IM SO PROUD! RATES?




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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 12:03 am

it looks a lot better rhan my drawings
but i think it needs just a tiny bit more work
but dont worry
mine is worse
8.7/10
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 12:08 am

9.5/10!

OMG! So much better than I would've done! The eyebrows bother me though. I don't know why.
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 12:25 am

8/10 I love love love love
I'm assuming this is a chibi, due to the round head and cheeky expression
Make the body more detailed, add her arms. Her hair is somewhat flat looking, but it's cute.

If you were going for a more anime style, make the edges of her chin pointed. Look at litsa references.


But wow this is so good!
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 12:38 am

KAWAII OVERLOAD. :3 This face deserves a 10/10.
One thing you could improve on is your detail, but overall it's good.
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:34 am

i love the face!! 10/10
Omy~ :> simple but its so cute!
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 12:12 pm

whoaaa caps lock much?

it's pretty cute, but i'm not a fan of how the eyes are on top of the hair. other than that, great job!
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 12:48 pm

hop wrote:
whoaaa caps lock much?

it's pretty cute, but i'm not a fan of how the eyes are on top of the hair. other than that, great job!

Are you talking to me?
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:06 pm

10/10 sooo good! Smile can you color it in?
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 3:01 pm

penguinsarecool wrote:
10/10 sooo good! Smile can you color it in?

Wow. I didnt think it was going to to be this good but this is one of my best drawings and colourings. Eeep. Im happy. I really like this.

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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 3:07 pm

I love the coloring! My only critique would to keep it inside the lines OwO
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 3:11 pm

I really like the drawing better when it's colored!
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 4:42 pm

I love the drawing, but the colouring job is a little messy. Try keeping in the lines and shading a bit. 8/10.
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 4:44 pm

OH EM GEE I LOVE IT

How long did this take?!

11/10
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 4:50 pm

@Ron
Yea. It looked fine while I was doing it but then I look at it and it is kinda messy. I think its just the face thats messy though. I think I did the best on the hair.

@Marshy
It didnt take long at all. I didnt think it was going to be good. I thought it was gunna look stupid like my old drawings. XD
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:42 pm

Nyan Cat wrote:
hop wrote:
whoaaa caps lock much?

it's pretty cute, but i'm not a fan of how the eyes are on top of the hair. other than that, great job!

Are you talking to me?

lol no i was talking to pancakette
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 9:01 pm

The colored version is really nice. Good job!
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sat Dec 22, 2012 10:17 pm

10/10 (I wish 10000000/10 was possible)!

The colored version distract my eyes from the eyebrows now!


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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sun Dec 23, 2012 3:35 am

Nyan Cat wrote:
hop wrote:
whoaaa caps lock much?

it's pretty cute, but i'm not a fan of how the eyes are on top of the hair. other than that, great job!

Are you talking to me?

Nope, Shes talking to
Pancakette wrote:
DID YOU GUYS THINK I DID GOOD ON THIS?!?! IM SO PROUD! RATES?
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:09 am

ChristmasPerfume6 wrote:
10/10 (I wish 10000000/10 was possible)!

The colored version advert my eyes from the eyebrows now!

Thank you so much! And thank you for everyone else. This makes me want to do more colouring! o3o
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sun Dec 23, 2012 2:25 pm

Wow thats so cute! I just dont like the eyebrows, but i love the coloring! 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sun Dec 23, 2012 2:31 pm

Pancakette wrote:
penguinsarecool wrote:
10/10 sooo good! :) can you color it in?

Wow. I didnt think it was going to to be this good but this is one of my best drawings and colourings. Eeep. Im happy. I really like this.

As nice as it is, I love this, but you did the hair lines randomly. Make it look realistic, make the lines like they would look like in real life. TBH I think it would look better without but I love your drawings
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PostSubject: Re: OMG...   Sun Dec 23, 2012 4:07 pm

That looks real good! But if you're using muro don't blur, use layers to color, and stay inside the lines. Like DarkManor said make the lines in the hair go the way the hair goes, you know?

Like this (sorry for kind of scribbling on your art):
 
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