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PostSubject: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:02 pm

I have no idea where this should go because its fantage fanart but a drawing so I'mma put it in fantage creations.
I guess I improved. This is a re-do of a drawing I made in August. I'm really proud of myself so don't try to crush me okay?
Original:
 
Now:
 
Please critique and rate. Redlining would be appreciated.

Thank you and hope you people like.
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:03 pm

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The neck and the face shape bother me for some reason.

BUT THATS SO FRIKIN GOOD OMG

9.9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:06 pm

That is really good! And you really improved from when you first showed us your drawings! But the head shape needs to be fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:08 pm

Thanks people! Yeah I know the face shape is off but I'm too lazy to fix that
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:09 pm

The hair is amazing.
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:12 pm

For the first one you used pillow shading, which is like a crime XD jk

Anyways....WOWOWOWOW THAT IS SO GOODDDD

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Edit- STOP BEING SO PRO GURLLLL
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:14 pm

Your really improved! I love how you drew the hair!
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:21 pm

rufi what are you doing you can't do redlines rufi stahp:
 

Sorry it's so big but if I resized it the text would be too small.
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 6:30 pm

Rufistar wrote:
rufi what are you doing you can't do redlines rufi stahp:
 

Sorry it's so big but if I resized it the text would be too small.
Thank you, its really helpful :>
And you do red lines really well.
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 6:59 pm

You improved so much, I am stunned.
Keep on drawing, DarkManor! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:20 pm

Surprised my sister has talent???
LOL JK
10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:30 pm

Noah wrote:
:o my sister has talent???
LOL JK
10/10

She's your sister?
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:32 pm

Thanks everyone so much, I feel loved
@Rufi we aren't actually siblings but we call each other siblings and yeah. SilverBell is my real sister lol


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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:33 pm

Rufistar wrote:
Noah wrote:
:o my sister has talent???
LOL JK
10/10

She's your sister?

Well, they are close friends so it's sort of like, "sisters."
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:09 am

Its nice.. 8/10

Make the neck little big and kinda long, Make the shoulder little higher and big. Make the body little big. The big I mean that would fit to the head because the head its just to big for its body.
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Thu Jan 10, 2013 10:24 pm

Super cute!I was gonna say the faces were a bit off... but then I realized DUH THEY'RE FANTAGIANS. I love them btw! 8.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage Drawing   Thu Jan 10, 2013 10:29 pm

You've improved very much, indeed. I really like the way you colored~. 8/10
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