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PostSubject: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:17 pm

Ehh I got bored. I don't draw digitally often soo keep that in mind...

Ugh, now that I really look at her she looks extremely muscular... xD
But rate/critique whatever...
And there's no shading because I only did this to pass some time. Also I don't know why I resized it so small but yea . >o<
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:23 pm

Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this?
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:26 pm

woahwoahwoahwa thAT'S GR8!
i really like the colours you put in her hair and the detail you put on her shirt.
my only critiques are minor, but
her hand is reALLY weird. maybe try a reference for the hand next time. uwu
her arms are overlapping her chest, which would be okay in some poses but this isn't one of them. other than that it's reely good woah.
i give it an 8/10!
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:31 pm

I give it a 7.5/10.
You may want to curl your neck a bit, and work on head shaping.
Those are all the critiques that I think weren't given, it's nice. c;
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:36 pm

Witch wrote:
Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this?
Yea. I know this sucks, haha...
Big enough?
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:38 pm

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Witch wrote:
Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this?
Yea. I know this sucks, haha...
Big enough?
Yep. It doesn't suck, but can use some work. Maybe try using DA Muro instead of MS Paint? You don't even need to have an DA to use DA Muro.
I'm currently redlining it.
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:42 pm

Witch wrote:
Insanity. ♥ wrote:
Witch wrote:
Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this?
Yea. I know this sucks, haha...
Big enough?
Yep. It doesn't suck, but can use some work. Maybe try using DA Muro instead of MS Paint? You don't even need to have an DA to use DA Muro.
I'm currently redlining it.
I was actually going to use Sai but ehh. I dunno why I used Paint.
@Abstract, what do you mean curl her neck? {I'm stupid. ;p}
@8luh, which hand? The peace one? because I know both of them are weird but yeah >.<
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:44 pm

Insanity. ♥ wrote:
Witch wrote:
Insanity. ♥ wrote:
Witch wrote:
Its nice, 6/10.
I'd like to red line it if it's okay with you? And do you have a bigger version of this?
Yea. I know this sucks, haha...
Big enough?
Yep. It doesn't suck, but can use some work. Maybe try using DA Muro instead of MS Paint? You don't even need to have an DA to use DA Muro.
I'm currently redlining it.
I was actually going to use Sai but ehh. I dunno why I used Paint.
@Abstract, what do you mean curl her neck? {I'm stupid. ;p}
@8luh, which hand? The peace one? because I know both of them are weird but yeah >.<

I'm not very sure how to explain. For her body, it seem either a bit long or a bit too thick.
(I think curl was an awful work for an explanation on the neck. xD)
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:45 pm

This is nice,But I think the head shape needs a tad more work.Its very cute don't get me wrong,but maybe you can start to sketch than draw it.Making it more better in the process (:
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:49 pm

SAI is a very good program according to my older sister, you should use it. Heck I should too but I use Photoshop.
https://i72.servimg.com/u/f72/17/75/80/47/redlin10.png << Sorry that my redlining and critique is crappy, I hope it isn't harsh either.
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PostSubject: Re: digital drawing   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:55 pm

the peace hand!!
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