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PostSubject: Insanity's Library! ♥   Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:03 pm

moved to "~Dewey's Library~"


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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:06 am

Okiee! That'll be nice!
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:22 am

Cool, I'd like to read. I have an idea now for F.F since you said that.
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Sun Mar 03, 2013 11:16 am

I'm going to update this soon guys... Sorry I haven't been online for 2 days but I'm not going to be online as often because of personal issues so umm hope you understand...

Edit:
I have some good news, and I have some bad news. The bad news comes first, okay? Well, I deleted most of my stories from my computer a long time ago so for now I'll only have 3 stories up.
The GOOD news is that I just posted some of my newest story; "A Perfectly, Imperfect Life." Please rate this and critique if you want but DO NOT steal. I am using this for Blu's contest.
(forum staff, I hope this is not considered bumping as it is allowed in art galleries so...)
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Sun Mar 03, 2013 11:36 am

That story is really emotional and touching. :') I really like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Sun Mar 03, 2013 11:41 am

Why do you have to be so good at writing?!! Ahh they're so good (:
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:55 pm

Razz @Cherry I am not that good LOL xD But thanks!
@Fluttershy I'm glad you like it c:

Edit -
I just posted the prologue for "The Necklace", and put up Chapter 1 of "Emily"! Read, rate, critique!
Currently I'm working on "A Perfectly, Imperfect Life" in Aiden's POV
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Mon Mar 04, 2013 8:50 pm

These are really awesome! They are short but they pull you in really quickly, and if they were more pages they would be page turners Smile)

Keep it up! Ya got talent!!
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Tue Mar 05, 2013 12:09 am

wow i love your stories they're so exciting and you're overall a good writer!! but it's kind of confusing how all the writing is centered, but if that's your style, then do what you like!
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Tue Mar 05, 2013 6:43 am

Insanity. ♥ wrote:

Chapter 1


"Get the girl! Get the girl!"
That's what most of the guards were screaming before the explosion. But they weren't fast enough to catch me.
Ahh, let me explain. My name is Emily Hall, and this is my story.
It started off so innocently, so accidentally... Before I felt the rush and realized how much I liked it: living a life on the run. Hey, it ran in my blood anyways, and I was 6! All I did was steal some candy from the store, not really a big deal you know! At least I didn't kill anybody.
So where was I? Oh yeah. I was really hungry. My ma hadn't fed me in days, 'cuz she was too mad at me. And my pa couldn't feed me; he was in jail. So, I went down to the candy store and kind of took a little candy. After I walked out the door, some guy came out screaming at me to give it back or pay up. So, I ran away and took the dang candy with me, thinking, what's he gonna do? Put me in jail? Boy oh boy, as my grandma would say, I hit the head right on the nail with that one! Or maybe it's the other way around. Oh well.
Suddenly, he came after me in a car. At first I thought he was gonna run me over, so I kept runnin' and yellin' and cryin' for him to stop. He got out of the car, and said, "I'm gonna tell your mama and pop if you dont pay me right now or give me that candy, young lady." I backed away, then threw the candy at him not knowing what else to do. Before he could say or do anything else, I ran away again.
I knew that dumb ol' man was known for being a big jerk, so he'd probably tell me parents anyways even though I gave him the candy back. If I came home, my ma would flip out! I couldn't go back. I just couldn't... so I didn't. From that day on, I've been livin' in the woods and stealin' food to keep myself alive.
Fast-forward 6 years, and I end up in jail. Got caught stealin' a bag of Dorito's. Darn those tasty chips! I've only been in jail for a few months, and everyone here hates me. Don't bother askin' why, 'cuz I have no idea.
Well, nothin' all that interesting happens in jail, so I'm gonna fast-forward some more.
Fast-forward to the explosion.
A couple of inmates have been planning to plant a bomb here in the jail. I didn't really believe they would until I heard them say, "It's done. Only 5 more minutes till this place is dust." For a second, I still didn't believe it. But why would they lie about somethin' like this? So I did what anyone would do: try to escape! It wasn't even that hard, I just followed those guys to some room I didn't even know about. We were all getting ready to leave when some guards came in. I jumped out the window as fast as I could, but they came after me! Man, I thought I was going to pass out 'cuz I ran so far. Luckily, I managed to get away from them.
And that's how I ended up here... somewhere I don't even know where I am.

. There is no need for an adult to chase a 6-year-old in a car.

. A 12-year-old is not going to be sent to jail for "months" for stealing chips. Actually, I think a 12-year-old is too young to go to jail at all.

. A 12-year old cannot pick the lock on a freaking jail cell. And even if she was older than and could do it, she couldn't get out in 5 minutes.

. A 12-year-old cannot outrun an adult.

. There aren't a lot of places to hide a bomb in a jail cell.

. A 12-year-old cannot survive on their own for "6 years" by stealing snacks. Where is she sleeping? Is a little kid really that good at stealing to evade all those security cameras? What about bathing?

Those were my issues with "Emily". The other 2 are quite good, though. Keep up the good work.
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Tue Mar 05, 2013 4:24 pm

I'm probably going to spoil "Emily" for you guys because I decided to rewrite it.
I was having a lot of writer's block on this one, and I needed to write SOMETHING to put in this. I deleted a lot of my stories before (actually I never really saved them because I didn't really do anything with them) so... yeah. Plus I don't know how jail really works don't kids go to juvenile detention or something? @.@iknownothing but I just deleted it ...
Anyways like I said I'm rewriting it but it's going to be different (I mean totally different story, characters, etc.)... still have writers block so I don't know what? I'm doing "A Perfectly, Imperfect Life" FIRST because I said I would do it but I didn't...
I'm thinking of doing some kind of HISTORICAL story but that's probably not going to happen because I know nothing about history...? If I do, though, it will be about slavery and stuff. Thoughtsssssssss?
EDIT: NO. OMG. I know what I'm replacing "Emily" with. "Alice". Can you guys guess what it's going to be about? c;
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Wed Mar 06, 2013 6:19 am

Insanity. ♥ wrote:
I'm probably going to spoil "Emily" for you guys because I decided to rewrite it.
I was having a lot of writer's block on this one, and I needed to write SOMETHING to put in this. I deleted a lot of my stories before (actually I never really saved them because I didn't really do anything with them) so... yeah. Plus I don't know how jail really works don't kids go to juvenile detention or something? @.@iknownothing but I just deleted it ...
Anyways like I said I'm rewriting it but it's going to be different (I mean totally different story, characters, etc.)... still have writers block so I don't know what? I'm doing "A Perfectly, Imperfect Life" FIRST because I said I would do it but I didn't...
I'm thinking of doing some kind of HISTORICAL story but that's probably not going to happen because I know nothing about history...? If I do, though, it will be about slavery and stuff. Thoughtsssssssss?
EDIT: NO. OMG. I know what I'm replacing "Emily" with. "Alice". Can you guys guess what it's going to be about? c;

A historical story is fine, just remember to research the time period first.

Because there were no women pants in the middle ages, no iPhones in the 1940s, etc.
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PostSubject: Re: Insanity's Library! ♥   Sun Apr 21, 2013 9:02 am

I'd appreciate if a mod could lock/delete this. I want to start a new Library, my apologies but as most of you know I've had the flu for a month (still going on. I've posted about it like 3 times but of course nobody cares, so..) and I've been feeling so crappy I was going through a period where I wasn't in the mood to write or even draw. Now, I feel a little better, and I want to get back to writing and making art, but I look back and think "God I was a horrible writer." So, I'm ending these stories and making new ones which you can find in my new Library, once I make it. It will probably be called "Dewey's Library" ... creative name right? *sarcasm*
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