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What do you think will happen during the journey? [Multiple Choice]
Sharp will fight the 7 Legends.
23%
 23% [ 5 ]
Sharp will be killed.
36%
 36% [ 8 ]
Chuko and Ma will be killed.
9%
 9% [ 2 ]
The Dark Village will be destroyed.
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Someone captures Sharp.
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 18% [ 4 ]
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PostSubject: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:19 pm

Previously...
In the last story, Sharpsul Lacario, now known as the heroic Sage, has defeated Pain, the corpse who destroyed Fantage. Everyone has cheered and thanked and threw Sharp up in the air to celebrate his victory. He spent the rest of the day at the beach in the sunset, and ended up getting a gift from princess Straw during the night. He received the battle scroll from Chuko and Ma. Sharp is now the hero of Fantage, but that doesn't mean, there will be no more fighting...

NEW CHAPTERS-

Chapter 7- Travel to the Cloud Village
Chapter 8- Dumb and Dumber

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Chapter 1- The Return of Sage Sharpsul

I was known as the hero for defeating Pain. I am proud of that. Everyone thanked me and celebrated with me. Pain was a corpse, he might have been evil, but we had a powerful bond. There shouldn't be threats, there should be peace.

It was a sunny Fantage afternoon, I walked along the beach, smiling at the sky. I was holding that scroll Chuko and Ma gave me.



I sat on the dock, I was smiling at my scroll.

I heard hopping, it got closer to me, and I felt something on my shoulder.

I looked at my shoulder, and there he was, Chuko!

"Sharpie-Boy!" Chuko said.

"Chuko, you're here!" I said, we hopped all over the place, and then Ma came along.

We froze, and Chuko and I cracked up, like we were old buddies.

"Boys..." Ma said, with a smile.

That was the beginning of the peace!

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Chapter 2- The Important Meeting

Me, Chuko, and Ma walked through the forest to go to Lucky Bob's.

"Hey man, thanks for the scroll!" I said to Chuko.

"Thank Ma too!" Chuko said, smiling.

Ma smiled.

"No need to, lad, it was his idea!" Ma said, jumping onto my shoulders.

We reached the right end of the forest, and walked into Lucky Bob's Trading Post.



"Sharp, my man! Congrats on defeating Pain, lad!" Bob said.

"Thanks!" I said, high-fiving him.

"Oh, Mentholx said he wants to see you right away for a meeting at the Comet & Co." Bob said, handing me a letter.

Me and Chuko read the letter, it said:

"Please see me at the Comet & Co for a very important Fantage Recovery meeting.

Yours truly,

Mentholx.
"

Chuko and I looked at each other.

"The meeting starts in two minutes, run Sharpsul!" Bob said.

"I'll summon him there." Chuko said, winking.

"Your choice." Bob said, winking back at him.

Chuko summoned me to Mt. Fantage. We waited about a minute and a half and we walked into the Comet & Co.



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Chapter 3- Team Discussion

I walked into the building, seeing Mentholx sitting in his seat. I took a seat on the other side of the table.

"May I stay?" Chuko asked.

"You're welcomed." Mentholx said.

Chuko hopped onto my crown.

"So what are we talking about?" I asked Mentholx.

Mentholx was silent at first, then he spoke.

"Well first, we have bad news..." Mentholx said.

"What kind of bad news?" I asked.

He was silent again, then he spoke.

"One citizen couldn't be healed from the destruction..." he said, looking down at the table.

But that was impossible, every citizen was supposed to be healed!

"How's that possible? Every citizen was supposed to be healed, that can't be!" I said, more worried as ever.

"Excuse me, Mentholx, but after Pain died, some mysterious power went around Fantage and all the citizen's automatically healed. This must be a mistake..." Chuko said.

"It's not a mistake. We became so mad, we all bashed Pain and through him in the water, setting him into flames." Mentholx said.

My teeth chattered.

I stood up, and I yelled.

"Me and Pain had a bond that only WE understood! There was a simple reason why he did this to Fantage! He doesn't have a family, or friends, or anything. This was something to make up war from 1,000 years ago! He's been a reincarnation for 1,000 years!" I yelled, with my hand on the desk.

Chuko looked at me. The look meant, "Please...".

Mentholx put his hands together. Then he spoke.

"We didn't know! It's too late to do anything!" Mentholx yelled.

Mentholx handed me two pieces of paper.

"Anyway, as a team, Fantage is going to recover the whole entire place..." Menthox said.

"That's why I'm here? You just had to say that?" I asked, rolling my eyes.

"That and the un-healing incident." Mentholx said.

"Read these papers carefully..." Mentholx said, and he walked out.

I walked out too..

Holding these papers...



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Chapter 4- The Ultimate Journey!

Me and Chuko walked to the Sunblock. I was already mad at Mentholx, and I'm sure Mentholx is mad at me. I could care less.

"Sharpie-Boy, relax, just take a deep-"

"I can't calm down! Only me and you know Pain's feelings!" I shouted.

I walked into Sunblock. I got into the DNA Pod. I just wanted a nice tan.

"Let me change real quick...." I told Chuko. I handed him the papers, and went outside to change.

I quickly changed, and went back into Sunblock.



"Sharpie-Boy! You gotta look at this paper!" Chuko said, jumping onto my shoulders, and handing me the papers.

I read the paper.

"The Legendary Adventure

There has been trouble in a village near the Cloud Village. 7 Legends have been going around, destroying homes and places. These 7 Legends are dressed as black, but do not walk in groups. On your way, you might find creepy people and hard-undefeated ninjas. Can you help everyone near the Cloud Village?
"

I crumbled the paper, stomped on it, and threw it to the ground.

"Sharpie-Boy, what's the matter with you?!" Chuko yelled.

"How dare Mentholx talk about bashing Pain and throwing him in water, and then he gives me a mission to save a village from some stupid 7 Legends nonsense!" I yelled.

"But you're the hero who defeated Pain! Think about the great adventure we could have!" Chuko said.

I looked at him.

He was right, I couldn't walk away from this...




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Chapter 5- The Adventure Begins!

Tuesday, 7:03 A.M, Eastern Standard Time

I ran until I reached Downtown. It was good to not have the area so full early in the morning!

Chuko poofed up in Downtown.

I was wearing a plain shirt with my pack, blue snake jeans, my usual crown and flipped hair, and my rocket board.



"Sharpie-Boy, meet me at the Castle, alrighty?" Chuko said.

"Alrighty!" I said eagerly.

I ran to the castle, and Chuko was standing near the cannon.

"Let's go over some guidelines, first.." Chuko said.

"First, don't go super-wild. You never know where we might go. There could be Chigago Wolf hunters out there.." Chuko said.

After 20 minutes of his 'guidelines' I said "OK, can we go now?" I said in a patience-losing voice.

"Let's go boy...." Chuko said..

It was time for a journey!

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Chapter 6- Help with Friends

"Wait Chuko! Why don't we get some friends to come along?!" I said, getting excited.

"Sharpie-Boy, this shouldn't be like Pain, you don't need friends.." Chuko said, continuing to hop.

"C'mon, geezer!" I said, running after Chuko.

"No!" Chuko said, still hopping.

I picked Chuko up, and I put him upside down, hanging him by his feet.

"Gaaaah!" Chuko screeched.



"Gaah, fine!" Chuko said. "Just.. don't take too long!" Chuko finished.

I headed into Downtown. I asked people like Beauty, Princess Straw, Ma, and a few other friends.

Beauty, Straw, and Ma said yes!



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Chapter 7- Travel to the Cloud Village

All of us met at the castle pond to explain the rules (once more), and then we were gonna head out.

On our way to the Cloud Village, Beauty came up to my ear and told me something hilarious.

"Chuko's beard is furry..." she said, giggling.

I had a little smile, and then I seriously fell onto the ground LAUGHING.



Chuko listened to the whole thing, and he turned around, and saw laughing my brains out.

"Shut up! It's not funny boy!" Chuko yelled with his fist at me, and his face turned different color shades.

"Sharpie-Boy!!!" Chuko yelled.

I finally stopped laughing, and I jumped back up and and we continued to walk.

2 hours later.....

We were at a very foggy place when I felt something hit the back of my head, I turned around, and I saw this girl with 2 swords.



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Chapter 8- Dumb and Dumber

"HOWDY!!" The strange girl screamed.

"Your in our way....." I said.

"Sharp, don't be rude. Hi there! We're from Fantage. We have a mission to cover, so please excuse us."

"We're ya'll goin'?!" She screamed at us.

This women sounded stupid and sounded like a cowgirl.

"That's none of your business." I said, frustrated.

"We have a mission to defeat the 7 Legends at the Cloud Village, also known as, Cloudba." Chuko said.

This women looked kind of shocked.

"You're gonna need more then your small little crew to defeat them! Tag me along!" she responded.

Great, first we were minding our own business, then we have another first grader along with our squad.

"Sounds like a plan." Ma said.

"FOLLOW ME YA'LL! I'll show you the way of the ninjas of our town!" Sarah screamed, running up ahead.



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Chapter 9- Heartbeating Story of the Past

We were traveling for about 2 hours now. This girl kept yapping and yapping, and would NEVER STOP.

"Hey, could we know your name, young girl?" Ma asked all sweetly.

"I'm Sarah. I might have been crazy before, but that was because our town was kind of like Western style. Sorry for my behavior..."
Sarah said, with some guilty expression.

"Well, Sarah, as long as you don't act like a ding-a-ling again, it's cool." I said, with a strong attitude.

"Sharpie-Boy! Stop being rude!" Chuko screamed at me.

"I'm Princess Strawberry, and this is my friend, Lyli, or Beauty." Straw said, dashing up to us.

"It's nice to know all of you!" Sarah exclaimed.

Then, Sarah tagged next to me, tapping me on my shoulder.

"What do you want?"

"Well, about earlier..." she said.

"I know, you're sorry, OK? I get it."

"No, not that... I have an explanation for my behaviors."

"I thought your exclamation was that your town is some kinda Western style?" I asked.

"Well.. there's more to that... You see.."

I got confused. I didn't really want to hear her stories, but what other choice did I have?



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Chapter 10- Secrets Between Two...

"It was when I was 8 years old.... 6 years ago..."

"My father, we would play board games and puzzles and eat cookies and have huge birthday parties for my birthday. He was everything to me, he even cheered me up after my grand-mother died...." Sarah said, looking like she was about to tear up.

This warm fuzzy feeling scattered through my body.



She kept going on with her story.

She had tears rolling down her face....

"My... father... he died on duty. He got captured by 3 gangsters... and they killed him... right in front of me...."

My eyes became huge. My eyes moved in shocked, and my mouth was hung open.

" 'I will always be there.. no matter what... my little angel...'. Those were my father's last words, before he closed his eyes... with me standing in front of him." Sarah said. Sarah's story was seriously heart-breaking.. I almost cried too.

She wiped her eyes, trying not to cry, but the tears went through her hands.

"I'm... I'm sorry, Sarah..." I said, completely shocked by her story. Who could've killed her father like that?

"And my father... thought me all about horse riding, and West accents. That's why, I carried on his accent for him..... because out of all the stuff he did for me... horse-riding was the best of all..." Sarah said.



I started to see how death felt.. especially for Sarah.



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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:21 pm

Awesome chapter!~
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:22 pm

awsome, can i be in it, i want to so bad, pm me yes or no
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:25 pm

Epic...
I cannot wait for more,
if yoko's in it, (NOT shinelly, YOKO!!!)
Ill be happy. If not, what the hay.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:42 pm

Nice so far, can't wait to see how sarah comes in. Very Happy GO WARRIOR CHICKS BAHLEEEEAY!!! (Yes my odd war cry, gotta have one for when I get to the right level on WoW xD)
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:42 pm

Thanks guys! Once I get a little more replies, I'll write the next chapters!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:45 pm

I can't wait for moar chapters!

I also can't wait when we get to be in it! XDD

MOARMOARMOAR.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:37 pm

Chapters 2-4 are posted!

NEXT CHAPTERS:

Chapter 5- The Adventure Begins!
Chapter 6- Help with Friends
Chapter 7- Travel to the Cloud Village

Also, a new poll has been added!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:42 pm

hAHA, EPIC! May I send you a pic of my character?

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:42 pm

Kawaii Maker wrote:
hAHA, EPIC! May I send you a pic of my character?

Thanks! And yeah, you can (:.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:55 pm

Sorry, Sharp, but your writing style is confuzzling...and it's young.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:29 am

I need a bit more viewers!

I'll be posting the next chapters later!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:45 pm

Bluerivers wrote:
Sorry, Sharp, but your writing style is confuzzling...and it's young.

I agree~

You have punctuation errors, plus you need better words to describe what you're saying.

(It's also hard to follow~)

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:51 pm

Its nice till now! Lets see wats comin next!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sun Jun 20, 2010 2:31 pm

Like it, dude. So far (:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Sun Jun 20, 2010 2:35 pm

Ew, Jordan xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:24 pm

Duddee, continue it. T-T

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:31 pm

I'll be writing up to Chapter 12 today!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:43 pm

I Wanna be in it so badly!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:31 pm

Chapters 5 and 6 are up! Ready for the journey of danger?
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:43 pm

sharp... you're making me mad, I WANNA BE IN it plz??
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:04 pm

LAWL! You put Metholx in the story? Anyways, nice story, 'Sharpie-Boy'! xD Hm... A lot of people seriously wanna be in it. xD You shuld at least let nons take part sort of
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:33 pm

I liked how on your old one, you had a place at the top saying the new chapters, that was helpful.... anyways nice story, you just need alot more detail... ALOT. Also the characters have like no personality, make them scream/cry/giggle more. :]
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 9:30 pm

I wantz to be in the story! Or, I forgot. Am I already in the story? lol.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #2   Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:24 pm

2008sarah wrote:
I liked how on your old one, you had a place at the top saying the new chapters, that was helpful.... anyways nice story, you just need alot more detail... ALOT. Also the characters have like no personality, make them scream/cry/giggle more. :]
Ooh!! Also, the chapters seem too short to me. THese chapters seem to be for a childrens chapter book.
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