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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| Subject: More fantage creations  Fri Jan 04, 2013 6:56 pm | |
| - Made these:
Yes, I know I always use the same Fantage bases. Anyway, I need you to rate and critique. I think my biggest problem though is how I shade in random places ugh... | |
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alex
Moderator
Posts : 23507
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 24
Location : google maps
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Fri Jan 04, 2013 7:44 pm | |
| The hair looks really stiff in both of the pictures. And on the second one, the headphones kinda disappear into her hair? Not sure if that was intentional. This is really nice other than the random shading, though! c: | |
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Gabriella
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1181
Join date : 2010-04-10
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Fri Jan 04, 2013 7:49 pm | |
| They are good. But I have some concerns. - first recolor:
The bangs need to be longer. They don't have to be even, though. Her skirt (or I think it is) needs to be longer. Her hair needs to be shaded better.
- second recolor:
I don't think that she needs bangs. I can't see part of her head phone.
Last edited by akinabear on Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:52 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Fri Jan 04, 2013 7:55 pm | |
| @Len, thanks and what program do you think I should use to make these? My program is pretty crappy.
@Anikabear, thanks for the critique! | |
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alex
Moderator
Posts : 23507
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 24
Location : google maps
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Fri Jan 04, 2013 7:59 pm | |
| For my recolours/edits/whatever I use MSPaint (vista which sucks honestly) and if I'm doing something from scratch, I use paint tool SAI (binary tool and the layers because it makes it like 500% easier). Of course, no program really sucks, it's just what you make out of it. Like, I can't use gimp to save my life, but photoshop is waay easier to use for me. | |
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Reese
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6320
Join date : 2012-11-12
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Fri Jan 04, 2013 8:08 pm | |
| Those are pretty cute! The only problem I have is that the hair is way too stiff. | |
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Daisy
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3369
Join date : 2011-12-22
Age : 23
Location : In Hell, With Sebastian..
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Fri Jan 04, 2013 8:12 pm | |
| They are good..
Here's some of my crit.
~Purple ~
I like on how you made the clothes. The clothes has a nice shading so no problem. For the hair make the bangs little long.
Red~Black ~
I also like on how you made the clothes. I more like the clothes of the red~black than the Purple because its just to stylish. for the hair make the bangs not to pointed, make the end of the bangs kinda curvy. | |
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Sat Jan 05, 2013 8:01 am | |
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Mr.Noah
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2629
Join date : 2012-06-27
Age : 26
Location : New York
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:27 am | |
| The only thing that bothers me are the bangs...There to high up the forehead and bangs aren't that pointy.But overall its good,just work on shading and bangs and you'll be good.Maybe use some other edits for hair refrences??
7/10 | |
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Magdaleena
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2261
Join date : 2010-04-26
Age : 28
Location : Somewhere in northern Europe. Probably hours ahead of you.
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:43 am | |
| You just need to learn how hair actually works. And to avoid random shading, find a lightsource and think of your fantagian as a 3D object. Then shade where you think the light won't reach. Also, I've got some better Fantage bases, straight from Fantage itself:  <-Old base provided for digital contest entries, I think? - And these ones are actually used in Fantage:
You're welcome. | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: More fantage creations Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:57 am | |
| Omg those are really nice. I can't pixel fantage hair from scratch to save my life.
I think the bangs are ling enough.
Just try finding a light source. That's about it. |
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