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Yes it's pretty good for your age!
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PostSubject: Robot takeover (story)   Mon Dec 31, 2012 9:46 am

Hi this is a little story I wrote I hope you guys enjoy it. I still need to work on my figurative language though.

Robot takeover Chapter 1

Beep Boop. Everyone has heard this noise as an original "robot" well excuse me that is not the robot I hear! In fact robots are quite silent and don't make weird noises out of the blue. Well excuse my manners I forgot to introduce myself, Clover Sweinsting.
Most people say little girls don't belong in this place well it ain't my fault I was born in this awful place as a slave to the robots! Tell my Ma that she will make you happy or not! Trust me my mum said If we ever got a chance to escape this horrible world she will go fast as it goes.
I will tell you something very important when the robots take over the world surrender! It will be easier for you humans to survive trust me being a slave to a robot is really easy they just need oil and whatever. I am still wondering who built these robots, the master twins haven't been found yet and the robots search very good.
As the story goes, Once upon a time two mechanics a wife and a husband had twins one a boy and one a girl. The twins grew up with nuts and bolts their dad tought them how to build cars, while their mom taught them how to cook and make spare parts. The twins grew very fond of mechanical stuff so they decided to build robots not ordinary robots, smart robots. In order for these robots to be smart they needed some brains but not human brains. There was the valley of brains in order to get the robots smart they needed to go to the valley of brains, once there the twins saw two paths one leading through a scary woods and the other leading through pink bubblegum and laughy taffy. The boy was too manly to go through the pink bubblegum path so he went through the scary path, leaving his sister behind. His sister went through the pink bubble gum path...
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PostSubject: Re: Robot takeover (story)   Mon Dec 31, 2012 10:28 am

Wow this is actually pretty good!
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PostSubject: Re: Robot takeover (story)   Mon Dec 31, 2012 9:31 pm

"Merry" Mayu wrote:
Wow this is actually pretty good!

Thank you! I hope to write more about this.
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