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PostSubject: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 8:21 am

Sorry it's not colored/you can't see it well. Had to take it in the dark.



I know the eyebrow is kind of big, but I believe there are a lot of people with big eyebrows. Razz

critique/rate please. C:
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 8:35 am

This is really good! But I think the eyebrow is a little too low. Good job!
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 8:37 am

This is pure awesome.

You draw way better than all those idiots who literally throw paint at a piece of paper and sell their "art" for $6000.
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 8:38 am

Thank you. ;o

I think it isn't the eyebrow, I probably shaded too much under it.
Thank you anyway! c:

And I would never buy/sell art for $6000, but some people do which is so... much for me. o3o
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:31 pm

I love this !!
i love how you shading this, and kept it looking very realistic. Although im not sure if tat was intentional, but her pupil looks kinda wierd, is she supposed to be hypnotized or somthing, and also her eyebrow is to close to her eye. sure alot of woman wave bushy brows , but eye brows arent that close to the eye ball unless the person is like super old. over-all i really like it
9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:43 pm

sherley739 wrote:
I love this !!
i love how you shading this, and kept it looking very realistic. Although im not sure if tat was intentional, but her pupil looks kinda wierd, is she supposed to be hypnotized or somthing, and also her eyebrow is to close to her eye. sure alot of woman wave bushy brows , but eye brows arent that close to the eye ball unless the person is like super old. over-all i really like it
9/10

I just added the swirl for design. xD

And I shaded it too roughly, which is why the eyebrow seems too low.
Thanks for the point outs though.
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:07 pm

That is so good is the thing on the bottom of the eye part of her eyebrow? Or is it something else, either way you did a very good job and you should be proud. I rate it 10/10!!
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:15 pm

You mean that thing that's round, dark, and curved?

No, that's actually the (extremely dark) shading of th nose.
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:21 pm

There's nothing wrong with the way you drew it, but the placing is off. If you go look in the mirror now, there is some space between the eyebrow and the eye, there should be your eye crease, and then the brown bone, above that is where the eyebrow should be set.
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:24 pm

There's nothing wrong with the way you drew it, but the placing is off. If you go look in the mirror now, there is some space between the eyebrow and the eye, there should be your eye crease, and then the brown bone, above that is where the eyebrow should be set.
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What a coincidence, since I used a mirror of my eye to draw this picture. xD
Thank you for the tips~
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PostSubject: Re: Eye 1   Sun Jan 06, 2013 4:18 pm

Abstract wrote:
sherley739 wrote:
I love this !!
i love how you shading this, and kept it looking very realistic. Although im not sure if that was intentional, but her pupil looks kinda wierd, is she supposed to be hypnotized or somthing, and also her eyebrow is to close to her eye. sure alot of woman have bushy brows , but eye brows arent that close to the eye ball unless the person is like super old. over-all i really like it
9/10

I just added the swirl for design. xD

And I shaded it too roughly, which is why the eyebrow seems too low.
Thanks for the point outs though.
yeah np, i just noticed my typos.
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