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PostSubject: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:29 pm

Okay! I have a lot so far. I made ALL of this.
Kagamine Family Photo!!!:
 
Comic! (Featuring Lenka, Jan, Wun, and Mikuo Hatsune){dialogue under picture}:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:33 pm

That. is. a. BIG. family.
Wow, nice drawings though! :3
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 8:00 pm

I think it's cute! Your drawings are nice.
Would you mind if I critiqued and red lined?
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 8:02 pm

Sure.
Updated!
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 8:03 pm

Your drawings r cute. R they chibi? That's one BIG family. I love your drawings.
Edit: Your comic is so funny!
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 8:50 pm

Your drawings are good. Its just that the bodies are too skinny.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 10:03 pm

I know, they are skinny. But, I made a couple of mistakes. I dont wanna make them meaty, do I?
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 10:04 pm

That's a big family! But they're soooo cute! The only thing is they're a bit stiff.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Mon Jan 14, 2013 10:05 pm

Your comic is adorable!
Your bodies are too skinny for your huge family.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Tue Jan 15, 2013 12:06 am

"Merry" Mayu wrote:
I know, they are skinny. But, I made a couple of mistakes. I dont wanna make them meaty, do I?
Anime characters aren't generally skinny as cartoon characters, they are more proprionate. They don't have to be meaty, but they should be in between. I'll do the red lining tomorrow.

You should always do a sketch in pencil first then outline it. It looks like you drew the outline first. Its okay, I used to do that when I was your age. Just try to do more sketches, it helps a ton, trust me.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Tue Jan 15, 2013 4:31 pm

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"Merry" Mayu wrote:
I know, they are skinny. But, I made a couple of mistakes. I dont wanna make them meaty, do I?
Anime characters aren't generally skinny as cartoon characters, they are more proprionate. They don't have to be meaty, but they should be in between. I'll do the red lining tomorrow.

You should always do a sketch in pencil first then outline it. It looks like you drew the outline first. Its okay, I used to do that when I was your age. Just try to do more sketches, it helps a ton, trust me.

actually cartoon characters are typically less thin, as anime characters have, well, less variety than cartoon characters. (not always, but hte style youre going for yeah)
however, all this art strikes me more cartoony anime!! its cute and i think you have lots of potential for a cute, unique art style by drawing like this than by trying to do perfect anime.
yeah uu

HOWEVER!! the girls showing off their belly buttons do look unhealthily skinny, and though no, they dont have to be meaty, they can be skinny in a way that looks more healthy and realistic uvub

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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:44 am

They are pretty cute. Especially the eyes. They are a nice family.
My crit is 8/10
They are too skinny. Because when you make a anime there body should be meaty.
My corrections ..
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Wed Jan 16, 2013 7:16 pm

your art is very cute and adorable and the bodies are pretty good waaaa flower flower

but yea, what oliver said about the girls showing their bellies. that looks to be the only major problem, so yeah!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Wed Jan 16, 2013 7:32 pm

something that annoys me about your drawings:
Spoiler:
 

The rest is really great though.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Wed Jan 16, 2013 9:12 pm

Lin wrote:
something that annoys me about your drawings:
Spoiler:
 

The rest is really great though.
NO!!!!!!!
NO!!!!
NO!!!!!!!!!!!
ok first of all i dont wnat to offend but the drawing you drew is not proportionate........ at all
oboboosbosoo os do not start directly after the neck!! ! ! they start at the armpit

and the body looks really.... fake Sad

OK!!! also like please keep drawing in this sttyle for me you can do this cute cartoony anime thing it'll be more original plz :,( make it more proporitionate but it doesnt have to b perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!
i honestly think this style has a lot more going for it than what everyone here is telling you to do, take critique, but guys, pleASE critique generally!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think ur style has lots of potential and whne i was 10 i drew way worse than this <3
(however if you are going for a more typical anime look mikus is ok but i would recommend looking at real bodies and stylizing from there. BUT THIS STYLE is a lot more interesting, in my opinion.)
also guys you should never tell anyone to draw someone "meaty" or "skinny" unless they constantly do that (here everyone is too thin, for example), because gues what....
MEATY PEOPLE EXIST!!! :O
RELAAALY SKINNY PEOPLE EXIST, TOOO!!!! :OOO
PEOPLE IN BETWEEN,,,, PEOPLE WHO YOU CANT TELL EXACTLY WHAT BODY TYPE
its ridiculous you cant have a guide on how to draw bodies unless its very general Sad im so mad
even in anime like come on u guys :////

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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Wed Jan 16, 2013 9:33 pm

This is so cute Mayu!
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Thu Jan 17, 2013 10:44 am

Sorry? I don't even know what to say. I started anime in November, when i joined this site.
So don't blame me if I did anything wrong, I am still learning.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:27 pm

also!!!!! mayu, if it isn't too much trouble could i have a request?? ur drawin sgs.......thhey.....makeem e happy Surprised Smile Wink I love you

i waswonde ring if you woudl d draw my oc, andrew????? he is here: http://www.fantageforum.com/t12727-a-sheep-boy
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:29 pm

"Merry" Mayu wrote:
Sorry? I don't even know what to say. I started anime in November, when i joined this site.
So don't blame me if I did anything wrong, I am still learning.

Wait! You only started in November and your so good already?


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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Sat Jan 19, 2013 6:33 pm

I'm sorry to say this but those are disproportionly drawn. It looks like they have a eating disorder! There is a gray area between chubby and skinny. THAT'S WHAT ANIME IS. It's gray a area. It's not like your gonna make them look like a big blue berry. Make them look like at LEAST a size medium. Take a picture of yourself and then think of the drawing as you. Now are you really that skinny? No
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Sat Jan 19, 2013 6:35 pm

"Merry" Mayu wrote:
Sorry? I don't even know what to say. I started anime in November, when i joined this site.
So don't blame me if I did anything wrong, I am still learning.
We understand, and besides your only 10. When I was 10 I didn't draw hood as you.

But you should accept our critque don't be offended were only trying to help you get better. You shouldn't think we're accusing of you of anything. We can be honest, you're our friend, you wanted to hear our thoughts then here we critique.


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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Sat Jan 19, 2013 6:37 pm

Now I understand. I have also gotten better in the past week.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Sat Jan 19, 2013 6:39 pm

"Merry" Mayu wrote:
Now I understand. I have also gotten better in the past week.
Just continue drawing and never stop. The only way to decline progress is to quit.
I like to look at images to teach me how to draw. You should buy some How to Draw Mamga books ot use tutorials. But you should try coming up with your own style too! Make it unique! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Sat Jan 19, 2013 6:49 pm

http://www.fantageforum.com/t13944p135-baka-and-test-discussion
Go here and go to page 10. Scroll to my latest post. There is a picture of Himeji.
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PostSubject: Re: Kagamine Station!!! (a Mayu art thread)   Sat Jan 19, 2013 6:51 pm

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I'm sorry to say this but those are disproportionly drawn. It looks like they have a eating disorder! There is a gray area between chubby and skinny. THAT'S WHAT ANIME IS. It's gray a area. It's not like your gonna make them look like a big blue berry. Make them look like at LEAST a size medium. Take a picture of yourself and then think of the drawing as you. Now are you really that skinny? No

uhh what is anime exactly :/ lets see different anime styles shall we ^o^
really big:
 
if you look really carefully youll notice.... NONE OF THEM LOOK THE SAME!!! ooh exciting O.o o.O
theres no way.... to draw anime... correctly... please get this through your heads.... oh my god....

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