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PostSubject: Little doodle   Little doodle Icon_minitimeFri Jan 04, 2013 12:40 pm

I was just messing about with sai and i drew this, Can you rate the hair coloring and critique it!

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PostSubject: Re: Little doodle   Little doodle Icon_minitimeFri Jan 04, 2013 12:47 pm

Hmmm. 8.5/10:

Try to blend black hair with the blond hair a bit so it could look more natural.

I don't know much about chibi/anime but I'll try:

Try raising her eyes higher on her head.
The eyelashes on her right are much longer than the other side.

It's cute. c:
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