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Primrose
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PostSubject: Quick sketch   Wed Jan 02, 2013 12:47 pm

I was bored so I just did a quick doodle on my tablet. I don't have paint tool sai or anything with layers. I hope you like it Smile
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Please critique!
I know it sucks.
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PostSubject: Re: Quick sketch   Wed Jan 02, 2013 1:06 pm

the head is lopsided and the shoulders slope too much, but the coloring is pretty good considering this is only one layer!!! maybe try working on shape and structure?
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PostSubject: Re: Quick sketch   Wed Jan 02, 2013 1:44 pm

Not sure why, but this could be really unique if you went far out with the body in my opinion.
Hmm, like some kind of Picasso. (There is a certain artist I learned about in school that did something like this, I forgot the name, but I'll replace the name with Picasso)

I think the body need to have a little more width, or the arms and head need to be thinner.
One part of the head is sticking out too much.
the mouth should be placed a bit more in the middle.

And yeah, I can't believe the colors and everything could be done with one layer. ;o
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PostSubject: Re: Quick sketch   Wed Jan 02, 2013 1:48 pm

omg it looks like the 'scream' picture!
It has the 'derp' face lololololol...
Abstract said it all and the chest i think should be higher.
and yes i believe that we could color in one layer because before I used only one layer for coloring ... haha
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PostSubject: Re: Quick sketch   Wed Jan 02, 2013 1:49 pm

That is so pretty and the colors really match ;w;
The only critique I have is the head needs to be thinner.
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PostSubject: Re: Quick sketch   Wed Jan 02, 2013 1:49 pm

hop wrote:
the head is lopsided and the shoulders slope too much, but the coloring is pretty good considering this is only one layer!!! maybe try working on shape and structure?

Ya. I can never get the head to look right, because I can't even draw circles right.
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PostSubject: Re: Quick sketch   Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:40 am

The shoulder is too low, make it little higher.
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