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eden
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PostSubject: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 12:26 am

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i dunno i just wanted to draw a short haired girl sajhfk
also i wanted to try different skin colours,, so yep! o:
the background iskinda messed up an the colouring with the clothes and skin is kinda off but
other than those things, feel free to rate out of 10 and critique! C:
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PostSubject: Re: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 1:44 am

My crit.

7.5/10

The head is too small for its body. Its shoulder is too low so make it little higher. Its really a nice drawing but trying to make the head little bigger to make it fit to its body.
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PostSubject: Re: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:31 am

I love the eyes. Period.
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PostSubject: Re: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 7:19 am

The head looks squished,also to small for the body.But good job

7.2/10
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PostSubject: Re: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 7:25 am

7/10

I'm not sure if you were going for an anime or human concept? (It most likely is anime in my opinion) If human, the chin is too pointy.
The head should be a bit oval from top to bottom (not too much, it's a good size though)
Bring up the shoulders by an inch.
The lip needs to be brought a BIT more to her right. If it's supposed to be like that, add a dimple. to her left.

I like it though. c; Keep practicing like always!
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PostSubject: Re: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 9:31 am

thanks for the critiques everyone!!!!
y eah sorry about the head being too small, i kinda drew this half asleep oops
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PostSubject: Re: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 9:35 am

It's really cute, but the body is like a blob and the head is too small and squished.
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PostSubject: Re: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:17 am

thanks for the crit hgkdjsa
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PostSubject: Re: skettcch   Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:35 am

I think its good. 7/10
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