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PostSubject: =.= Realist much?   Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:02 pm

I drew these.
I know, I usually don't draw this style, but I decided to give it a try. Be nice.
don't mind my finger:
 
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PostSubject: Re: =.= Realist much?   Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:17 pm

Keep at this! It's neat. (I'll try to be as honest yet nice at the same time. xD)
When you do your eyes, just remember that the light source should just head one direction. There seems to be many light sources. If there are that many however, the person with the eye should be squinting. The eye is also pretty large. Not that there aren't large eyes in the world, but a typical eye would have more of a pointy oval shape? (This is towards the first picture)
Honestly, I can't critique eyelashes or eyebrows, since they are all different to me~

For the second one, you may want to loosen the hair a bit, or it looks kind of bunged up together? You might want to invest in how thin hair is I suppose.
The neck is a bit too thin, try to thicken it more?
I can't really see the picture well because of the light lining.

Overall 8/10.
Oh an by the way, do you draw anime? If so, this may be why the eyes looks a bit odd maybe? Since anime eyes have large pupils/Irises/etc in general, while in real life, eyes don't take up 1/5 of your face, only 1/7 probably. Just a tip in advance I suppose~ I think the eyes on the second picture are a good size.
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PostSubject: Re: =.= Realist much?   Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:29 pm

Abstract wrote:
Keep at this! It's neat. (I'll try to be as honest yet nice at the same time. xD)
When you do your eyes, just remember that the light source should just head one direction. There seems to be many light sources. If there are that many however, the person with the eye should be squinting. The eye is also pretty large. Not that there aren't large eyes in the world, but a typical eye would have more of a pointy oval shape? (This is towards the first picture)
Honestly, I can't critique eyelashes or eyebrows, since they are all different to me~

For the second one, you may want to loosen the hair a bit, or it looks kind of bunged up together? You might want to invest in how thin hair is I suppose.
The neck is a bit too thin, try to thicken it more?
I can't really see the picture well because of the light lining.

Overall 8/10.
Oh an by the way, do you draw anime? If so, this may be why the eyes looks a bit odd maybe? Since anime eyes have large pupils/Irises/etc in general, while in real life, eyes don't take up 1/5 of your face, only 1/7 probably. Just a tip in advance I suppose~ I think the eyes on the second picture are a good size.

My phone camera is horrible, that is why there is light.
Sorry, thank you for being honest but nice! And yes, I usually draw anime or "kawaii
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