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PostSubject: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:12 pm

ℓσνє нυятѕ~


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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:19 pm

Awesome! I wanna hear more!
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:31 pm

OMG! I think I know why! xDDD
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:41 pm

Next story tomorrow or today Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:46 pm

I want moarmoarmoar!!!

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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:56 pm

Shall I critique?

I have no clue who the characters are.. Who Tiana is.. Who anyone really is...

Your talking to much to yourself. Your making it sound like a diary. People dont expect diaries, they expect a story.

(NO OFFENSE, PLEASE, DONT TAKE THIS MY CRITIQUE TOO MUCH)

Also, I'd like you to describe the characters more. Also, I'd be better if you quit asking questions.. Even if your thinking them. Maybe just one or two questions is enough...

-Now on to the positive-

I love how you started the story.. Like "Love hurts... I thought." I like that. Nice way to begin the story and chapter.

Nice job (:
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Fri Jun 25, 2010 10:35 pm

Nice! :3 I think i know why.. xD Anyways good job :3
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:09 pm

I'm sorry to say this story doesn't catch my interest one bit...
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:46 pm

My best friend's name is Tiana,Great story!(:
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Sat Jun 26, 2010 2:03 pm

OMG Please write more i need to read it!
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Sat Jun 26, 2010 2:20 pm

Chapter 2 is out :3
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Sat Jun 26, 2010 2:39 pm

Next Chap pwease lol! aweshum girly!
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PostSubject: Re: ℓσνє нυятѕ~α ℓσνєѕтσяу   Sat Jun 26, 2010 3:02 pm

:O cant wait for more Wink
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