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PostSubject: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 5:55 am

lol weird title!I know.
I'm free these days and I'm bored so!If you want to improve your drawing,Post here and I will help you and if you want to ask any questions PM me.
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 10:22 am

It's not finished as I have no idea where to shade on hair, especially the ponytail. I understand that you're supposed to put the shades where light can't reach, but when I tried that there was a whole space with no shading in the middle, making it look plain.

I can't put highlights in, either. Mainly because I don't know where they go xD

Also, I use mouse and Sai. Is there any technique to shade hair with lots of detail using these?

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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 10:23 am

I made a sketch of kawaii things. Mind there is no Len Kagamine in it as I am a complete fail at drawing anime people.
PLEASE rate and critique, because I don't really mind :3
If I receive good rate, I might make my very own art shop.
Thanks!

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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 2:27 pm

@Serufia the highlights should be in the middle I forgot to write that in the pic.
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@Nyan Cat I really want to see you draw anime ^.^ and I think you should draw more and kind of... improve?Yours is kind of rushed SORRY!!
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 2:38 pm

Can you critique this please: http://sta.sh/01c52c6ybj5x

Ignore the coloring, I was messing around (I was going to blur it, but it got mixed up with white. Not pretty. :L). I made the color layer invisible.

Just critique the lineart. But keep in mind it's MLP style.


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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 3:01 pm

Could you critique my avatar?
Its supposed to be monochrome shading FWI
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 3:25 pm

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[color=darkred][center]@Serufia the highlights should be in the middle I forgot to write that in the pic.
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whoa larl your shading is really blurry and pillow-like!! i don't know if the one on the bottom left corner is supposed to be the finished shading or not, but it's way off, no offence.
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 4:04 pm

yeh the "empty" one would actually look really good if it wasnt for the kinda brown shading on the top

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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 6:29 pm

Thanku for the tips c: it really helped, especially the light source on another layer. Then I tried putting shades where you put your highlights, just to see if it looks better and I came with:

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Then the shading on the ponytail didn't match the hair on the head, so I changed the shading of that too. I'm not putting it up yet because I'm not happy with it and I should sleep *-*

Question on highlights: They can be any shape,right? Is there any easier and detailed way to do them using mouse? I'd do them individually for clumps but it just doesn't seem as easy when using mouse.
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Thu Dec 27, 2012 6:34 pm

@LOL
Thank you for the critiques! I will try to improve next time. (And maybe draw anime idk)


UPDATE

I drew pichu. This was a sketch for fun and enjoyment so don't be mean :3

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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:45 am

Rufistar wrote:
Can you critique this please: http://sta.sh/01c52c6ybj5x

Ignore the coloring, I was messing around (I was going to blur it, but it got mixed up with white. Not pretty. :L). I made the color layer invisible.

Just critique the lineart. But keep in mind it's MLP style.

The picture won't show.


hop wrote:
L.O.L wrote:
[color=darkred][center]@Serufia the highlights should be in the middle I forgot to write that in the pic.
Critique 1:
 
whoa larl your shading is really blurry and pillow-like!! i don't know if the one on the bottom left corner is supposed to be the finished shading or not, but it's way off, no offence.


It's been the FIRST time using sai in months... I know I forgot what every tool does T_T !!

Oliver wrote:
yeh the "empty" one would actually look really good if it wasnt for the kinda brown shading on the top

Huh?

Nyan Cat wrote:
@LOL
Thank you for the critiques! I will try to improve next time. (And maybe draw anime idk)


UPDATE

I drew pichu. This was a sketch for fun and enjoyment so don't be mean :3

Spoiler:
 


Do you have a reference for it? so it could help me a bit? Thanks in Advance.


Serufia wrote:
Thanku for the tips c: it really helped, especially the light source on another layer. Then I tried putting shades where you put your highlights, just to see if it looks better and I came with:

Spoiler:
 

Then the shading on the ponytail didn't match the hair on the head, so I changed the shading of that too. I'm not putting it up yet because I'm not happy with it and I should sleep *-*

Question on highlights: They can be any shape,right? Is there any easier and detailed way to do them using mouse? I'd do them individually for clumps but it just doesn't seem as easy when using mouse.

I sent you a PM

Clockwork Invention wrote:
Could you critique my avatar?
Its supposed to be monochrome shading FWI

Can you answer these questions:-

~Did you use a tablet or a mouse?
~Which program did you use for drawing it?


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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:50 am

L.O.L wrote:
Rufistar wrote:
Can you critique this please: http://sta.sh/01c52c6ybj5x

Ignore the coloring, I was messing around (I was going to blur it, but it got mixed up with white. Not pretty. :L). I made the color layer invisible.

Just critique the lineart. But keep in mind it's MLP style.

The picture won't show.


hop wrote:
L.O.L wrote:
[color=darkred][center]@Serufia the highlights should be in the middle I forgot to write that in the pic.
Critique 1:
 
whoa larl your shading is really blurry and pillow-like!! i don't know if the one on the bottom left corner is supposed to be the finished shading or not, but it's way off, no offence.


It's been the FIRST time using sai in months... I know I forgot what every tool does T_T !!

Oliver wrote:
yeh the "empty" one would actually look really good if it wasnt for the kinda brown shading on the top

Huh?

Nyan Cat wrote:
@LOL
Thank you for the critiques! I will try to improve next time. (And maybe draw anime idk)


UPDATE

I drew pichu. This was a sketch for fun and enjoyment so don't be mean :3

Spoiler:
 


Do you have a reference for it? so it could help me a bit? Thanks in Advance.


Serufia wrote:
Thanku for the tips c: it really helped, especially the light source on another layer. Then I tried putting shades where you put your highlights, just to see if it looks better and I came with:

Spoiler:
 

Then the shading on the ponytail didn't match the hair on the head, so I changed the shading of that too. I'm not putting it up yet because I'm not happy with it and I should sleep *-*

Question on highlights: They can be any shape,right? Is there any easier and detailed way to do them using mouse? I'd do them individually for clumps but it just doesn't seem as easy when using mouse.

I sent you a PM

Clockwork Invention wrote:
Could you critique my avatar?
Its supposed to be monochrome shading FWI

Can you answer these questions:-

~Did you use a tablet or a mouse?
~Which program did you use for drawing it?


Tablet, and Photoshop. It was intended to be nothing more than a simple skecth. Then I decided to finish it and stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:57 pm

Here:

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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:12 am

Rufistar wrote:
Here:

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Wow....
It's amazing and has no flaws.
I really have nothing to critique about it!
And clockwork, I decided to make a video to critique yours so it will be done in few days. I will pm you the link when I will finish it.
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:50 am

[color=#ED77A6]@lol what do you mean?[\color]
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sat Dec 29, 2012 10:35 am

Nyan Cat wrote:
[color=#ED77A6]@lol what do you mean?[\color]

Like did you copied a picture from the internet?
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:42 pm

L.O.L wrote:
Rufistar wrote:
Here:

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Wow....
It's amazing and has no flaws.
I really have nothing to critique about it!
And clockwork, I decided to make a video to critique yours so it will be done in few days. I will pm you the link when I will finish it.
Man my drawing must suck a ton if I need a video for it
Oh okay I can't wait to see the video


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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:45 pm

Clockwork Invention wrote:
L.O.L wrote:
Rufistar wrote:
Here:

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Wow....
It's amazing and has no flaws.
I really have nothing to critique about it!
And clockwork, I decided to make a video to critique yours so it will be done in few days. I will pm you the link when I will finish it.
Man my drawing must suck a ton if I need a video for it
Oh okay I can't wait to see the drawing

It;s not that bad the mistakes you have is the face shape, eyes, and headband.
You should make your hand move freely when you draw. and the eyes should be the same length at least. and the headband should be longer. Don't forget to make a new layer when you color,shade and stuff.
The video turned horrible.. belch but I told you the critiques above so yeah...
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:47 pm

L.O.L wrote:
Nyan Cat wrote:
[color=#ED77A6]@lol what do you mean?[\color]

Like did you copied a picture from the internet?

Here you go
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:50 pm

Nyan Cat wrote:
L.O.L wrote:
Nyan Cat wrote:
[color=#ED77A6]@lol what do you mean?[\color]

Like did you copied a picture from the internet?

Here you go

TRY to make the hands/legs the same...
The tail in the beginning should be thin not thick.
The mouth should be ) not 3
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:52 pm



My sprites please? I want the most help i can get. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:54 pm

☆Marshy ★ wrote:


My sprites please? I want the most help i can get. Very Happy

Your 'sprites' look good to me ...Sorry but I don't know a lot about sprites or Pokemon...
But There is no mistake in coloring,shading and more.
In my view, it's perfect Very Happy Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:55 pm

L.O.L wrote:
Clockwork Invention wrote:
L.O.L wrote:
Rufistar wrote:
Here:

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Wow....
It's amazing and has no flaws.
I really have nothing to critique about it!
And clockwork, I decided to make a video to critique yours so it will be done in few days. I will pm you the link when I will finish it.
Man my drawing must suck a ton if I need a video for it
Oh okay I can't wait to see the drawing

It;s not that bad the mistakes you have is the face shape, eyes, and headband.
You should make your hand move freely when you draw. and the eyes should be the same length at least. and the headband should be longer. Don't forget to make a new layer when you color,shade and stuff.
The video turned horrible.. belch but I told you the critiques above so yeah...
Hahah I see. I can agree with the face shape but not the head band because it's supposed to be short, and I always make new layers.
But thank you
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:56 pm

Clockwork Invention wrote:
L.O.L wrote:
Clockwork Invention wrote:
L.O.L wrote:
Rufistar wrote:
Here:

Open:
 

Wow....
It's amazing and has no flaws.
I really have nothing to critique about it!
And clockwork, I decided to make a video to critique yours so it will be done in few days. I will pm you the link when I will finish it.
Man my drawing must suck a ton if I need a video for it
Oh okay I can't wait to see the drawing

It;s not that bad the mistakes you have is the face shape, eyes, and headband.
You should make your hand move freely when you draw. and the eyes should be the same length at least. and the headband should be longer. Don't forget to make a new layer when you color,shade and stuff.
The video turned horrible.. belch but I told you the critiques above so yeah...
Hahah I see. I can agree with the face shape but not the head band because it's supposed to be short, and I always make new layers.
But thank you

Oops? I didn't know that... and welcome Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Larl's Critique Palace.   Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:56 pm

L.O.L wrote:
Nyan Cat wrote:
L.O.L wrote:
Nyan Cat wrote:
[color=#ED77A6]@lol what do you mean?[\color]

Like did you copied a picture from the internet?

Here you go

TRY to make the hands/legs the same...
The tail in the beginning should be thin not thick.
The mouth should be ) not 3

I changed the mouth and the tail because it was too hard for me. Sorry if I didn't tell you that.
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