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dewey
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PostSubject: i drew again...   Fri Jan 18, 2013 6:36 pm

Umm... Yea... Rate/critique I guess. When I drew this I don't know what I was thinking. xD
All of my drawings end up huge because I take them with my laptop:
 
I cant draw shoes so I cut her off. I tried to draw converse and it came out ok but not good enough. -.-
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PostSubject: Re: i drew again...   Fri Jan 18, 2013 6:41 pm

It looks nice. Although, if you are going to curve, curve more at the top of her than the bottom.
The neck looks a bit long/thick, so try making it shorter/thinner?

This is cute. 8.5/10 C:
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PostSubject: Re: i drew again...   Fri Jan 18, 2013 7:00 pm

The eye is a bit high up, the neck looks a bit thick, and something about the body bothers me. But I really like it! 8/10
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PostSubject: Re: i drew again...   Fri Jan 18, 2013 7:14 pm

Her hair and shirt are so cute! Nice job *u* 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: i drew again...   Fri Jan 18, 2013 10:00 pm

Its nice. 7/10

Her neck is to big for its body and also her head is kinda big for its body also.
Try making the body more curve. And make its hips little bigger than its body.
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PostSubject: Re: i drew again...   Fri Jan 18, 2013 10:37 pm

Woe omg that's cute 7/10
I'm lazy to critique but you draw alot better than I did when I was 11
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