Pancakette
Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 613
Join date : 2012-10-05
Age : 23
Location : in bed sleeping
 | Subject: Did I improve?  Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:09 pm | |
| I took your guy's tips and I think I did much better on this one! The other one looks weird compared to this one. Rates?  | |
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aimi
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4743
Join date : 2012-09-02
Age : 23
Location : pledis ent. building
| | Subject: Re: Did I improve? Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:13 pm | |
| I like it! 9.5/10
Maybe you should add a bit of hair in the back. | |
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Daisy
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3369
Join date : 2011-12-22
Age : 23
Location : In Hell, With Sebastian..
| | Subject: Re: Did I improve? Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:22 pm | |
| 9/10
the shading of the hair, make it little not randomly shading xD
sorry for my grammar.. >.> | |
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dewey decimal system
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2743
Join date : 2012-10-30
Age : 22
Location : pm me for tumblr/ig handles ♡
| | Subject: Re: Did I improve? Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:25 pm | |
| I like but you should add a little blush, it will look a bit cuter ;3
I say... 9/10. | |
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