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 Dear Diary Part 1. The escape

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Wizzy
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PostSubject: Dear Diary Part 1. The escape   Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:57 am

This took HOURS to think of i hope you like!!

** The Bolds are the Dear Diary**

Short Summary:
 

Its looong
part 1:
 
Pheww that tooked a long time. Critique please. (Btw first story Very Happy)

Also any tips??
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PostSubject: Re: Dear Diary Part 1. The escape   Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:08 am

This story is interesting! I wish for more! Best story I've ever read online till now
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PostSubject: Re: Dear Diary Part 1. The escape   Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:27 am

Thanks L.O.L!!! Now i got to think of part 2 D-:
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PostSubject: Re: Dear Diary Part 1. The escape   Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:35 am

Yes indeed.. Her second voice xD.. well I love the story, I was shock why Emma let Clarie stay on their house and have school.. still confusing but trailing,, Sooo better make the part 2.. ^^
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