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Primrose
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PostSubject: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 3:49 pm

Its called 'The Reality'. I started doing it yesterday/the day before yesterday and its finished! Hope you like it! (This is the first episode. I uploaded it earlier today.)

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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 3:59 pm

THEY NEED MORE EMOTIONS XD Not smiling for the whole time!

Awesome!

6/10 If only the text moved faster and stuff :p


Can i be a star in it?
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:01 pm

☆Marshy ★ wrote:
THEY NEED MORE EMOTIONS XD Not smiling for the whole time!

Awesome!

6/10 If only the text moved faster and stuff :p


Can i be a star in it?

Um, no sorry you can't. I'm all the girls. I do need help with the boy characters, if you have one. Ya, and about the text.. Its slow.. I know. Any suggestions about the music? I suck at finding BGM. Thanks for the rating! I'll try to improve.
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:02 pm

Hm..... mabye something smooth like "Im comin home". I like that song.
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:03 pm

I agree with Marshy. The text was sort of slow... but the story was good :3
6.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:04 pm

☆Marshy ★ wrote:
Hm..... mabye something smooth like "Im comin home". I like that song.
Oh ya, thanks! I just downloaded the instrumental.
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:07 pm

It's nice, but the people move rather slowly. Maybe you should speed it up a bit. And the font is slow and kind of hard to read. Maybe do a simple text. Finally, you should add some emotions to their faces to make it look more dramatic. But this is really good 8/10
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:58 pm

Cool series! If you need a boy character, You can use my brother's. ( He always wanted to be in a fantage series)
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:59 pm

snowflake wrote:
Cool series! If you need a boy character, You can use my brother's. ( He always wanted to be in a fantage series)

Thanks! Is he a member?
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:00 pm

Lin wrote:
snowflake wrote:
Cool series! If you need a boy character, You can use my brother's. ( He always wanted to be in a fantage series)

Thanks! Is he a member?

no, but he has member clothes and a bunch of ecoins.
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:07 pm

snowflake wrote:
Lin wrote:
snowflake wrote:
Cool series! If you need a boy character, You can use my brother's. ( He always wanted to be in a fantage series)

Thanks! Is he a member?

no, but he has member clothes and a bunch of ecoins.

Thanks so much! Can you PM me the username and password please? Thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sun Dec 30, 2012 11:04 pm

Hey your video was amazing! I could never make that!
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Sun Dec 30, 2012 11:51 pm

I think it's cute. I think you should pull of more Fantage edits to make this more unique
I don't like the concept though it's kinda like Cast a Spell, and not all that original. You should try using those great ideas you use for RPs.
But nice job.
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Wed Jan 02, 2013 9:47 am

Clockwork Invention wrote:
I think it's cute. I think you should pull of more Fantage edits to make this more unique
I don't like the concept though it's kinda like Cast a Spell, and not all that original. You should try using those great ideas you use for RPs.
But nice job.

It is original. If you want I can PM you the whole storyline but it would spoil it for you.
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Wed Jan 02, 2013 12:33 pm

the animation is nice, and the story is pretty interesting!!
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:38 pm

If you want another prem account on the series I can give you mine to use.
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:39 pm

Pudding wrote:
If you want another prem account on the series I can give you mine to use.

If its a boy, yes. Not if its a girl because all the girls are me. Thanks, by the way!
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PostSubject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!]   Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:49 pm

This really reminds me of Cast A Spell....I don't know but it does...Maybe,use the storylines from your RP's because then someone will probably comment saying you copied and start drama.

But its nice
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