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|Subject: A Cage of Humans (Poem) Wed Feb 20, 2013 4:26 pm|| |
Not sure if this fits in the literature section...But it's a poem so I guess so?
Anyway, I am writing this Figurative poem for school, tell me what you think!
Critiques would be nice too.
ohyeah...and I need a better ending, and a better name, (cage of humans is what I wanted to call it at first, but I don't think that fits any more.)