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dewey decimal system Expert Fantagian
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| Subject: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:17 pm | |
| Ehh I got bored. I don't draw digitally often soo keep that in mind... Ugh, now that I really look at her she looks extremely muscular... xD But rate/critique whatever... And there's no shading because I only did this to pass some time. Also I don't know why I resized it so small but yea . >o< | |
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| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:23 pm | |
| Its nice, 6/10. I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this? |
| | | el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:26 pm | |
| woahwoahwoahwa thAT'S GR8! i really like the colours you put in her hair and the detail you put on her shirt. my only critiques are minor, but her hand is reALLY weird. maybe try a reference for the hand next time. uwu her arms are overlapping her chest, which would be okay in some poses but this isn't one of them. other than that it's reely good woah. i give it an 8/10! | |
| | | Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:31 pm | |
| I give it a 7.5/10. You may want to curl your neck a bit, and work on head shaping. Those are all the critiques that I think weren't given, it's nice. c; | |
| | | dewey decimal system Expert Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:36 pm | |
| - Witch wrote:
- Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this? Yea. I know this sucks, haha... Big enough? | |
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| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:38 pm | |
| - Insanity. ♥ wrote:
- Witch wrote:
- Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this? Yea. I know this sucks, haha... Big enough?
Yep. It doesn't suck, but can use some work. Maybe try using DA Muro instead of MS Paint? You don't even need to have an DA to use DA Muro. I'm currently redlining it. |
| | | dewey decimal system Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2743 Join date : 2012-10-30 Age : 22 Location : pm me for tumblr/ig handles ♡
| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:42 pm | |
| - Witch wrote:
- Insanity. ♥ wrote:
- Witch wrote:
- Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this? Yea. I know this sucks, haha... Big enough?
Yep. It doesn't suck, but can use some work. Maybe try using DA Muro instead of MS Paint? You don't even need to have an DA to use DA Muro. I'm currently redlining it. I was actually going to use Sai but ehh. I dunno why I used Paint. @Abstract, what do you mean curl her neck? {I'm stupid. ;p} @8luh, which hand? The peace one? because I know both of them are weird but yeah >.< | |
| | | Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:44 pm | |
| - Insanity. ♥ wrote:
- Witch wrote:
- Insanity. ♥ wrote:
- Witch wrote:
- Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this? Yea. I know this sucks, haha... Big enough?
Yep. It doesn't suck, but can use some work. Maybe try using DA Muro instead of MS Paint? You don't even need to have an DA to use DA Muro. I'm currently redlining it. I was actually going to use Sai but ehh. I dunno why I used Paint. @Abstract, what do you mean curl her neck? {I'm stupid. ;p} @8luh, which hand? The peace one? because I know both of them are weird but yeah >.< I'm not very sure how to explain. For her body, it seem either a bit long or a bit too thick. (I think curl was an awful work for an explanation on the neck. xD) | |
| | | Harmony Senior Fantagian
Posts : 427 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 23 Location : Sharks aren't the bad guys.If some stranger entered my house with just a speedo,I would probably attack him too!
| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:45 pm | |
| This is nice,But I think the head shape needs a tad more work.Its very cute don't get me wrong,but maybe you can start to sketch than draw it.Making it more better in the process (: | |
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| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:49 pm | |
| SAI is a very good program according to my older sister, you should use it. Heck I should too but I use Photoshop. https://i.servimg.com/u/f72/17/75/80/47/redlin10.png << Sorry that my redlining and critique is crappy, I hope it isn't harsh either. |
| | | el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: digital drawing Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:55 pm | |
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