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PostSubject: ~Bonds~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:48 pm

Introduction
As in always, Mark Lacario was a middle school kid. He was only 13, but he has school drama problems. His class went upside down once he admitted he liked a girl in his class.... Miranda Sapio. Things go unsudden and turn into war. That's not all, Fred, his best friend, starts to betray him! Will Mark survive this and truce with Miranda? Or will he end up being enemies with Miranda forever?

Chapter 1- Followed By

The school bell rang. It wasn't exactly music to my ears, but everything was going OK. It was April, two more months of school. I was excited. I hated school. I hated 6th grade. The only thing I looked forward to everything in school was an outside break, and my best buddy, Fred. Fred and I hang out on the field everyday and we hang out at McBurger everyday, our favorite after school lunch hangout.

Me and Fred walked into the classroom. We sat down for first period. Math isn't a good way to start my morning, but some teachers are clueless in middle school.

"Please open up to last night's homework, Page 155 in your math textbook." said Mrs. Zee, our math period teacher.

A lot of hands went up all of a sudden. That meant "I forgot my homework at school," or "I didn't do my homework", or "My dog/cat ate my homework" and so more.

Me and Fred tried so hard not to laugh. This was a daily experience. There were 15 kids with their hands up.

"Do you think something's funny, Mark and Fred?" Mrs. Zee said, walking by us.

We gave her a normal look.

"Uhm, I wasn't laughing." I said, lying through my teeth.

"Err, I was erm... uh.... smiling because today is a special day.." Fred said,
lying through his teeth as well.

"Oh really? Tell me what's so special about today." Mrs. Zee said.

Fred and I gave each other looks with big eyes, then we looked at the teacher.


Lunch Time

"I can't believe you went on with your so called Native American holiday lie!" I said, laughing like a loon.

"Yeah well, you know." Fred said, smirking.

We sat down at the lunch table. Today's lunch was pizza. Me and Fred are crazy over the school's pizza. I mean, it tastes like the world's greatest pizza!

Then, Miranda Sapio passed by. She sat down, and flipped her hair.

I looked down at my pizza.


"What's wrong?" asked Fred.

"I erm... it's something about Miranda." I said, trying not to make myself look like a fool.

Fred paused, then finally spoke.

"It's OK, man." Fred said.

He looked at Miranda, then Miranda turned around and said "Something you need?" in her sweet-little-angel voice.

"Oh umm..." Fred said.

I gave Fred the look, that meant "if your my best friend, you keep your mouth shut about any secrets,".

"Umm..." Fred said.

That was the beginning of my first troubling.
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Chapter 2- Field of Action


So it was 2:00 PM, and since we're not ''children", we don't call this recess. We call it Field Break. Field Break is of course poplar. It's nothing like a playground. There is some swings, monkey bars, and like, two slides. Me and Fred sometimes go here after school, and go near our secret tree. We spy on children and scare them for the fun of it.

Fred and I are like, best friends. We became best friends in second grade, when we played in our other school during recess. The first time he said "Hey, I'm Fred Lucas" and I said "Hi, I'm Mark Lacario", there would be a great best friend bond.

Field Break- Mission

"OK, so what's the plan?" Fred asked, as we were spying in a bush.

Miranda wandered with her friends. I could tell she was gossiping. When she noticed us, we jumped into the bush so fast it was faster than wind.

"Too late, am I right?" Fred asked, facepalming himself.

"It can still work..." I said.

"Dude, I can hear walking coming toward the bush!" Fred whispered in a freaked-out way.

Miranda opened the bush and saw us covered in leaves. We looked like chickens.

"Uhm.... hi." I said, waving with my eyesbrow nervously tilting and my teeth clicking.

"What's going on here? Why are you spying on us?" Miranda asked us, with her hands on her hip and her feet tapping.

Fred and I looked at each other and we exchanged looks.

"Um..... because umm...." I said, thinking of an answer.

"Because we wanted to say Happy Native American holiday! Ha ha, ha, hahhh uh..." I said.

Fred gave me the "it's not working" face.

"Oh really? Now tell me the real reason." Miranda said.

I took a deep breath.

"I wanted to know... what kind of soup you like, for an erm.. survey!" acting as excited as possible.

But, she cracked our code.

"Oohh.. I know what's going on!" Miranda said, she smiled at me, and gave Fred a half smile.

She walked away, taking a prediction, she's gossiping about "The Great Friends and one wants Love".

But, Fred high-fived me. I decided to high-five him back.

"Dude, you're in there!" Fred said.

Yeah, I'm in there, in doom.
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Chapter 3- Leading to Trouble

Me, Miranda, and Fred walked around the field. We've been hanging ot for a whole week now. Me and Miranda were like good friends. Thank goodness Fred didn't feel like a third-wheel at the moment.

"At the moment".

"Hey Miranda, want to come to McBurger after school?" I asked her.

"McBurger food rocks. They never use old food, and it's worth waiting 15 minutes for their delicious fresh food." Fred said.

Miranda didn't respond.

"You heard us, right?" I asked Miranda.

"Oh, yes, I did." Miranda said, smiling, and she kept walking.

"So you up for McBurger?" I asked.

Miranda sighed, and stopped walking. Me and Fred stopped walking as well.

"Mark, I know you like me, but you kinda act like... we're dating." Miranda said, sighing again.

Fred looked at me, I looked at Fred. We looked at Miranda.

"Oh umm..." I said, with no solid comment.

"We're just... friends... for now." Miranda told me.

"Excuse me, but what does 'for now' supposed to mean?" Fred asked.

"Fred..." I said.

"Well," Miranda said. "it's just that, I don't think I'm ready."

"Miranda, you're single." Fred said.

"Fred, enough." I said. "That's cool Miranda." I said.

There was no reason for me to feel down.

"I cant come to McBurger after school. I have to go to a family dinner." she said.

And she walked away. For like, no reason.

"What is her problem?" Fred said, rolling his eyes.

"We'll really see if she is having a family dinner." I said to Fred he gave me a confused look, but then he smiled.

We smiled, our big smile meant "Time for a plan!".

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Chapter 4- Calling for Take Cover

I went over to Fred's house this afternoon. We had a great plan. We were gonna call Miranda's house, and ask her mom if she's there, that's if her mother/father is at home!

"OK, I dial, you just stand back." I said. Fred nodded his head a yes.

I waited a minute or two until Miranda's mom said "Hello?".

"Hi, this is Mark Lacario, may I speak to Miranda, please?" I said.

"Who's this?" Mrs. Sapio said.

I just said who I was!

"Mark Lacario, her friend." I repeated.

"OK, hold on."

"I knew it!" I shouted. "Her mom was home, so I thought Miranda was probably with her grandparents," I said to Fred, "and then she gets Miranda! She's a-"

"What a liar, why would you want her, man?" Fred said, facepalming himself.

I didn't know what to say.

"Hello?" Miranda said through the phone.

"Beep, boop, beep, bop." I said through the phone, and hung up.

"What a loser..." Fred said.

I guess I could say that I agree.....

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Chapter 5- Betrayed, From Love


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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:51 pm

I remember this. (:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:09 pm

Thanks Ana (:. I hope more peple reply, because this story is gonna be great Smile.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:10 pm

thnks. ur awesome no1 will read my story now. i know wut ur doing
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:17 pm

soccer4lifeyo wrote:
thnks. ur awesome no1 will read my story now. i know wut ur doing

I can't write a story? o_e.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:30 pm

soccer4lifeyo wrote:
thnks. ur awesome no1 will read my story now. i know wut ur doing

Wth? Everyone writes story here, they probably don't have time to read others. Razz

And, can't wait for more Sharpehhhh. :3

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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:50 am

soccer4lifeyo wrote:
thnks. ur awesome no1 will read my story now. i know wut ur doing

Sharp has had this story on here before you. He is re-posting it.



And, Sharp! I do remember this, Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 10:23 am

okay :/
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:46 am

soccer4lifeyo wrote:
thnks. ur awesome no1 will read my story now. i know wut ur doing

What are you talking about?


Anyways, nice story.l This is my first time reading it.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 2:16 pm

Thanks guys! I'm gonna write the next 3 chapters today!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:56 pm

I want moar.

MOARMOARMOAR.

MOAR.

Haha.

Your welcome for posting. XDDD

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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:15 pm

Yeee, I posted my new chapters! I'll write the next two chapters later!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:20 pm

Woah. Epic. But, could you put them in spolers? Because I have to scroll up and down way too much.
Its okay if you dont feel like it.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:23 pm

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Woah. Epic. But, could you put them in spolers? Because I have to scroll up and down way too much.
Its okay if you dont feel like it.

Thanks Anaira <3.

It would feel pretty awkward putting them in spoilers cuz it's kinda small and it doesn't really look good. I think it's because of the lengthy chapters do you have to scroll up and down.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:24 pm

I WANT MOARMOARMOAR.

And in your sentence:
"I cant come to McBurger after school," you put after school twice.

All of us are typo freaks. XDDD'


MOARMOARMOAR.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Bonds~ #1   Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:30 pm

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I WANT MOARMOARMOAR.

And in your sentence:
"I cant come to McBurger after school," you put after school twice.

All of us are typo freaks. XDDD'


MOARMOARMOAR.

Fixed Smile.

I'll write more later. Things are gonna get interesting in this story.
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