Primrose Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
| Subject: Tsunami - story Mon Feb 04, 2013 3:47 pm | |
| Characters: - Spoiler:
Name: Caroline Bell Age: 14 Gender: Female Personality: Nice, sweet, honest, sensible, stubborn when in a bad mood. Appearance: She has long straight honey blonde hair and beautiful light-blue eyes. Sunkissed skin and pale cheeks, brownish-blondeish eyebrows and black, long and curly eyelashes.
Name: Alexander Smith Age: 15 Gender: Male Personality: He is nice and easy to make friends with, but he often forgets about the friendship and it ends. He likes to smile in every condition, as hard as it is and is full of cheesy but funny jokes to tell. Appearance: He has wavy brown hair and dreamy brown eyes and pale skin with freckles. He has a very round and 'cute' face you could say, awkwardly tall and not very fat, but not skinny.
Name: Rachel Tailor Age: 13 1/2 Gender: Female Personality: She's nice but she must 'test' you to see if you will be a trustworthy friend or not. If she lends you something and if you don't take care of it she won't trust you. If she does something bad, she'll cry off her guilt. Appearance: Not very tall, short black hair and bangs, green asian eyes, paleish skin, small pink lips with some freckles on her cheeks and wears geeky glasses.
Name: Elliot Peace Age: 16 Gender: Male Personality: He is sensible and understands other people's pain, but on the outside he keeps a cool attitude. He is well-mannered in front of the ladies. Appearance: Blonde hair and tanned skin. Coal (black) eyes. He's not tall but not short, so he's the perfect size. He's not chubby or fat, he is in great fit but doesn't have muscles.
Name: Sarah Tailor Age: 10 Gender: Female Personality: She's shy but nice. You'll quickly become her friend without noticing. She is bubbly, sweet and creative. Appearance: She looks kinda like her sister, but her hair is dark brown and wavy. She has platinum lightblue eyes and is a little chubby. Not very tall.
Points of view (the start): - Spoiler:
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I'm going to write a story about a tsunami and survivors and stuff. I've only done the characters but I'll work on it later. By the way, y points of view it means in the start. It all happens at the same time. It is what the characters see while the tsunami is happening. Then, chapters is when they are all together. I'm also going to make a RP about this.
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Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: Tsunami - story Mon Feb 04, 2013 4:28 pm | |
| Both of your man characters are exactly the same, down to the "dreamy brown eyes". Your women, however, are great.
I'm kind of interested in seeing this. | |
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Primrose Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
| Subject: Re: Tsunami - story Mon Feb 04, 2013 4:30 pm | |
| - Ron Weasley wrote:
- Both of your man characters are exactly the same, down to the "dreamy brown eyes". Your women, however, are great.
I'm kind of interested in seeing this. Thanks. I'll go check what you mentioned and fix it. | |
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