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PostSubject: Just A Manga Girl.   Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:18 pm

I think she's cute.

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Feel free to critique. **She's not my best.**
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Manga Girl.   Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:23 pm

Cute, what manga is she from? (Unless if you made her up, Idk. ;p)

Anyway, her body should be facing the opposite her direction. It needs to go more towards here right. (It's at her left)
One of her cheeks is a bit larger than the other.
Maybe make her head a bit more small?

Keep practicing. ;o I like her eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Manga Girl.   Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:24 pm

Awwwww! I love her eyes :3
The head is sort of big, though. 8/10
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Manga Girl.   Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:24 pm

Abstract wrote:
Cute, what manga is she from? (Unless if you made her up, Idk. ;p)

Anyway, her body should be facing the opposite her direction. It needs to go more towards here right. (It's at her left)
One of her cheeks is a bit larger than the other.
Maybe make her head a bit more small?

Keep practicing. ;o I like her eyes.

I made her up.
I tried something different, I drew her face and then her head.
Thats why her cheeks are different sizes.
And why her head looks bigger.
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Manga Girl.   Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:27 pm

It is really awesome! The only thing that bugs me is how high up her eyes are, and the head size. I love it though!
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Manga Girl.   Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:28 pm

Rainbow. wrote:
Abstract wrote:
Cute, what manga is she from? (Unless if you made her up, Idk. ;p)

Anyway, her body should be facing the opposite her direction. It needs to go more towards here right. (It's at her left)
One of her cheeks is a bit larger than the other.
Maybe make her head a bit more small?

Keep practicing. ;o I like her eyes.

I made her up.
I tried something different, I drew her face and then her head.
Thats why her cheeks are different sizes.
And why her head looks bigger.

Well, you can always make the body bigger.
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Manga Girl.   Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:36 pm

I like the eyes Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Manga Girl.   Mon Jan 14, 2013 4:19 am

Soo My crit is. 8/10 It is cute. I love the eyes.
Here's my corrections. Try to understand it. xD

The head is too big.
The neck is too small for the big head.
The shoulders are too small and too down for the head. (( Make it little higher ))
The chin is too sharp.
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PostSubject: Re: Just A Manga Girl.   Wed Jan 16, 2013 7:19 pm

@rainbow, i think she's cute too!! perhaps add more variety and uniqueness to here design? she's rather plain, and i bet you could draw super cute, detailed characters!! Smile
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